During Those Years When I Was Fishing in Zhenwu Division

While trying to catch fish, he always wants to be the best; There is a way to make money, but he does not leave the Zhenwu Division despite the danger; After being in danger several times, he can't find a way to quickly improve his strength, but he is still leisurely; If various self-contradictions are not dealt with, it is easy for people to lose patience. In addition, the character in the book calls his subordinates many times, please change it, it looks too awkward!

If the author does not improve the superficial strength of the protagonist, it is time to abandon the book. I am speechless at the end. Do you understand what the world of high martial arts is? Without strength or background, you may die casually on the road. Not to mention that you occupy a high position and die faster than anyone else. The more you read, the more uncomfortable you are. A small favor can send away a group of people who are stronger than you. Hahaha, if a society ruled by law has no ability, who will hang you?

I came here to see Moyu. The main character is always trying to kill himself.

It is completely unnecessary for the male protagonist to cover his cultivation so tightly. It will only make people look down upon and cause trouble for countless people. If he shows his cultivation properly, he can avoid a lot of things. If he really wants to stick to it, he should not be promoted or be in the limelight.

The more I watch, the more uninteresting it becomes. The protagonist grows up too slowly. The plot is too long-winded. The drug-addicted setting is really interesting. Updates should be made once a day. I want to skip the plot and see the later stages. The result is still the same as the early stage. . .

He obviously has the golden finger of immortality, but he insists on wandering around, and every time he goes wandering, he accidentally overturns his car and barely escapes. He doesn't take advantage of the best advantage to get up and take medicine to upgrade. He insists on killing people and robbing things by leapfrogging. He really has no skills at all and is on the verge of being exposed every time.

Chapter 2 to Chapter 91 are the breakthroughs from the beginning of physical training to the middle of physical training. The cheats of this book are quite interesting, but other books of the same type have grasped the fun points early. And this book is obviously a hard suppression. I don't want to push the main line, but I can only write about half of the protagonist's daily work. Generally speaking, it is a traditional upgrade article with fresh golden fingers, or a slow-burning one.

To improve your cultivation level, why do you do so many miscellaneous martial arts all day long? There are too many martial arts. Do you want to be omnipotent? It's too much for the male protagonist to hide his cultivation. Do you want to hide it to the first level, or practice in public? He is in a high position but his cultivation level is astonishingly low. He is as good as the forest. I don't know how many people are unhappy with it. There should be countless people watching every move. Why are you so stubborn?

The only advantage of becoming a Zhenwu Si is fishing, and fishing with a group of colleagues. Occasionally make some extra money, but don't expect meritorious service and promotion. To join the Zhenwu Division, the requirements for obtaining the internal martial arts and martial arts are extremely high. If you don't fish for it, you will choose a life full of dangers. I don't know why the author built such a Zhenwusi. Does it have many effects on the protagonist? It also surpasses the protagonist's level of cultivation. I feel that this is not a fantasy novel, nor a fairy tale novel, but a pure ancient style urban daily novel.

I have always been too lazy to comment, but the more I read recently, the more I feel uncomfortable. At first, I thought that being an official is the way to slay demons, and then I am a little more cautious, and I feel that I am too much. Later, I at least worked a little, even though I was a little greedy, maybe the status quo cannot be changed, and now why is it so small?

As promised, Gou 🙄 is either seeking death or on the way to death.

The stronger the body, the greater the cost of obtaining attribute points. Why not add the attribute points obtained when the cultivation level is low to the Danfang martial arts, and wait until the cost is high?

Doesn't the setting of Tiandao Jade consume your lifespan when you use it? How about using Tiandao Jade by the enemies you encounter in the later stage is the same as playing games?

I have read nearly two hundred chapters and am still following it. There are two issues that are very embarrassing. Ordinary crossbows can actually threaten the warrior setting. Are you serious? ? ? The protagonist lives forever. To improve his strength, can't he find some evil techniques that deplete his lifespan?

Upgrade! ! ! How can you use so many high-level martial arts for a broken eighth-level person?

What kind of monthly vote do you want to vote for? You've been waterlogged for a week. You don't deserve it.

Let's see if there are many female protagonists in the back. I'll abandon the book if it's about abstinence.

You should be at ease. Alas, you are immortal, but you are not immortal. You say you are going to live a good life, but in the end you are stuck all the way. . .

