People in the Holy Land: This Holy Son Is Super Lucky

The author writes well, keep up the good work! !

To be honest, swearing is meaningless. This thing is really out of character.

I can't say that I know a little bit about the background of Saint Seiya, I can only say that I know nothing about it, and all kinds of nonsense settings come out of my mouth.

These days, I started writing about waste materials again.

This book has 62 chapters, which seems like a lot; in fact, a clear plot can be written in 20 chapters, but it keeps talking nonsense. I don't know if the author has failed to pass the test since he was in elementary school. Has he ever been scolded by his Chinese teacher? The most important thing is that the author obviously did not write a novel, but completely copied the chat between several people into the book without any modification. There is a big difference in lyrics and sentences between daily conversations and serious novels. For example, if you read a movie or TV script as a novel, can the lines of a script be read the same as the paragraphs of a novel?

Big brain, pretty good ideas. But it was obviously written by a child, and he is still a two-dimensional nerd. There is no normal dialogue, and he is familiar with everyone. He just fights the enemies, and the battle descriptions are just about skills.

This book is useless. After reading so many Saint Seiya fanfics, this one gave me the feeling that there is no outline, the protagonist setting is confusing, and there is no logic to the subsequent plot.

Don't fall into the trap. This book is written in six chapters about a trivial matter. It takes five or six chapters to bring Pianpian to life in three or five sentences, but the characters are not well portrayed.

It's so embarrassing to watch that the cancer keeps coming. It's not about whether you've graduated from elementary school or not. There are so many typos that it's hard to watch.

Saint Clothes Comes to Gundam

1 I can't stand it anymore. From the next 120 chapters onwards, Che Zuluo talks over and over again.

Damn it, you can really pull off a horse. How can Athena, a virgin goddess, recognize someone else as her son?

Let me tell you a few words, I haven't seen Saint Seiya. I have read several novels. I don't really care about the setting of the original work. The author writes well, keep up the good work. Nowadays, what I read when reading novels is that they are interesting, imaginative, and comfortable. Like the author and work hard! Come on!

The writing is too cumbersome and the language is not concise enough, so it seems very clumsy.

The sentences are really giving me a headache

The author has a word to say, and there is still more to say.

I don't understand the style of this book. You would say it is a light and funny daily novel, but I think the author didn't write it very funny, and only wrote a lot of embarrassing dialogue and swear words. And there are a lot of typos. The author probably uses the voice input method. A large number of typos are interspersed with awkward dialogues and dramatic narrations, making people sigh: This should be an Internet novice book from 20 years ago.

To be honest, has the star map as a plug-in been forgotten? With such a low attendance rate and having watched so much, I can say that there is a lot of nonsense, but it can be streamlined by at least two-thirds.

What's going on? Why has the update been stopped?

How embarrassing! Your "and" is so annoying. The narrative is also a bit long-winded. Well, come on