The First Immortal King of the Perfect World

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After reading 10 summaries, the protagonist was okay at first, but when it came to the two poisonous points of He Wushuang, there was no protagonist who talked a lot The author was also very tough. He refused to admit that there was a problem in his writing. He also said that the age of the protagonist should be so middle-aged, and there was a lot of nonsense I was thinking about how to write a book. Isn't the character of the protagonist written by the author? What's so unrealistic about it?

Except for the book "Double Undercover", has no one written about the foreign land? The foreign land is more united than the fairyland, and the character Wushang is very charming. He uses a giant to fight against the quasi-immortal emperor. He is a powerful man with great courage. I hope there will be someone who can write the character of Wushang in the future. Thank you 🌹

Book friends who have read the original work of "Perfect World" know that the Immortal Ancient Period was an era worthy of praise and praise. Under the double blow of strange turmoil and invasion from foreign lands, Jiutian appeared one after another heroes whose names were left in history and engraved in their hearts. Although most of what Shi Hao knew was described in the photos and records of his predecessors, making it difficult for us to face those heroes, this work has moved the timeline and allowed everyone to appreciate the vast era together! Lin Yue, a time traveler who has been gifted since childhood, relied on his memory of the original work and borrowed the yin and yang method, vowing to find a path of self-improvement. When the nine days were in turmoil and fell into crisis, he competed with the foreign royal family and the children of the imperial clan, used war to support the war and improve himself, and even changed the situation of the war, rewriting the history of the nine days of disastrous defeat! The setting and language style are rigorous and extended from the original work. There are no magical changes or private goods. You can also appreciate the flavor of Red Haired East when reading it. Although the protagonist's combat power is slightly beyond the standard, since he was born to change the situation of the war, there is no harm in being invincible. It is a refreshing article, so why pay too much attention to the process. The majestic momentum leads us to step into the border, guard the Nine Heavens and Ten Lands together, and keep out foreign lands! Have you ever remembered Wu Ending, who was sacrificed in a wheel battle and had to wrap his body in a battle flag, and the two immortal kings of six reincarnations; "Yu Tuo save me", "The top of the immortals, proud of the world, as long as I am An Lan, there will be heaven". Lan; and He Wushuang, the leader of the young generation in the foreign land who had a bloody battle with Shi Hao in later generations, let us enter the ancient immortality from the perspective of the male protagonist. Even if we are enemies or friends with these characters, they represent the splendor and glory of the past!

My brothers came back and read it again (it was free for a limited time before). The only thing I find frustrating about this book is that there is no "heroine". I just sighed.

The entry point is okay, but the writing style needs to be improved urgently

The World Tree is something at the level of the Immortal King. It exists in every complete world. You forcibly changed it to the level of the Immortal Emperor. I am speechless.

The protagonist is also an Immortal King after all, but he actually calls Meng Brother Meng. There is such a big difference in cultivation and seniority. How can the two be called brothers? Really speechless

Is An Lan about to appear? 😏😏😏

After watching Perfect Undercover, most fans can no longer stand it. Who will die after nine days of immortality?

It's this kind of plot that is rebuilt and then used to show off among the juniors and follow the plot of the original work. . . The protagonist, a quasi-immortal emperor, has to re-cultivate a Taoist body and compete with Shi Hao at the same age and about the same age. . . Vomited. It wouldn't be written without the original plot, right? And you have set things right. The Stone Clan has returned to the bloodline of the Immortal King, and there are also true immortals in the tribe. As a result, Shi Hao's bones were dug up in the lower realm, and then he went to Stone Village. You have changed so much in nine days and ten places, but the plot has not changed at all. Is it possible? Don't you think it's forceful?

Originally, I thought it was a good book with such a high popularity, but it turned out that the fighting aspect was poorly written and not perfect. Also, the protagonist became a king in the flesh before he could fully achieve the goal of becoming an Immortal King. He was in the realm of ten evils and even killed an Immortal King directly with more than a dozen Immortal Kings in the Immortal Realm. Do you know how difficult it is to kill an Immortal King? After Shi Hao became a queen in the flesh, he slept in a burial ground for 500,000 years. After becoming a fairy king, he went to the fairyland to take revenge. He could not be killed directly but had to be slowly grinded to death. You, an immortal king who is more powerful than Shi Hao and has not yet achieved the goal of becoming a soul, are so outrageous that even the logic in the fandom cannot be consistent. And which quasi-immortal emperor who is not so easy to achieve in the quasi-immortal emperor realm has not created his own path? As far as the Immortal Realm has been since the Emperor's Fall, there have been people who have walked through it because the path was not perfect or they got stuck somewhere and had to enter the Boundary Sea to seek opportunities to break the king and become an emperor. It is said that there are thousands of Immortal Kings fighting to cross the Boundary Sea, not including those Dark Immortal Kings of the ultimate ancient land. I wanted to laugh when I saw that Yuan Shen did not become an Immortal King but reached the realm of the Ten Evils and said that he had the power of a supreme giant 😄😄😄

This author is so stubborn. If World Tree wants to have the qualifications of an Immortal Emperor, from the beginning to the end, there will only be two unfamiliar Immortal Emperors, the Pollen Emperor Bone? It's really funny to change other people's settings while taking advantage of Chen Dong's popularity. Everyone's understanding of perfection is different, but the settings and world view are the same. You can't beat the cook after eating. Your point of changing the settings will explode like the ending of Chen Dong's first edition of Holy Ruins, forcibly feeding poison to perfect fans.

