Second Dimension: the Goal Is to Heal the Master

Let me tell you here, I don't know if the writing is good or not, because I saw that Midoriya was arranged to be the protagonist's good friend. I just stopped watching it. Anyway, for many people, any plot in which Midoriya ends well is highly toxic. There are so many excellent male supporting characters in the second dimension, why write such a garbage scumbag? He still appears as a positive male supporting character.

I feel that the plot is a bit messy, with a length of fifty chapters, and now I have three chapters on Madoka, One Piece, and JOJO; at school, Qingyin, Harmono, passers-by need to participate, and there is Lala, Lonely Rock when I go out; and there is also Mashiro Nanami; although it is okay to have no main line in daily life, so much content must have a focus, and now it is mixed here and there, and it is easy to read confusingly.

Author, please add Hoshino Ai, thank you 🙂 I advise you not to be ignorant of praise, don't force me to kneel down and beg you.

Author, even if you travel through the second dimension, don't make it look like the protagonist has become a Japanese eunuch protagonist, okay? Which man can trust the all-white Zhenbai? Author, can you handle it? As a man, it is normal for him to be aggressive when seeing Mashiro who is completely white. If he is not strong, he is considered a good person. He has to act like a Japanese eunuch-type protagonist.

I think let it go. I helped my idol deliver a baby, and was killed by his idol's fanatic fans because of it. I didn't complain at all. I really can't appreciate this kind of plot? Is this the so-called three views following the five senses?

I didn't dare to read this book I saw on Daodu

I couldn't stand it after reading four chapters of this thing. It's really outrageous. It's so outrageous. I'm Shennong, and this book is simply poisonous.

The content is too much and too dense. Writing a novel, drawing two comics, and getting along with the characters at the same time is not the way to go. No matter how much time you have, you can't do it. There are a lot of characters coming out of the factory now, and on average each character is not outstanding. Midoriya has appeared more than other female characters in the past. This is not popular with most readers. People who can accept your book will also miss some. My suggestion is to reduce Midoriya's appearance rate and let Kasumigaoka Shiu serve as a bridge with the novel publisher.

I looked at the synopsis and it seems that it is a depression series. It would be a pity not to have been shot 32 times in the back and the cause of death was suicide.

Lu Lun said goodbye. I also admire the author's courage and wish the author success.

It's very boring for this kind of protagonist to be a top rich second generation and still be engaged in creation.

It feels like a two-dimensional comprehensive comic and a daily short article five or six years ago. Basically, I live in Japan, my family is very cool, but I have to live alone, I start doing business, and then I meet a girl, and she throws herself into her arms. The basic framework is probably like this. Five or six years ago there were quite a few such novels, but now there are indeed fewer. To be honest, the most taboo thing about this kind of novel is that it is pretentious and awkward. The author still has a lot of upper body space, come on.

I think it's okay. 😁Have you never seen the three views explode? Starting from the ultimate guy, he goes completely crazy. After reading it, you will think this is good. But let's get rid of the spring stuff. The sense of presence is too low. You don't date any heroines? Light tone and solitude are fun. And hurry up and finish those creations. Look at me jojo standing

Here's a suggestion: Don't introduce too many different plots in a short period of time. Otherwise, it will appear that the protagonist is doing this and that while doing other things, and they all seem very important and cannot be pushed away. The time is obviously very crowded, but the reality is ignored and they are forcibly connected together. It looks very tiring (when reading).

The more I look at it, I feel like something is wrong? When I saw Lun Ye, I fucking remembered it. My dear, this setting of yours made me dream back to a few years ago. There are several two-dimensional books with this background.

Brothers, I have recently become addicted to playing Star Dome and have a bold idea

I feel like the author's outline is not clear. There are things here and there. The content is too jumpy and incoherent. Most importantly, it is too watery. It has ten chapters and 50,000 words and I finished it in less than three minutes. I feel like I have read it, but I don't seem to have read it at all. It is not clear at all 😅

To be honest, the text is not well written, and the daily life is average. The plot construction gives me the feeling of writing whatever comes to mind. It's the same as not watching it, but I can still watch it, but it doesn't make sense, so I won't watch it.

I want to ask if this book is a harem? If it's a harem, the protagonist doesn't have any outstanding abilities, and it feels a bit too ordinary. Will there be a cheat for the protagonist later? Or just an ordinary copywriter? Also, when I watched Pet Girls before, I felt that Mashiro Shonana was pulled down from the altar by Sorata Kanda because of his pathetic jealousy. There are all geniuses in Sakurasou who are not understood by the world. Only Kanda Sorata is an ordinary person. After the arrival of Wakana Mashiro, he was even more shocked. After that, a series of operations successfully transformed a world-class painter into an ordinary painter who can no longer draw good works. The reason for doing this is simply because he is afraid that he is not worthy of Mashiro and his poor self-esteem. The author hopes Mashiro can have a good ending!

There is something wrong, my friend Midori, how dare you write this?

It's really a mess with so many characters crammed together.

The rest of this book is okay, except that the main character is a eunuch, and I can't accept that there are so many women who won't touch any of them.

He is the most geeky male protagonist I have ever seen in the daily life genre. He has a very Assashi-like character, and I can't complain about the inexplicable and inexplicable genius who suddenly becomes a kitchen killer.

Can you show the plot of Qingyin and the ending on the same stage? Like Bang Bang's double r

Emmmm, for now, for me who likes Qingyin, except for the previous plot where I was forced to join the service club instead of the Qingyin club, everything else is pretty good. I don't know about the others. The author's description of the Qingyin girl is pretty good, and the plot is okay.

My sister, I really miss the anime that got me into trouble. I don't know if anyone knows of novels written about my sister. I can recommend them to the comprehensive manga single world.

He didn't come from the abyss and still said it was a healing system?

The author's writing skills are a bit poor, and I feel that the comic plot he wrote has no motivation to attract people to understand the comic plot. If the plot of the novel is not well written, it will actually be more interesting to just arrange NPC to emphasize how good the writing is.

I gave up, I really couldn't stand the eunuch protagonist.