Xianwu: Starting from Being a Refugee

The Mo Yu paragraph at the beginning put me off. Are people who can afford such things ordinary people? Are you really worthy of your life if you dare to take it?

At the beginning, he was beaten like a dog and asked for help. They wanted to accept him as a disciple but shamelessly pretended that he wanted to become an immortal. Then he started to ask others how to become an immortal. You should have some face. If it weren't for the protagonist, he would have been thrown out by others. If you don't want to be a disciple, just say it early. Wait until others bathe and change your clothes before saying that you don't want to be a disciple. It's disgusting.

It looks so awkward. He looks immature. He doesn't look like a fierce man who fights for the human race until he blows himself up.

We've all traveled through time, and there's a golden finger, and that's the result

When I first opened the book, the name didn't sound right. To be honest, I was a little discouraged because there were quite a few books written with pig's trotters names. Many of them were rejected because I didn't even read them, so I couldn't count them. Personally, I feel like the author can't even think about the "soul" pig's trotters name for a book. How can he calm down and write a book? Especially those pig's trotters with spoof names will make him vomit when he sees them. Personally, I think the name Zhang Qi is somewhat unpleasant, if the author didn't design a deep meaning for the name. Or you can change it to a homophone like Zhang Qi. ——The above represents my personal opinion. Don't ask where the flying flowers will go. It will be cold if they stay, and they will be hurt if they fall. Injured in the whereabouts.

[Book fat] [Can be slaughtered] [Please pursue reading] [Yours sincerely]

This is my first time writing, please read~

Will the update be stable?

Why are you copying Wangyue? It all depends on allusions. You wouldn't be so outrageous if you copied others.

It looks ridiculous. With the plug-in, I can't even defeat a small soldier. It's too useless. Is it because the big scholar is more powerful than the braggadocio?

Author, where does the protagonist take revenge?

The protagonist's status should not improve, he should remain a refugee, and Goldfinger is too boring and rubbish. Then the protagonist's character should not be so weak, and the plot is not exciting enough. He starts from the identity of a big-muscled gangster and kills everywhere. From a dry well, he kills the Nantianmen, all the way to the Jade Emperor's throne, slaughtering all the Buddhas in the sky. Isn't it delicious? 😁, my personal opinion may not be correct.

After helping the Han family and his son this time, don't write like this later. Since the setting is that the God of War who swallows the stars has traveled through time, not to mention decisive killing, it is also the result of Wan Keliu. On the contrary, everyone in the book wants to bully him.

Isn't this a bit more refined?