The Space-Time Gate Starting from the Original God

The writing is okay, it's one of the few novels in which the protagonist is the villain.

This is my impression after reading a few chapters. I don't know if the author's writing is not good enough or if he just intended to write it like this The protagonist feels to me like a loser who doesn't know the heights of the world. Because he knows the plot, he doesn't have the due respect for God. After tasting the sweetness given by the God of Wind, he starts to act unscrupulously. Anyway, I don't see where the protagonist is cautious. But you also wrote the background and experience of the protagonist very well, which gave me a great sense of fragmentation. I don't think the protagonist has any courage or caution. Because I feel like the protagonist you wrote is just an older child who is confused about what he wants to do

The setting bug is very serious. The setting background is the Eastern Empire, an imperial system. The background of the protagonist is a super-rich chaebol... But there is no trace of the chaebol background at all. Judging from the description, this family background is a billionaire family. As a chaebol, isn't it just a matter of saying that you don't want to go to school? Why don't you write a thesis and ask an academician to vouch for you so that you don't go to school? Everyone is confused. Do you have any misunderstandings about chaebols? And they are still plutocrats in an imperial country There is also the problem of setting in another world. Going to the world of Genshin Impact seems cautious, but after confirming that they are Genshin Impact, they become arrogant. The God of God danced in the face in public, and took away the Heart of God... Before you went to that world, you were worried about the laws of nature. Good guy, after you got the Heart of God, you took the Heart of God directly to the real world? Are you not worried that there is something wrong with God's heart? Don't talk about being a god. Good people will not harm you. God's heart is given by heaven. Do you know what's wrong with this? Yes, yes, to say the least, if the sky really comes, you can run away, but what about the wind god? Aren't you trying to trick Wendy? If I were the God of Wind, I would slap him to death as soon as I saw him traveling to other worlds with the Heart of God, and then come back. Wendy gave you the Heart of God and asked you to lead the class, but you brought this thing with you to lead the class? Most of the time in real world research! What difference does it make whether I give it to you or not? Returning the heir... To my amusement. Fengshen is not brainless. Knowing that you can travel back and forth to the real world, he knows that you cannot take root in Mondstadt. If he chooses an heir, he might as well choose a traveler

The writing is a bit confusing. The protagonist is said to be stupid and does not know about the various tests of Goldfinger. However, the protagonist is said to be cautious but jumps in front of all kinds of people who can kill you casually. He dares to directly absorb the power of a god statue without asking? You obviously said yourself not to use games to define reality? ! You must know that seeing a tiger through a screen and seeing a tiger face to face are two different things! Moreover, Yula also self-righteously helped people change their names. No matter how she was ostracized because of Lawrence, she was still raised by Lawrence. She never said she wanted to break away from Lawrence, right? In short, I have read these ten chapters, and the more I read, the more I frown. The reader can know that you are the protagonist, but how can the protagonist also know? ! Because the protagonist cannot die, you can do whatever you want to do, and because the world revolves around the protagonist, whatever you want is right? Just highlight one outrageous thing!

The author underestimated the threat level of Inazuma and Raiden General. If I were not stronger than Thor, I would never play Inazuma.

I'm drunk too! What the hell is a full-time mage? The author has been writing this stuff since I subscribed? Can you write about popular themes and leave them here for fun?

Please author, please don't lick Qin Shihuang, it really makes me sick. There are some good Versatile Mage fan novels and other novels, but I fell directly into the trap just because they licked Qin Shi. Really made me vomit. ↗

It's okay for Amber to recognize the Heart of God at a glance. For Amber, she doesn't know anything about the Heart of God.

I told you to keep a low profile before, but later I published a paper because I didn't want to go to school 😅 After transcendence, the brain will also evolve, just like Aizen becomes a teacher. It's just entertainment. Is it difficult to go to school and be tortured?

A bunch of hints at the beginning. In the end, we didn't want the heroine. Did you say that the second dimension would change? Want to make it yourself? ? This is a sick idea! !

The first time I saw a protagonist who relied on brainwashing to gain loyalty, he looked like a cult leader and instantly felt so rubbish.

My evaluation of this article is: The emperor probably went to the ground with a golden hoe. It's not like the way the chaebols deal with it, it's really very low-level.

I can only say that the writing is too long-winded, and I am too timid to zoom in and out. There is no one who can write a good and enjoyable article like this. Is it difficult for the protagonist to drop out of school and start a company to make money? Need to go to school and do scientific research? Isn't it enough to open a research institute by yourself? You have to satisfy your parents and go to school. What are you writing about? If you have the ability to go to school, what else can you do besides wasting your time? Are you still afraid that your parents won't be able to explain it to you, and if you drop out of school and get good grades, you won't be able to prove yourself? Need to waste time socializing with others? The abilities are also weak, and the writing is too taken for granted. You also know that this is the real world and still take it for granted according to the anime setting. How would a person from another world with such a weak strength give the heart of God to you casually? Can you compare to the treatment of the original protagonist Sora?

Why is Starting Point called an orphanage? It's because the protagonist will have less worries and more freedom without his parents. To be honest, thesis is really poisonous. You might as well tell your parents that you are worried and show them the Heart of God or something. Anyone who understands the truth will know what to do.

I can't stand it anymore. I can't understand what the main plot is.

It felt okay at first, but when it came to going abroad, I couldn't stand it for some reason... I'll just put it on the bookshelf for now...

It feels worse and worse

Can Tiga appear in Teyvat through the faith of all people?

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Although the ending is not satisfactory, at least you have started a new book.

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Can the author finish this book?

I wish the author a happy Mid-Autumn Festival and finish writing this book as soon as possible

Happy National Day to the author! Then hurry up and finish this book!

Fine, understand

I finally finished writing it and I finally finished reading it. Thank you author.

The early Genshin Impact works are all excellent.