Comprehensive Manga About Me Falling in Love with the Second Miss Yukinoshita

"Linjiang Immortal·Ode to Snow Under the Snow" Author; Deepseek The ice soul and jade bones stand in the wind, and the lonely light turns darkly into the secluded courtyard. The plain clothes gently flicker on the clear moon, and the broken Qiong pave the path and the cold fragrance condenses. The sparse shadows half cover the dark mirror, and the spring snow is hidden in the sleeves. The cold plum blossoms are naturally made of snow, but their warm words turn into frost. Note: This poem is based on the Linjiang fairy tune to sing about Xuenai under the snow, imitating its cold and aloof posture. In the first film, the jade bones of the ice soul and the plain clothes of the moonlight are used to describe the nobility, and the cold fragrance of broken qiong coincides with the meaning of snow. In the lower part, the sparse shadow of a rhombus mirror is used to describe its solitary shadow, which is self-reflecting. The spring snow in the sleeves contains both coldness and warmth. The concluding sentence, "Warm words turn into frost," describes its nature of being cold on the outside and hot on the inside, just like a cold plum blossom proud of the snow, secretly conveying a delicate fragrance.

I can't stand it anymore. It's not a matter of writing, it's just a matter of plot. According to the original work, it doesn't matter whether there is a protagonist or not. It's just that the protagonist plays Hikigaya's role. In fact, it doesn't matter whether there is a protagonist or not. This book is probably the author showing off what he has learned, rather than trying to write a good novel. The writing is not bad, and the plot is not exaggerated. I just copy the original work.

I originally wanted to make some comments, but since the book is free, I didn't bother to mention too much. After reading many other book friends' comments, I realized that the author was just for his own entertainment, so I'll just say two points. The title of the book is a comprehensive manga, but it's actually mainly about spring things, but it's also ridiculous. The characters in other comics have no sense of plot participation at all, they are simply dispensable. I don't know what the use is of writing it. The essence is to cut off the relationship between Hu Gouhachi and Yukino. As for the plot, at best, the protagonist uses the old-fashioned thinking to solve the problems that only occur in these young days. Compared with the original work, it does not mean that there are no changes at all, it can only be said that the changes are not big, because after carefully reading the original work and this book, you will find that the solution to every problem is basically the same as the original work in the end. I will not go into details about the classical Chinese text and those comments. I believe that not many people who read online articles will like to read these.

I went to 24 years old novel

After reading eight chapters, the biggest problem with this book is not the writing, but the water. Notes and other issues have to be ranked behind. There are eight chapters in total. One thing is emphasized and explained. For example, when Lun Ye met at the beginning, there is no need to write more about why they met. The key is to write so much

When I read Chapter 81, I was going through the plot of the original drama. Didn't the protagonist know about Kawasaki?

I saw Chapter 90, which is a very good book. The first ten chapters were watered down by 1 point. In the tennis scene, the protagonist's so-called rescue was lost by 2 points. After that, Kawasaki was directly dropped by five points. Are you sure this is not a watershed plot? It's obvious that the protagonist can solve the problem easily, but he doesn't. He goes over the plot hard and then comes out and exposes it. It's heart-wrenching to watch.

I've read Chapter 100, and I'd like to complain, otherwise I won't be able to stand it anymore. The more I read, the more frustrated I'll be. I'm copying the original plot, and the protagonist appears at the end. He's the same without him. It's a movie with four people, but only three of them have their names. I'm heartbroken. The author is just doing it for love.

It's one hundred and seventeen chapters. Power for Love is based on the original work, except that the protagonist takes over part of Hikigaya's scenes.

As for the author, you would be satisfied if you wrote it yourself. . . . Of the two books you wrote, the erotic part is basically a complete copy of the original novel, 90% of it is the original text, and then you interspersed your original work with the original text, which makes it appear that, emm, to put it bluntly, the level is uneven. The common problem between the two books is that you can't write about the daily bickering between the male protagonist and Yukinoshita. Then you leave this part to the original work, which is the bickering between Hachiman and Yukinoshita. Then the question comes again, who is falling in love with whom. Look at this famous scene like watching White Album 2, Hachiman and Yukinoshita hug each other, and the male protagonist stands behind. There are also four people in the service department plus the male protagonist. I think the communication between the four people you wrote is a bit difficult to explain. Basically, they are still a trio in the original work. Not to mention if there is a client again, the client will either treat the male protagonist as transparent or treat Hachiman as transparent. This point is also present when Iroha appears. Like the character OOC, how many times should you read the original work again? I even had a vision of the return of the Dragon King regarding the male protagonist's attitude towards Haruno and Yuki's mother. I was thinking, can I deal with Yukino at this level? This book feels like it's following the same path as the previous one. Except for Yukino, everyone in the original novel treats Harano in a very friendly manner, because Harano will change her mask according to the other person. You, the male protagonist, don't like Harano at first sight, am I right? ? ? If the male protagonist has this kind of vision, some early events and daily conversations cannot be as you wrote them. Can't you refer to actual teachings and personal opinions? The way Ayanokouji treats people and the communication between the five-person group are quite suitable for improving the current problems.

It's not as good as the previous one. Why did it feel so awkward at the beginning and it kept getting so awkward that I couldn't watch it anymore?

I hope this book can write about the daily life of love. I didn't know if the last book was a success in confessing my love.

I feel that the problem with this book compared to the previous one is not the writing, but that the plot is not compact enough. The author could write a little more in each chapter. However, this book is still very interesting. I also like the style of ancient prose at the beginning, and the author may consider changing to a different platform. The audience for fan fiction like Qidian is too small, so there may not be any results.

Praise for the author of Generating Power for Love😭

Come on, you are a great person

The school anniversary scene looked particularly awkward

I don't understand why you have to draw some ancient prose when writing a Japanese light novel, and then follow it with a long paragraph of explanation. Why do you like to draw on ancient prose so much that you can directly write a novel in ancient Chinese? No one read your last book like this, but you still write it like this in this one. You haven't made any progress at all. Is it written specifically for your enjoyment?

Generate electricity for love😡

Although the writing is very good, it is unexpectedly boring. I am not looking forward to the subsequent plot and development at all. There is no attractive point.

It's a very interesting book, and the character of the main character is also very unique. The plot is also very good overall, but it lacks some ups and downs and is a bit bland. But the overall story design is great, come on!