In The Legend of Qin, the Future Looks Bright

Ying Ze: Damn it, Zichu is incompetent, he has brought shame and disgrace upon the country. It seems I must return to service. 😏

The Bai Qi part is a bit annoying to read. It's acceptable if it's mentioned briefly and then moved on, but writing it in detail and repeatedly over many chapters is toxic. The introduction and the beginning make him seem like a powerful and sophisticated person who can strategize and control the court.

Classic Qin Dynasty harem novels, I hope there are many female protagonists, and that they are all excellent.

Those plagiarists are really something else!

The biggest flaw in this book is its focus on fate. Just when you're enjoying the story, the protagonist is suddenly put in a shackle, which is imposed by the Nine Heavens Mystic Maiden.

Speaking of the mechanical arts of the Qin Dynasty, they were truly formidable. During Chi You's time, there were eighty-one magical soldiers... The Four Sacred Beasts of the Mohist School... Gongshu Chou's domineering mechanical arts... Mechanical arts reaching the point of being able to create magical soldiers were practically invincible.

It should be titled "Boonie Bears"... Even the bear character is smarter than the other characters in it.

You need to have a broader perspective. Even South Korea, one of the seven most beautiful countries, has so many beautiful women. Think about it, how could the other five countries be any less beautiful? If you've read Du Mu's "Ode to the Epang Palace," you'll know that concubines, princes, and grandsons of the emperor descended from their palaces and carriages to come to Qin. In the end, all the women from the other six countries will belong to your nephew.

The story really started getting sloppy after the assassination attempt on Ying Che. It was already disgusting after a dozen or so chapters of filler, and now, after twenty-odd chapters, it's finally starting and then this new "human relationships" plot comes along. Look at the book's tags: ruthless and decisive.

The way that B group was managed showed it wouldn't go far. The admins acted like leaders, bossing everyone around, and accusing everyone of being ignorant, implying they knew nothing. They claimed to know everything but hadn't written a popular book, so they wouldn't promote it or mention its title or content. How insecure!