The Martial Artist

I took a look at it, first of all, the title of your book is not very good, "Xue Wu Ren", this title is too bland and does not make people want to read in. Erche Luanlu talks too much, many things can be mentioned in one sentence. After a short dialogue and plot, you always have to write a bunch of monologues, all kinds of things to know. The reason why, although it makes sense, it has no effect on advancing the plot. To put it bluntly, it is a bit watery, and there are... It's a line break. Obviously a sentence can be read smoothly at once, but you have to pick out two words every time and then break the line with a comma. "After all, so, actually." This is the same as your previous monologue. It can be used, but don't use it often. The characters also use several lines in one sentence. Of course, this is just a suggestion. The novel itself is still very good, at least there are no poisonous points. The writing is also acceptable, but the writing technique needs to be improved.

The author's writing is great 👍, but the coolness is not very prominent, and you can add more appropriately. You can't tell the content just by looking at the title...😂The writing is very good, but it can make the protagonist have more conflicts with others, which makes it more interesting. In fact, the coolness can also become a growth flow. After all, it is not easy to sign a contract if you don't write coolness, but I like your sentence breaking style. Come on ✊Believe in you.

Thank you very much, every recommendation is my motivation to keep writing, thank you all friends and readers who voted for me, 🙏🙏🙏

As expected, I already had a headache, a fever, a runny nose, and I don't know if it's because I'm in poor physical condition, but it was much worse than others. This will affect the update. Two chapters a day has always been my insistence. I don't want to give up halfway. I'll try my best!!!

When I woke up, I suddenly found that so many people had given me suggestions. I was really happy from the bottom of my heart. Thank you for your suggestions, and I hope you can continue to point out my shortcomings in the future. I must accept it humbly and make corrections seriously. Thank you everyone!!!

Come on, the author. I really like this kind of work that is well-founded and logical. It is not forced but the plot is plot. The IQ of the main and supporting characters is online. It is not Xiaobai's book.

To increase your popularity (Pu Niao)

First add a bookshelf and look at it after the exam 😁

The funny route is good, but it's a pity that there are too few updates.

Keep up the good work. Added to bookshelf, waiting for your update.