Douluo: Kamen Rider Arrives

What are you writing? If it is behind the scenes, please mark it clearly. We readers are watching from the perspective of the protagonist. You will be the protagonist for a while, and you will be the protagonist for a while. What exactly do you want to write, and then the heroine will be a hero. If you don't have a heroine, please tell me. It's really uncomfortable to watch. Others don't criticize me. I won't bring my personal opinions to you. Thank you.

Oh, I'm a little bit emotional. It's been so many days since I first read Chapter 120 and now I'm watching the end. It makes me nostalgic. Okay, let's start re-reading.

After reading Chapter 56, I couldn't stand it anymore. Author, do you really want to make money from this novel? Although there are a lot of typos, there are also a lot of wrong sentences, what is not right after that, so what is wrong after that, and what is used several times in a row, there is no sense of substitution at all. The word count is also bad. You are so bad even before it has been updated to the paid chapters. If you finish something in one chapter, write three chapters. The key points. What is the main thing about Kamen Rider? He is handsome. What's the main thing about Douluo? Pretend to slap him in the face and beat the Yakuza easily. This row has a lot of chatter, and it was fine in the early stage. When Tiandao came on the scene, I thought a monster would appear from Tiandao General Secretary. Then Hu Liena and the others were defeated, and Tiandao came out and the general manager pretended to be fierce. The result was an unclear one, and I became even more confused later on. It was neither cool nor unpleasant. What did Shrek write?

To be honest, Ouz is a bit hasty. When Douluo is localized, it can be set as one soul ring and one type of coin, or one or two, and then it can resonate with Anku, and obtain Anku's power and turn it into coins. Now it seems that it is still a bit too knightly and not well integrated.

In fact, you can also train heroes like Mr. E. It's better to be more disdainful.

What did the author think when you were seven years old and didn't awaken your martial soul at the beginning? Did you go to shit the day you awakened your martial soul?

Looking at it now, it seems that all the female characters have been given to other protagonists, and the protagonist himself has none.

It feels like a romance novel is like Kamen Rider Arrival in Douluo Dalu. Picking up girls basically depends on how they pick up girls.

Can you write more about the author? It's so interesting for me as a double chef in Masked Douluo

What the hell is Tian Yuheng? Isn't it called Yu Tianheng?

Well, why is Qiaoye the Emperor of the Earth and not Faiz? Is it a typo? Moreover, the order of the chapters where Qiao Ye appears is also mixed up, which is a bad review.

I have a feeling that after the author finished writing about the competition, he ran out of ink, and then ✄╰ひ╯ I hope I don't get it right.

The water is too watery, so discard it. Goodbye. Who do you often talk about? Just pull one or two.

I can understand a few chapters of a battle of souls and water, but do the actions need to be written in such detail? It was so detailed that I felt like I suddenly stopped doing it after just following it. Especially the part about memorizing Zhu Zhuqing skillfully was really eye-opening for me.

After reading the latest chapter, if the author is dead, you can play in a parallel world, which is the Douluo world of the current protagonist, and play in the Dou Er, Dou San, and Dou Four worlds that have been ruled by Tang San in the original work. The person next door who is also a Douluo Knight is still in the profile. It would be very interesting to write about it.

Big boost, author. Your book is very good. I will subscribe to it.

Shinken Satoru is the male protagonist who pinches his Terika. If everyone doesn't like it, his appearance will be reduced in the later stage. If you have a character you want to play, you can leave a message For example, the card surface is coming to fight, the end is coming, etc.

The writing is not as good as that of Wang Gonggong, the eunuch.

Water, then water, let's see how many people are left after you finish the water! You've been stunned for so long by the plot of a Wuhun Palace blocking the road and killing someone. To paraphrase Tang San: You already have a way to kill yourself, so if you do this, it's strange that your novel is not cool.

I've read dozens of chapters, and besides other things, there are really many typos. There can be several typos on one page.

By the way, after watching for so long, who is the protagonist? Is Xu Wenlong just a supporting character?

Special photo of Douluo Pi. Currently there are knights, ultraman and lol. The amount of private goods is ridiculous.

How to say it? Although others said it was poor, I thought it was quite good. This type of book seemed to hit my heart. All I can say is, come on, author!

I have some good ideas. Can I make Mr. E the new father of Qian Renxue?

The pace is a bit too fast. I feel like I'm being careless. I summoned so many god-level characters at once. It's a bit broken. I should at least slow down a bit. I have summoned so many people and I can still feel like I can destroy the divine world and occupy it directly. Summoning is too random. Some restrictions should be set from weak to strong.

Okay, now you can finish it. After the finals, the book will have no highlights.

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