I guess the author of the comment won't read it either. It depends on how long you can get it,

To be honest, the book is a good book. I have almost finished reading it. The content attracts me and the writing is not bad, but! I have to complain as much as I should. There are still a lot of poisonous points. The first thing is the broken crossbow. You wrote it before. You think you are not afraid of sniper rifles in the Copperskin Realm. But a crossbow can threaten the Yuyue Realm. What kind of logic? There is also a crossbow. People in martial arts have gone to other countries. Author, how much water has gone into your brain to come up with this! Other countries also ban crossbows. Do all warriors have to row boats and go to sea? I am really shocked. Even if you say that in order to prevent the people from rebelling, you ban bows and crossbows, it is more logical than saying that warriors are afraid of bows and crossbows. Secondly, why do you frown every time it overflows? It's okay once or twice. It's like this every time. Why don't we spend money to read a book together? It's just water! If you don't change it, you just paste and copy it every day. You also kill the boy from the Luo family, kill people, disguise yourself as a guard and run around Tai'an City to meet the person who is looking for him and then attack him. It is really a trick thought up by a brain hemorrhage. Any normal person would kill himself. Young Master, you still dare to walk around Tai'an City so arrogantly, the Luo family just believes it, you just give the Luo family wisdom, and write randomly, including the section about killing the Minister of Etiquette, you also wrote it blindly, disguised yourself as a guard and a concubine, and deliberately got discovered. Then kill the minister and his son, and then kill the guard who messed with the concubine, take away the body, and leave directly. Once others investigate, it will be obvious that the guard was found guilty of murder, silenced and ran away. When you are ready, you go to disguise yourself as the minister and let the guard run away. Then you go to kill people. The guard was caught within a day. It is not that you forced your wits. Anyone who comes to investigate the case can see the problem. Alas! There are still many shortcomings in the book, and I am too lazy to complain about it, but overall the flaws are not hidden, and I can persist in reading it. If these problems can be improved, the book can be better. Now I have seven or eight monthly votes. Should I vote for your book or your new book?

I'm really speechless =_=, Pig's Knuckles will never learn a lesson. I know that the woman from the Space Tiandao Jade has the ability to avoid death, but she is not prepared at all. It disgusts me and makes me want to give up the book. There is also the setting of adding points to the system. Suppressing pig's feet for the sake of suppression is a bit brainless. What is the use of alchemy? Tonics can be added, but elixirs cannot be used, especially the dragon's blood. I don't know what the author thinks. It is a first-level and second-level monster. You told me that the points obtained by taking dragon's blood are the same as taking tonics. One point, what are you doing? What a noob setting.

I've read so many chapters, and it's only been a few months since I reached 200. The time span for you, an immortal, is too slow. How many chapters do you want to write, author? What a waste of time and money. . . . . .

It is a relatively cliche novel. For example, when the protagonist was promoted to captain, I knew that he must be in the hands of Wei Lianyi. He still made such a big name in 8 games. After switching to a big family like the Wu family, the Wu family will go bankrupt if others win a few games. For example, the protagonist's overwhelming victory means he has insight into people's hearts and feels that they must have confidence. Then most of the people who were killed by monsters before were fake? Anyway, all kinds of double standards

It's amazing. You guys actually finished this book. I was halfway through it when I realized it was a studio novel. I admire it.

The early story plot is a bit interesting, but after Chapter 150, it falls into a cycle of making money, taking drugs, leveling up, killing monsters, and making money. The main story has no main line, so it's only as long as it's written.

Looking at this posture, 99% of the protagonist is the reincarnation. The following four great beasts help him become the Martial Emperor, restore the reincarnation realm skills, and directly destroy everything. The finale

The book is a good book, and the story framework is okay, but the bugs are a bit big. Pig's trotters rely on tonics to accumulate points. As soon as the realm is improved, the tonics will lose their effects. Pig's trotters will not get stuck in bugs. Do you accumulate dozens or hundreds of points before improving the realm? Besides, it doesn't seem to have much to do with the longevity golden finger of the pig's trotter. It seems that this golden finger is a bit useless. It is better to replace it with tonics. However, the tonics in each realm must be obtained at the cost of lifespan, so that the longevity golden finger can exert its effect.

I thought the ending would be that the protagonist is the powerful person who died before and then regains his cultivation level. This is the end of the book 😄. I guessed wrong.

The author's later period is too short😜

The ending is full of flowers, very well written.