The Rise of Prehistoric Times Began from Wanshou Mountain

Is there anything new in writing a prehistoric novel? It's all the same

Zhen Yuanzi and Hongyun must be good friends, is it interesting?

There is a setting problem. Hongjun, Luohu, and the ancestors of Longfeng Qilin were all born in the same period. Their inheritance should be able to support their cultivation to the peak of quasi-sage. If they have enough time, they should even be able to prove the Tao with force. However, Zhen Yuanzi, Sanqing, Nuwa Fuxi and others could not cultivate quasi-sage before they heard the Tao, so Zhen Yuanzi should not be an innate god or demon.

Let's not talk about this book ... Measuring calamity is the biggest problem There were originally ten thousand ways in the world, but the Hongjun family became the dominant one, and there were only a few saints So the prehistoric world is a deformity ... [Here, there are at least 10,000 Taoist ancestors in all the worlds. Of course, fewer and fewer have survived after so many epochs and annihilation, and some have left to go to the road of transcendence] For the Taoist ancestors, they have Taoist disputes, but they will not be mortal enemies with each other, because they are all Taoist ancestors who opened up a path. After all, their Taoism is unique and they do not need to destroy others to improve the Tao. At most, they can fight when they encounter treasures while exploring. ………… The problem of calamity causes the world to be broken again and again, which makes me speechless Can't it be strengthened again and again? There can be several more worlds, but they are not formed by fragmentation

Is there any need to become sworn sworn friends to Hongyun? Is the protagonist in a hurry? Knowing that Hongyun has great karma, he became sworn sworn brother to Hongyun. What are the benefits

We accept 30 apprentices at the beginning. Even if they have extraordinary ginseng fruit qualifications, there will be ranking among the same batch. We accept them all at once. The apprenticeship is the same as wholesale, but after a few chapters, it is said that we will take the elite route? He also told others inexplicably that there would be a human race in the future, and what bloodline he was born into, and the news spread to the entire clan. . . Since blood can be planted, why can't it be planted after Nuwa pinches someone? The oath itself is very strange at the beginning, and there is also a small idea of ​​swearing to the avenue without being noticed by the heaven. I originally thought that the protagonist was quite stable, but then he turned around and told the two snakes he had just conquered that there would be humans in the future. Don't you feel disconnected when comparing the IQ and character before and after? Do you think it comes out as soon as it comes out? There are a lot of little poisonous spots and it's very uncomfortable to look at. Just to add: It's not that you can't swear at the beginning, but your writing is very strange, and you throw in a new setting without laying the groundwork. It can be completely changed to add a plot + the avenue gradually discovers that the protagonist is a time traveler and gradually becomes more and more repulsed. Then the protagonist realizes that the past life is just a past life, and there is only Zhen Yuanzi in this life. Then the protagonist realizes the heart and vows that the avenue will no longer be repulsive and breaks through in one fell swoop. There are foreshadowings and foreshadowing, which is much better than dryly throwing out an oath. This book cannot be said to be bad, but it is uncomfortable to read and has many minor flaws. I have only read the first part of it. I think it is a prehistoric novel that barely reaches the passing level.

In fact, if the Honghuang text were written strictly in accordance with the setting of "Buddha is the Tao", it would be of high quality and would be logically self-explanatory.

Objectively speaking, although the work has some flaws, it is still good overall. It can also be seen that the author has been working hard and making progress. It is really not easy to persist in writing. Come on brother!

Just talk about sanctification Strictly speaking, this cannot be interfered with. At most, some hints are given. The core is to think for myself. Many authors only think that sanctification is nothing more than a sentence, but in fact sanctification is not a sentence, otherwise Hongmeng Purple Qi will have no effect, and the law of enlightenment will have no effect If multiple conditions are not up to standard, how can you become a saint in just one sentence, and many time travelers interfere with sanctification, which is actually 100% blocking the way. (As for the success of many protagonists, it is nothing more than the success of bugs, directly ignoring all conditions, and turning sainthood into a must to go to kindergarten.) ...... Actually, it is better not to become a saint, and it is better to become a Hunyuan Taoist. However, it is difficult to become the ancestor of a Tao in the prehistoric times. Only demon gods are Tao ancestors. After all, every demon god is an innate Tao.

I laughed so hard, every prehistoric novel swears that it is really a novice novel

Why are all the Taoists Nuwa? Nuwa is really miserable😏😏

Such prehistoric times are a bit interesting, much better than those with the same level.

The writing is okay. At least I've finished reading it, and I'll just cut off Hu Taiqing later. Lirenjiao. Let the leader teach you. Together with Nuwa, create a human Taoist couple

Great support from the author, keep updating

Looking forward to the rest of the story, I hope it won't end unfinished, come on brother

The author should be bolder and write the Sanqing Dynasty to death. No one will fight for you.

The more people who worship, the more cause and effect there will be. However, today's prehistoric literature is not as strict in terms of cause and effect as Buddha's original way. Anyway, it is just for fun.

"Knocking on the Heavenly Gate with a Sword", mortal flow, sword cultivator, decisive killing, all Taoist brothers please send me a message to support, thank you, thank you.

One day to reach immortality, two days to reach immortality, three days to reach immortality. . . . .

Thanks to all book friends for their continued attention, support and tolerance. Up to now, this book is all original. To a certain extent, it can be regarded as a supplement to the relevant content of ancestor Hongjun's sermons before the prehistoric times. As for the follow-up content, there are already many authors writing on the market, and there are also many excellent works. It doesn't make much sense for me to continue writing. In addition, due to my recent work and life reasons, I have chosen to complete this book after careful consideration. If there is anything wrong, please forgive me.

Chapter 7 Accepted 30 Disciples

Come on, the author writes very well. It's difficult to agree with others. Just write what you want to write. There will always be people like me who support you. Don't give up.

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