I’m Really Here to Keep the Peace

I have to criticize the author's inaccurate description of the combat of mechanized units at the company and platoon levels. In reality, any commander who has received even a little formal military training would never allow tanks to conduct assaults without infantry support, especially if the enemy has some anti-tank capabilities, and even more so if it is urban warfare.

This is a legitimate military contracting company. All those other fabricated stories about military contracting companies whose bosses are like mercenary leaders—bah! They're not even as good as mercenary leaders who can personally take to the streets like street thugs. This is war, not street fighting!

From my current perspective, I personally feel that the timing was poor; 1970... In this in-between situation, I simply can't empathize with it.

It's too niche; it's completely self-entertaining. What were they thinking?

Author, should you consider changing your category? This one's really unpopular right now. There are practically no books in this category on Sanjiang Literature City, and few people are writing or reading it. Based on the content, submitting it to the History category would be better than this.

After reading a dozen or so chapters, I was shocked by the protagonist's intelligence. Instead of focusing on evacuating Yara, he was preoccupied with auctioning off boarding passes, completely exposing their own situation. And yet, the protagonist escaped unscathed. This plot is utterly boring and meaningless. Add to that the protagonist's frivolous behavior, and it's enough to make me want to quit.

The one about super newbies is still better.

The author should just write another multiverse novel; this one is half-dead.

Open a model aircraft factory and make radio-controlled self-destructing mini-planes, using pulse detonation engines—they fly fast and are cheap to manufacture. Once computers develop further, then move into the drone industry. Start by selling anti-radar drones like the Israeli Harpy, then move on to GPS-guided Iranian Witness-134 self-destructing mini-motorcycles.

This is too childish. The author just let himself go while writing. If he loves praising Su Lie so much, why not write a background story for Su Lie? On the battlefield, the primary objective is not to kill mercenaries, but rather to protect their reputation and prevent them from silencing them. Everything else is pretty good.