I Created a Super Forbidden Place

Please, author, please change it a little. The protagonist is developing towards the lord of taboos and the most dangerous thing. Isn't it strange that you, a dangerous creature, keep running into the city? Don't move after buying the coffin. The world is so dangerous, why are you rushing to put it on the shelves and cooperating with the authorities just because you are afraid that people will not recognize you? If you have reached the pinnacle of cultivation and become an immortal, no matter how much you toss people, they will not be able to control you. You don't have any skills. You can level up just by gathering evil objects. How cool is it to just sit back and wait for the level up? So take a break after moving, you are a corpse. The people who come here are probably the kind of readers who are waiting for their homes to be upgraded. No one will read your adventure stream about upgrading your base, right?

I couldn't watch it since chapter 15. The author can take a look at the difference between the front and the back

I can only say that I am too young, and my writing skills are too young. The previous writing was okay, but as soon as the wooden plot came out, the quality of this book plummeted, and I felt that it was inferior.

Don't you want to create your own forbidden area? Why write it as an adventure? With a weird background, the protagonist becomes a charlatan when he enters the city. Shouldn't he kill decisively? How can you be the lord of a forbidden area?

I also feel that the first part was okay, but after entering the city, the protagonist has a low IQ from beginning to end. If you want to write a weird story, you shouldn't write this kind of protagonist. It's boring.

Isn't the protagonist's method of cultivation to lie down in a feng shui treasured place? Why are you wandering around? It doesn't matter if the protagonist is strong, the key is that the protagonist is a weakling!

The subject matter is good, but if the protagonist is written as a carefree character, it will seriously lose points. To put it bluntly, in such a weird world, this is a stupid guy who can't survive more than 3 chapters normally.

Where is the forbidden area? Even on the road, the road is too long

It's this kind of alien body again, but the mind is human. If someone is not from my race, their mind must be different. I'm really speechless.

Update quickly

Just kill the system, it will be fine, otherwise there will be less drama and the two protagonists will look uncomfortable.

Not very good, just keep it for now and see what happens next

Well written, please update soon! The main character's character should not be too jumpy, but should have depth!

The front is okay, but the more you look at the back, the more and more brainless the villain is, and the teammates are brainless◐▂◐

Turned into a corpse, but turned out to be a paper man who can still move... It's poisonous. Isn't this selling dog meat over sheep's heads?

Daily poison introduction💀