My Cultivation Depends Entirely on Listening.

I couldn't stand it anymore. I had the patience to read Chapter 100, but the protagonist has not even reached the first level of Qi training. This proves how long the writing is. Looking at this writing, it is estimated that it will take 50 chapters. Your writing is very problematic. The author is single but don't write the protagonist like this. The concentration of yy is very high. Those who can see the later chapters are not said to be cheap, at least the concentration of the second dimension is very high.

Tutor: Why are you here on this stage? What is your dream?

I have to say that this book can be regarded as food and fodder. The protagonist's views are quite upright, the plot is also very smooth, and there is no forced pretentiousness. It is very warm, but it lacks some foreshadowing. For example, the protagonist's life background is mentioned later, and the fighting scenes have a textbook feel. The setting adopts a classic setting. There is not much to say. The writing is also very good. I feel that apart from the title and introduction, I took the time to revise it. If it were not for this introduction, there is something that attracted me. I probably won't watch it.

It's pretty good. The protagonist is not too violent, he is peaceful and a bit silly. After watching too many stories, he is decisive and decisive in killing. I still like this kind of protagonist better.

Regarding this book, I have an immature suggestion: The author updates ten times a day, but that's not too much 😳

How should I put it, author, are you a bit logically confused in the later stages of your writing? The protagonist originally wanted to kill but then turned around and stopped. There are also some things that I don't know how to explain. As a reader, it just feels that it is getting more and more wrong. No criticism meant

How can I put it, the group portraits are not very good, and neither is Zhou Yidan. I am very satisfied with the images of Miss Lou and Huahua. I feel like the author you wrote about Cultivation to Immortality is not interesting, so I skipped it completely and it didn't affect the plot.

The main theme of this book is to grab people's appetite, and the updates are extremely slow.

It's non-toxic, I personally think it's good

I want to see the protagonist's story more, but I feel like there are too many group portraits.

If you don't understand, just ask, is Xiao Huanghua the heroine?

It's quite interesting, but it's a bit dull at the moment. It lacks a big event to connect the main characters. I guess it may be that the protagonist knows a certain secret. The final result is that the two worlds are connected and the protagonist legally cultivates immortality.

What a miserable book. It's obviously quite good.

The harem is still a single heroine. Let me first ask if I personally like the harem. If it is a harem, I can easily withdraw from it.

The subject matter is a bit new, but not bad.

The author is really nb and has been persisting

Brother, you are still strong. I admire you and support you.

What can I say? I just saw the protagonist being taken into the fairy world by his senior sister. I have a small problem. I wonder if I am too sensitive. Words like helpless and wry smile appeared too many times.

The pace is too slow. In chapter 50, the protagonist has not yet reached the first level of Qi training, and the plot is relatively bland.

Wasn't she just an ordinary teacher at first? But when we met again, she turned into a saint. Her personality also changed a lot. What's going on? Are there any signs? 🤔😵

The writing is still okay, but it's too ink. Even deleting some plots and detailed descriptions has no impact at all. There are too many psychological descriptions of passers-by, and I can't summarize the psychology through a few words of micro-expression. And it's no wonder that it's not popular. It's just an ordinary person who entered the world of immortality with ordinary lowb thinking. Although he was seriously ill, he didn't see the real desperate struggle for his future before he started to learn immortality. He was said to be optimistic, but there was little description of an open-minded attitude. Maybe the illness happened too quickly and he was still in the process of transformation? After entering Immortal Cultivation, he was vague about the treatment of diseases, and it did not say what level of cultivation would be considered good. It was also unclear what the condition of the disease was. If this thing was bound to the golden finger, then it would be sent. Then, there was no in-depth study of what happened to the golden finger. The effects of various realms of Qi training on the changes in the body were not explained. The development was too slow, and the plot was forced to drag out. Generally speaking, there are quite a lot of things that should be detailed, but there are quite a lot of things that don't need to be detailed. Let's take a look at the following to see if the writing has been optimized.

After reading it for so long, I forgot about this book on the bookshelf.

It's been a while since I've watched it, so I'd like to ask you guys, how was the incident of Erotic Pen falling in love with the heroine Lin Lu handled?

I feel like I haven't encountered such an interesting book in a long time. I've read a few chapters. The subject matter is novel and the writing is smooth. The main character is not Shark-Arm. I'll continue reading.

Although, I still hope that the author will finish this book as soon as possible. The new book will definitely have better results after learning from the lessons. The results of this book are too poor.

After raising it for a long time, why does it feel like it's gone to death? Why are the grades so bad?