My Imagination Came True

I began to think. The essence of this novel is: readers post their thoughts in the comment area, and the author connects these thoughts. Then the title fit, and my imagination came true. Hahahahahahaha. I thought it was this model. Hahahahaha, and that investment group, it was also my first time to meet it. When I downloaded the app again, I found a lot more things.

At the beginning, she was the best stepmother. It can be said that she has mastered the essence of female pornography 🙂

The plot setting is very interesting. But it feels a bit dry, I don't know how to describe this feeling.

Doesn't anyone think there's a problem? I just read Chapter 14, and I saw the heroine telling two unfamiliar men about her golden finger. Although it was described that one of the heroines trusted her, the other heroine only knew her! What kind of operation is this? I'm so confused. Let alone strangers, even people I trust, can I say whatever I want to others with my golden finger? ? I don't understand, I'm really shocked, is it my problem? I read that no one raised any objections in the comments.

The key point is that his grandparents are ungrateful, but the heroine still sees her without any complaints. Isn't that just mean? Why should others think highly of you if you are so mean? ? ?

The plot is a little unsmooth. The protagonist Goldfinger's description is not well transitioned and is a bit abrupt.

Suddenly I came across the book about making snow. . . . Many years ago, I saw Lu Caiwei's magic house. . . . Many good female authors of that era have disappeared.

First, it feels like a running account, like a record of major events at the end of a history book. Of course, this may be the author's style. Generally speaking, I don't think it is the most important problem. Second, when reading a text, you should pay attention to a starting point, a succession, a transition, and a conclusion. Let's talk about "starting" first. This article is about the background of post-disaster reconstruction. Although it is mentioned that technology has developed rapidly and culture is lacking, we as readers should at least know more than the characters in the article. In other words, you have to find a way to tell us what the situation was before the disaster, instead of what I thought was just an ordinary post-disaster article, but it turned out that there was a fantasy color before the disaster (what about the Feather Tribe and the like)? All in all, "qi" is not as good as Qi. As for "Cheng", there is absolutely no such thing! The game starts with a shabby family in Novice Village. This is a female channel routine. There is nothing to say. Then I got a part-time job and took off? It just comes together immediately without being transferred. At the beginning, a lot of great people came together to write a feeling of a grand finale. This may be the reason why many people, including myself, found it very confusing after reading it, because the procedures you should follow are not followed. After leaving the novice village, the big boss appears directly, which is very abrupt. Third, the heroine's character is divided. She accomplished nothing the way she was before. Her character was timid and timid, but suddenly she became awesome and coaxing. She acted calmly and acted like a boss. Of course, it can be attributed to cheating. You were a boss in your previous life, right. So are you the heroine in this life or in your previous life? The skills in the previous life were inexplicably acquired, and the heroine's growth was not reflected. One more thing, as a protagonist, she/he must have some characteristics or memory points, right? You can at least give some hints about the sinister nature, coldness and decisiveness (there are many other qualities)! I also don't see what qualities the heroine has that make her the heroine of this story. To sum up this point, the character design is not established and the character image is thin. You didn't give me the feeling that "the protagonist of this article can only be her". I feel that as long as there is this cheat, anyone can be the protagonist. Then the protagonist of your article is not the heroine (there is a xx cheat) but the person chosen by the cheat to become the heroine.

After reading Chapter 9, I would like to ask if there is a male protagonist? If so, Xiao Zhao (Zhao Yang) is pretty good. Stop writing about cold-faced men. He's quite humble.

My mother, how can you recommend female novels to me?

The writing and style were very attractive to me, but the author's transition was too sudden. I didn't notice the change of perspective several times, and I was confused when I read it. I went back and read it again and realized that there was no hint before the transition or the plot, it was quite sudden.

I must be the first post. I have opened a new book. Spread flowers and leave footprints.

When playing with the system, it is recommended to write down the number of points to be earned in detail instead of just writing a few points like +0.01. You can be lazy, but you have to write down how much you added today, how much you added tomorrow, or how much you added over a period of time. Otherwise, you won't feel any sense of satisfaction at all. It feels like adding points is inexplicable. What can you tell by just looking at the panel? I suggest you write more about the psychological activities of the heroine. The plot is fine but too bland. I haven't watched it since it was released, so that's it, come on

The preface didn't match the postscript, which made me frown and confused. I thought the story should be interesting!

Why did you finish this book so quickly? When will you publish a new one?

I feel that the setting of this article is quite novel, but I don't know why it looks a bit confusing. Maybe I'm too stupid and haven't figured it out in some places.

The writing is very good, the plot setting is also good, the author's skills are really good, but the plot content is old-fashioned, even if the writing style is attractive, I can't read it, the author can add something fresh.

It feels like the jump is too big and a bit messy 😐

New articles from squatting... I read them every month but why haven't I seen them yet_(:з)∠)_

Damn, someone copied your Ruohua's hourly live broadcast room

Reading the Book of Heaven, there is no logic whatsoever in rambling from east to west.

When will the author release a new book?

It's the article "Are you afraid of marrying me, Mr. Red Ghost?" The villain boss in Quick Time is my treasure.