My Starry Sky Martial Arts

It copied the basics of Swallowing the Starry Sky and mixed in some content from Infinite Streaming. It was a mess. Overall, the review was on the high side.

Super low configuration swallowing starry sky youth version

I just read the beginning of the first chapter and I want to complain about it. In modern society, ordinary people have to build roads and other things in their hometowns when they are developed. As a result of the development of human science and technology, the mother planet has been abandoned. And no matter how you put it, life planets should be rare in the universe.

First of all, newcomers should never write about women! Remember absolutely. Because newcomers can't write well. Such as this novel. As soon as she gained some strength in practice, she arranged for a woman to enter the venue and was harassed by gangsters. The hero saves the beauty. This is a very cliche plot. This routine has been around since the beginning of Internet literature. Once you read a few novels, you will get tired of this routine. So brainless. When readers see a woman, they will guess that there will be trouble later, and the protagonist hero saves the beauty. The biggest taboo is that the novel is written so that readers can guess the plot behind it. When you look at the novels on the ranking list, you can almost never guess the plot behind it. Only in this way can readers be associated and interested. Once they are interested, they will continue to read and become more and more addicted to the novel. Then there is a payment. Of course I am not a novelist either. I'm just looking at it from a reader's perspective. If you don't change the first few chapters, it will be difficult to get up.

I have read a few chapters, and the writing is actually good, but it seems original, and there are shadows of Devouring everywhere 😥 I would probably subscribe to this book if it were a Devouring fanfic.

If the protagonist, a fifth-level warrior who practices basic skills, is said to be invincible at the fifth and sixth levels, then if he encounters someone who practices intermediate and advanced skills, warriors will be divided according to strength and speed. If a first-level warrior who practices advanced skills, speed and strength can achieve the strength of a ninth-level warrior, then it counts as a first-level warrior or a ninth-level warrior. This division is completely meaningless. Each stage of martial arts training should have the characteristics of each stage.

Thermal weapons are probably about to become obsolete. Last month I saw a local video. Our local gardening department cooperated with the urban management to prune urban greening, mainly cutting down branches. In the past, workers stood on lifting platforms and used chainsaws. This year, they now use laser guns on the ground. That's right, it's a laser gun. It can chop down a big tree branch with one click, which is much faster than a chainsaw.

This book has appeared on my recommendation many times, but I didn't want to read it until I reached Chapter 4. It's not a proficiency system or an unlimited attribute addition system. You need to have skills to add points, points are not automatically given every day, what are you doing, you are like a fool

It's really good. I don't know why it's not popular.

A short review of the first 40 chapters. In the previous chapter, the gangster robbed a car and had a gun. The protagonist hesitated for a moment. Here it is explained that there is a gun and the gun is pretty powerful. So a company's security depends on a second-level or third-level warrior? If you build a machine gun platoon, it will be more intimidating. Of course, I won't say much about the situation of thermal weapons at this stage. I will continue to complain after seeing the situation later.

You'd say it's a fanfic of Devouring the Starry Sky, but it's not very similar, but there are too many plagiarism elements, which can be seen from the title and introduction, so it's hard to evaluate.

I just watched it, but I don't quite understand it. In a relatively stable environment, if you have abilities and talents, you don't show them to gain more resources, but instead hide and work hard as a lone wolf? Is this stupid? This is not 18 or 19 years. . . .

The world view is wrong. Since power belongs to oneself, resources and wealth will also come here. For a company boss, even if the company in the county town does not have matching power, it still belongs to the boss alone. What is this but fat? I dare to rob your company with a gun. If you can give so much money, why don't you have any money to improve the company's strength? I don't believe that in this technological setting, there is no medicine that can helium. If it was a subordinate force of another force, wouldn't the superiors send someone?

Looking at it now, I feel that there are too many elements copied from Swallowing Starry Sky. The slight change is that the protagonist of Swallowing Starry Sky is a spiritual master and chooses a virtual network company. The rest of the teacher choices, auxiliary light brain, friend Wang Mu, wife Zhou Tong, etc. Can basically be found one by one in the swallowing star sky. Even the accounts left by the seniors of the Rakshasa tribe include a large amount of wealth, account levels, and ten-section passwords; the training methods in the Martial God Mountain, the insights left by the seniors on entering the Martial God Mountain, and the rooftop balcony where they lived... There are too many similar plagiarism plots. I hope the author will add more ideas of his own, otherwise I will want to give up after reading this.

Since I have a passion for Devouring, it would be better to write about Devouring fandom directly, which would also make it easier for us to understand and create a sense of familiarity.

What kind of spicy chicken is written. Didn't this town government say it was lazy? I have never seen how many times my boss was extorted, and the town government just stood by and could only bully the weak. Now that someone has revolted and resisted (leaving aside whether the rebels are good or evil), now that they know that their dominance has been shaken, they start to think of using money (resources) to hire experts to do things. This also illustrates the problem that no matter how high the force is, it is still a tool in the hands of the ruling class (even if the ruling class is a waste).

According to the author's setting, ninth-level warriors are no match for today's hot weapons. Not to mention the future. If you really encounter alien technology that can reach the earth, it will be a gift. A ninth-level warrior cannot outrun a fighter jet, let alone a missile. When encountering modern technology, it can only be kited. It is difficult for mutant beasts to develop against warriors. The earth will still be dominated by humans

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After seeing the first chapter of Starry Sky, isn't that Zhou Tong the heroine? ? Either there is no heroine or there are many heroines, don't let the whole heroine fail like swallowing the stars 🙄

According to the author's big update rules, everyone works together! Let the author add more updates every day!

After watching it, I feel that the plot is very similar to the "Space Pro" I Eat Tomatoes. I don't know if it is a trumpet.

Isn't this the late stage of Devouring Starry Sky?

The upgrade is too slow, almost a bit watery

I have read the first 50 chapters and it feels good. You can read on. The plot is reasonable.

This protagonist is very impatient in everything he does, and he yells at every turn.

"The Cultivation Sect Fights Workers", a traditional fairy tale