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Well, not bad, a very starting-point protagonist, pure trash
I have some thoughts after reading Chapter 3. The first point is that I feel that the starting point is too low, even if I have been on the bench for thousands of years, I can have some style. The author handles this setting very well, there is nothing that can be "wrong". If the setting is set too low, it looks a bit embarrassing. After all, personality and luck can determine career. You can use Qiao Yifan as a seesaw. A similar character may not be so weak, but rather stable, like water, neither fighting nor fighting. Then, without Qiao Yifan's luck, he did not meet Bole, until later this "little brother" beside him accidentally awakened the heart deep in the protagonist's heart... Second point, according to this kind of story development and the structure of the world view, I actually feel that it is easier to move the timeline to the end of the second season of the World Championship (that is, the end of the eleventh domestic season) and write it with newcomers. After all, Zhang Jiale's group has basically retired, and the golden generation should also be taking over. This kind of background is easier to write, because the same character is the most difficult to write, and it is completely impossible to reproduce the character of the original work. However, in the late career, the operation is different. The third point is that the ending of the original work is actually very open, and there are a lot of settings that can be continued. In terms of clubs, for example, Misty Rain can be reformed, Thunder has the greatest room for growth, Imperial Wind counterattacks, and 301's reform is successful (the end of the original book is actually already changing, and Imperial Wind is also changing). I personally think these three are actually the best ones to continue, Excellent Era still needs to continue to settle for a while. In terms of competition, why do I suggest writing S2 (World Championship Season 2)? ! This is because in terms of setting, the World Championship can be completely waterloo. It will be carried out with the theme of the National Regional World Championship and the failure of two seasons. Revitalizing the National Region is a very good topic. After all, the original work has already written the national uniform in detail. The fourth point to add, combined with the above, is actually the most perfect thing is to start writing in s3. The first season of the World Championship was an invitational tournament, which was equivalent to an all-star exhibition match. The second season of the World Championship was transformed into a club... The above is a personal opinion.
Some thoughts on the extra episode of "The Past". Only a personal opinion, not universal. In fact, the author's writing style is smooth and natural, his ideas are clear, and the readability is quite high. The only shortcoming, personally, is that the goal is unclear. The reason why I call the memoirs of "The Past Sui Feng" are extras is because these memoirs are mixed in too frequently, which seriously affects the normal main line process. This way of writing in the form of memories cannot be said to be bad. I think it still depends on what form it appears in to achieve the best effect and achieve the desired goal. This kind of memoir-like interlude actually uses the protagonist on the surface as the starting point, and leads to the events of the protagonist through memories or communication with other people. If we assume that Ye Qiu faded out of the public eye after his retirement and did not come back, it would be better to discuss Ye Qiu's career, his love and dedication to games through the protagonist's vision and the supplement of supporting characters. This way of writing is better. I recommend a relatively representative TV series "Dear Enemy", but I won't go into details. Secondly, when writing about the protagonist in the form of memories, it is best to communicate it through the vision of other supporting characters. The effect is much worse if the protagonist's vision is used to recall. The starting point of the protagonist is still too low. If it were a little higher, he would have a good relationship with the starting players of each team. These people would intentionally or unintentionally see the protagonist's game, and then fall into memories, which would be more smooth and natural. Either you have a good relationship, so I pay attention to you; or you have the ability to threaten, so I pay attention to you. Otherwise, the protagonist's performance is mediocre and has no outstanding abilities, attracting the attention of major teams. This would appear to be too sudden, too deliberate, and unnatural. The above is my personal opinion.
I am already looking forward to the World Invitational Tournament between Yang Hui and Wang Jiexi to give foreign friends a taste of Magic Doubles.
I remember that in the novel, Zhao Yang was very sad about Fang Rui playing his qigong master into the most wretched qigong master in Glory. This might be the driving force behind Zhao Yang's comeback.
This role gives me a cp-like feeling. I feel like I can compete with anyone, but it doesn't feel too much. Don't make it an official role. It's good to just stick to this rhythm!
Lao Yang finally stole the show and burst into tears 😭
There is a bug! The protagonist is set to be proficient in all professions and can make textbook-like response operations in various situations. It cannot be just a rotation. It is more than enough to be a starter.
Building a team from scratch is too difficult to write about, and not many people are willing to read it.
Well written, I voted for two months, don't give up
Come on, I hope the author sticks to his original intention
Support the author, it's super nice. I haven't seen a book like this in a long time. It doesn't deviate from the original work, so read it first to show your respect. This book has great potential.
Thoughts. I think competition is cruel. As long as there is a winner, there must be a loser. The reason why the original work is so memorable is that it portrays all these aspects. I think the role of Mu Chengen is quite realistic. There was no opportunity before, but now that there is an opportunity, it must be grasped, but the upper limit is too low, which is the reality. This is not a prejudice, this happens in many similar e-sports novels. A character with a low upper limit of "talent", no matter what the purpose is, will eventually become a champion with the protagonist. In this way, "compassion" may be comforted, but in reality it is very empty. Still the same, the starting point of this character is too low, so the subsequent rebound is not strong enough. You may be able to adapt to the "promotional competition", but it will be very difficult after promotion. From here, I felt a small shortcoming of the author. The characters were written a bit conservatively, and I might be afraid that they would collapse later. Actually, it doesn't have to be like this. According to the role of each character, more important characters can have more "talent" points and add some upper limits. For balance, some shortcomings can be appropriately added in the middle, so that the personality can be highlighted.
Past Events Sui Feng is also very well written.
A bit like Naruto, I recall it every day
It's been a long time since I've seen a full-time novel with this kind of setting. The main reason is that the protagonist has a lot of room for improvement. It's not like some novels that just start with a blank slate. It's not interesting. I hope the author's writing will get better and better.
The writing is indeed beautiful, keep it up.
Why is there no chapter today?
Why do you feel like you want the rhythm of a eunuch?
Bless the author and the new book. When the new book comes out, I will continue to follow it.
The author of "Full-time Master: Fighting for Glory with Life" comes to visit, I hope you will come back for a return visit (Chi v Chi)
Come on, come on, newcomers can join in with ease, the popularity is a bit sluggish.
Are there any more updates?😭😭😭
I'm back with a chapter-a-day subscription.
I have been automatically subscribing, and today I saw that it was completed 😠
Are there any good full-time doujins?