I feel like the writing is really awesome. Even Shi Hao's quasi-king realm couldn't stop the Immortal King and was suppressed. The protagonist and some passerby characters block the Immortal King casually. Do these passer-by characters have talents that surpass those of the Immortal Emperor? I really don't understand!

What do you think about the heroine? Or should we not write about the heroine?

After reading your comments, I feel so happy that anyone can become an Immortal Emperor, haha. The total number of Immortal Emperors in the Perfect Trilogy does not exceed thirty, and the Weird Clan only has ten Immortal Emperors. In your opinion, the Immortal Emperors are nothing more than cabbage, which would be ridiculous to say the least.

The poison has been tested! Overall, the protagonist is too awesome and has been persuaded to quit! The protagonist appears in the realm of gods, fights the immortal in Chapter 40, and kills the quasi-king in Chapter 50. Tsk, tsk, tsk, with this talent, I have to kowtow when No. 10 Comes. I feel like the quasi-emperor will have to fight with two big guys now. It's so awesome that I can't stand it! Taste the poison, fellow Taoists, thank you!

You are invincible, you can only escape with one blow, right? It's been 50 years😅😅😅

Let me go, it's incredible that so many people objected to a book written. Also, there is no such thing as cause and effect in a perfect world. Don't be harsh, the people in the Immortal Realm are not that united, they are just a bunch of quarrelsome things. As long as there is a little bit of a pattern and we don't stab Jiutian in the back, what can happen to the foreign land if we unite?

Take a look at the author's words🤣🤣🤣 Anything that fully grows up is guaranteed to be at the level of the Immortal Emperor The Ten-Crown King is above the guaranteed level of Sacrifice. Well, one of his small weapons can be the guaranteed Immortal Emperor, so it is not a problem for the Ten-Crown King to be above the guaranteed level of Sacrifice

Excellent

The author's point of view, "My understanding is a perfect understanding. The setting of the original work is not important. When the World Tree is fully grown, it is better than the Immortal Emperor. There is no need for the creation of the original method to clear the way. The Ten-Crown King became an emperor because of the cowhide of the World Tree, not because of the power of the Ten-Crown King. The original work: What is strong is the individual, not the law and foreign objects. The author: What is strong is not the individual, but the World Tree"

Personally, I think the ordinary emperors and emperors in Zhetian are also the seeds of the Immortal King. But what is the use of the Immortal King? If you don't become an Immortal Emperor, it is of no use. You must be able to pass through the mortal immortals. The most pity is the Emperor, who turned black inexplicably, as well as Void and Evergreen,

Personally, I want to say that your path is not in the past, nor in the present, but in the universe and other planets under your feet. It can only be called a planet, just like a world like the world can only be called a cave or the like, because it relies on its own internal world to nourish it and cannot go out independently. You can write about starting from the golden finger to communicate with the heavens. The other heavens go from the inside to the chaos. The development from the inside to the outside changes from human beings to something similar to the heavens in the tomb of the gods. From birth to destruction, a kind of return is similar to the chaotic creatures feeding on the heavens. Chaos is like clothes. What kind of laws or big pollution have no effect on you at all. They can only be nutrients in your food.

This thing actually has over a thousand comments? There is no atmosphere at all, it is just pretentious, and there is no sense of watching. The fighting scenes are only at the level of martial arts. It was written perfectly. You might as well open a book of Invincible in the martial arts category and change the name to 🙂🙂

Women will only affect the speed of my cultivation. If there is no woman in my heart, I will draw my sword to the God of Nature! 😏😏😏

Take a cloud reader and tell me that Dunyi is the supreme state. The great elder Meng Tianzheng is just Dunyi. Dunyi is equal to the Emperor Zhetian. It is rare for Yuncheng to be like this!

After reading more than a dozen chapters, the protagonist is a lowly little yellow guy with no real character at all. You pick up a lot of enemies' mounts and talk to them. Are you on the same level as one mount? He talks like a little yellow guy. It really doesn't feel satisfying. Look at An Lan. He doesn't say whether he's awesome or not. He talks a lot and has real character. You can't even learn it? Or just copy it, you can also copy Luang's saucy words. Anyway, you are in front of him and you are really convinced. You have to make yourself look like a little gangster. The original feeling of winning is suddenly embarrassed.

I think this book is very well written. It has all the cool points and strong characters that it should have. Even if there are some flaws, it is better than 99% of the fandoms. There is a lot of scolding. There is no harm without comparison. Compared with other perfect colleagues, it is directly like a pyramid. A group of trolls invited black people and clowns.

Can you add some details🌹🌹🌹