From a Crippled Spiritual Root to Cultivating Immortality and Becoming a God

A brief review First of all, I read dozens of chapters and I have a question. First of all, a lot of things are not explained clearly. This does not mean that there is no detail, but that the key points and non-key points have shifted too much. The description or personality of the protagonist in the first 10 chapters is not as described as a supporting character. The most outrageous thing is that there are too many characters in the early stage, and they are not over-chapter characters at all. Supporting roles, the imposter woman, the fireball fight, the protagonist his master, the man pestering him, his senior brother, climbing the stairs and offending a few people. These are all secondary, the most important thing is to cultivate immortality. . . What about your cultivation and your skills? Many of your settings are imperfect. I even feel that you have not written an outline. Many of the main plot descriptions are unclear, the side plots are too descriptive, and the protagonist's training methods are too simple. Personally, I suggest you revise as you write. There are actually quite a lot of flaws in the early stages.

This article will not be changed without CP, but in the future I want to find a wife for White Wolf Cang Ning. I don't know if fellow Taoists will support it.

Why don't you continue to update? Come on, author

I thought it was the four spiritual roots, but I was disappointed

This is my first time reading a non-CP article, and I feel pretty good, haha