By Stealing Luck, I Can Superimpose My Destiny Infinitely

First of all, the writing is good, but there are many problems. There is a problem with the first worldview. The original writing is a bit illusory, but it also gives hints of the truth. The second question is too big, can you just borrow your fate? Just borrow it? There is no consumption at all. You can even use some time power to exchange it. How do you write this later? How about playing with two white palms that make you almost invincible? What other gods, demons, and scholars are upgraded too casually so that you can't write about the charm of having these at the same time? Why do you want him to lower the standard of the book? Thirdly, there are big problems with the main plot. There are over 200 chapters, including the underworld, the human world, cultivating immortals, and fighting for hegemony. You have failed to give readers any knowledge of the novel. My brain hurts when I read the main plot of this novel. The fourth element is that there are enough elements (the protagonist) that you can hardly control. Plus Blue Star and the timeline, I didn't even dare to read this chapter. Don't you know this poison? Everyone else has a huge worldview and the author can't control it. You are the protagonist. The elements are huge and you can't control them. There is no one else. Do all professions need to be touched in the later stage? To be honest, the writing is good and the worldview is not bad (Timeline Blue Star is a stretch. You just write a god and run away and you fight for hegemony. Isn't it good for novels? Why disband? It's a suicide.) In the early stage of the fifth period, I kept running around and suddenly switched to the struggle for hegemony. This should be the main line. What is the main line? Everything in your work revolves around him. You are a newcomer and you want to develop multiple elements and multiple main lines? What's more, this is a novel. I have never seen a novel with multiple main lines and multiple key points in all the years of reading. It is a good book with many elements that revolve around one key point. It has priorities.

There is no sense of immersion. I am just an ordinary person, and the protagonist is a rich second generation who plays until his kidneys are weak_(:з∠)_

The protagonist is neither human nor ghost, neither fairy nor god, neither demon nor Buddha... In less than a year, I want to break through several levels. It is really amazing! The protagonist is like a hodgepodge, and he cultivates too quickly. He is not good-looking and has a bad character. He is like a cannon fodder supporting role with not much to look at. He might as well be Yi Changqing as the protagonist!

It's too messy and everything can be done! Learn everything! If you master the rules, you will feel very awesome, but a normal person becomes a ghost by cultivating! Jump back and forth! Neither fish nor fowl!

First, this book is bound to be popular, as evidenced by this post!

The protagonist is too frustrated, always being threatened, and often facing enemies that he cannot defeat.

The protagonist grabs a destiny when he sees it, but the development is not good, and it feels like the destiny is wasted for the protagonist.

The author's beginning is too honest, telling him clearly, boy, there is someone behind you, it's time to time travel, and this is a golden finger for you. Actually, I don't like it a bit. Everyone knows that all golden fingers have a price. Even if you clearly write out the price, and leave a very special and unconventional suspense, giving people a chance to operate on the line, you can write it, but this kind of thing makes it clear that your life is just a chess game. I have a script here, Master Dao. As long as it doesn't end well, you can get a satisfactory result. . .

If you don't vote, I won't vote. When will the masterpiece come out?

On Sunday, I tested the waters and launched it. I opened a complaint post. If you don't like it, you can come and criticize it under this post. The author is new and has a new book. His mental endurance is not very good, so please be gentle. Thank you! Also, please ask for a counting ticket or something.

Not bad. If I were more cold-blooded, my results would definitely be much better than now.

The critical moment is gone, my little author, you are really good at breaking things😈

It's so cold-blooded. You borrow entries from good friends every day. If you want to practice, others won't practice.

With such a master, what else can I say? What kind of cultivation will not affect the viewing experience?

I wouldn't say this book is extremely toxic, I can only say it's okay. There are too many of them. If you've just read this type of book, you'll find it very interesting.

The more I write, the worse it gets. Let's remake it.

Why is the male protagonist twenty years old and not a five or six year old child?

The setting is confusing and the details are vague, it all depends on the reader's imagination.

The author's works are really wonderful. I am a free prostitute and have come to pay money to read books from pirated websites.

Big cheers for the author!

Already collected, it's not easy for newcomers, and I don't want to advertise shamelessly, but I work during the day and stay up late every night, just to write this novel well. I beg you readers to comment on it. If I have one or two more fans, I will be crazy about it. You all might as well take a look. Please help me. "I Started to Practice in the Cemetery of the Gods" is an unsystematic fantasy novel that is not mainstream in the world. It is suspenseful, relaxing and joyful, passionate and refreshing. You can click on my image to send a message.

My magical powers are a bit weak. I want to see the thirty-six magical powers of Tiangang and the seventy-two magical powers of Earthly Demons.

A good book, I almost missed it. In my eyes, it is considered a good book. If there is no love story in the future, I will book it all.

The main character in your resume is too awesome. It's very difficult to handle. It's not attractive at all. It's so awesome that I really can't stand it. Of course, I haven't read the content yet.

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It's just a monthly pass, it seems like it, let's open the next book quickly

Is this a eunuch?