Lu Mingfei, the E-Sports Champion at the Beginning

Why don't you also create Lu Mingfei who won't go to Kassel? Lu Mingfei has such a strong interstellar talent, why should he slay the dragon?

Indeed, a person who can use the red dot to hit the opponent will have to be a bad boy in school.

If there is a living person, I hope it can be heard.

My suggestion is to open a harem for Brother Lu, isn't that too much?

Maybe

Light novels highlight a sense of relaxation. I would say this novel is extremely interesting to read. Very good.

There are too many personal things, the writing is too sad, and it just exports emotions blindly. I personally believe that people who work hard and are willing to devote themselves to their goals should not be ridiculed. What we really want to ridicule are those who should hang up street lights. Then there is one point. There is no distinction between high and low people, but there are jobs and abilities. There is a big difference between a person who just starts showing off without doing anything, and someone who starts showing off after doing something.

I feel that the writing style is too depressing. Mingfei, the world champion, really only spoke a few sentences at the beginning and had no description at all. In addition, some of Mingfei's monologues or things he said did not change much from those of the bad boy. It was nothing more than an unknown person talking nonsense and a seemingly high-profile person. In fact, it is still weak and likes to talk big things (I don't know if the highlight is written down, is it just relying on the title of a world champion and the adoration of a whole class of girls?), The paragraphs of the article and the character creation feel laggy, which looks a bit strange. (This is a reflection after viewing it. It may have been said like a criticism or something 😥, but it really doesn't mean that. It's just a habit of saying it. I believe the author also hopes that readers can give feedback 😥)

Why do some people think that a person who has not lived with his parents since he was a child will have deep feelings for his parents? It is impossible for anyone to be sad about a letter written by a parent he has never met. As a person from a single-parent family, I cannot feel the so-called cry of a letter at all.

Lu Mingfei, who plays StarCraft professionally next door, has three partners who are almost losing money. But in fact, I only had sex with the little fairy. The other two little monsters were too young to understand. Zero felt a little dull.

What makes this book different from other dragon fan fiction is that it feels very slow and relaxing (and it seems to have multiple female protagonists) and the three girls so far have distinct personalities. The author works hard and will give you a reward during the Chinese New Year

This book is really hard to put into words. First of all, based on the author's writing style and writing style, this book might as well not have the setting of dragons at all! Lu Mingfei didn't enter Kassel until Chapter 60. He had been talking about love (it's not entirely correct to say he was in love). Until Chapter 30, the novel was filled with the author's views on the world. The author's writing style is worse than writing urban youth novels

It's suggested that Lu Mingfei open a harem, it's written like this, it's not good if he doesn't accept it, right?

It was really good to build a competition team in the early stage, but then I got into some literary youth disease, broke away from the past, distributed lunch boxes to three high school girls at the speed of light, and suddenly entered Kassel. Who would read this novel after doing this familiar routine in Kassel?

Due to copyright issues with StarCraft, it was changed to eSports.

This book is well written. The author's writing style is very good. It gives people a feeling of youth literature. It is a rare good dragon fanfic. The author must be strongly supported.

How can I put it, the literary youth who inherited Jiangnan are the only literary youths?

Uh-huh, you write like this... Starting from Chapter 7, you have an angry youth vibe, and you always write a lot of metaphors that are either there or not.

Why are you more ill than someone else? It's a bit too frivolous. But it's pretty good.