After Becoming an Immortal, I Don’t Want to Be a Big Shot Anymore

I am the author's younger brother. From today on, I will write under this account. I hope everyone will support me. Read more and vote more, don't let him look down on me

I deleted the post by mistake before, please repost it. I have seen many comments comparing my book with other books. Let me just say this separately. I have also read that book and it is better than mine. There is nothing I cannot admit. But it is unreasonable to completely deny my book. Let me tell you why. 1. I want to write about the uncle in another world, and I also hope that the protagonist will be involved. It stands to reason that a person who has experienced many lives and is a big boss will become an immortal. His experience and knowledge are very likely to be numb and indifferent. It is unreasonable to describe an immortal in the city in this way. For me, who has limited skills, it will collapse, so I added the setting of memory sealing and forgetting. He only remembers a small part of the reincarnation, lowering his status and qualifications, which has disadvantages, but there is a lot of room for follow-up, and the pretense of being a big boss will appear in the future. 2. The settings are completely different. I added the settings of six major cracks. Abandoning the boss's realistic description (actually I won't), this is the part that is greater than the setting of the immortal, and it progresses in this way. 3. Pretend, no matter how you write pretense, some people will find it embarrassing. This is normal, it's just a matter of how much. As I get older, sometimes I feel a little embarrassed when reading certain passages in famous books. It's like a joke, everyone laughs differently. What's more, I have little skill. 4. Writing like this may indeed result in poor results. But at least I tried. Writing a book can never be accomplished overnight. (Don't give an example, I'm blind haha) 5. When reading a book, is it more reasonable for the protagonist to forget that he is the boss and ignore most of the characters?

It feels very similar to having a book. In addition, this kind of protagonist should not be very likable now. What people like nowadays is one who is low-key and does not show off.

The protagonist is okay, but the protagonist's friend is a bit poisonous, greedy, loves to show off, and wants to kidnap the protagonist morally

I just saw your book,,, why did I cut it again?

Luckily I didn't watch it. . I knew it

After reading it, I feel that the writing style is good, but I don't understand a few aspects. Is Zhao Ming really naive? I feel that people don't take the initiative to ask for something. The protagonist will give it to him if he wants it. And the protagonist's information is also very confusing. The signatures on the mental hospital are all Zhao Qingping. He usually calls himself Qingping Sword Fairy, right? The official only knows that he calls himself the Sword Immortal? And the mental patient does have extraordinary abilities. Should we consider the truth of what he said before? Then the protagonist of this book wanted to live a peaceful life, but there was another chapter. When others were discussing Qingping Sword Immortal, the protagonist wanted to admit his psychological activities directly, but gave up because it felt meaningless. It felt a bit out of character. Generally speaking, the protagonist gave me the impression that he was a cool person but wanted to find a chance to show off. The idea is similar to that of the next door, so there will always be a bully like me. I hope the author can write better and better.

The beginning is like a fairy who just wants to lie down, and the setting of the alien is like an anime, a bit like X-Men. The writing is also good, concise and smooth, and it is worth reading.

Wait and see until it is released 😜

My suggestion is that if you don't have any new ideas, you can write them in the mold of a great villain. Many great writers will also write books that change the old story without changing the medicine. You should first write a book to find your status and then think about innovation.