All Heavens: It Starts with the Dragon Clan Rescuing Susie.

The setting is good After my sister watched it, the Secret of Immortality in Seconds was also quite weird But it doesn't matter The part that really made me unable to stand was the part where the Rift Girl proposed It may have been well written but I couldn't stand it But the Dragon Clan part was really interesting

I have always wondered why the Dragon Clan, like Douluo, can be considered the most dangerous world. Not to mention the fantasy world of high martial arts, just Super God, Trisolaris, and where are the Marvel Zombies Universe? There are also a bunch of high-risk worlds. There is no need to say how dangerous that one is, it doesn't make sense!

The protagonist's talent for resurrecting and resolving the problem does not go to a normal world to steal nuclear bombs from Maozi and Chou Country, and then every time he arrives in a new world, he lights a nuclear warhead to celebrate the arrival of the king. How sorry for this talent.

Naruto, One Piece, movies, TV series, anime, novels, etc. Are all fine, but Chinese comics are not, they will invade ⭕

A mess. The introduction I wrote is about traveling through the heavens. The content is always scary and weird, and the layout is too small. It's scary and weird. It's a waste of time. No matter how you dig, you won't gain anything.

After reading so many Dragon Clan fanfics, is there not one with a villain?

In fact, the writing is okay, but it's too confusing and complicated, and many people only come here after seeing the title of Dragon Clan. As a result, you can't write well 😰

1. The problem of typos. Sometimes I write too hastily and forget about the beginning and end, and typos occur. This is something that can't be helped. The starting point is not like Tomato, which has an error correction function. This is a matter of personal negligence, mine. 2. The problem of reducing intelligence, this... Please forgive me, I really don't have that high IQ... It is common for me to fail high school mathematics in college... Therefore, in order to write a plot, reducing intelligence is something I have to do... After all, I am just a novice... 3. There is no priority, the protagonist has an infinite resurrection system, but I have never written him to commit suicide... This is my problem... There is no excuse for this, it is my fault... I'm sorry, I am Sha Bip! ! ! 4. Why do you always write horror plots? This... Is also my fault... I will change it later! ! Definitely change this! ! ! ---------------------------------------- I took a look at the follow-up reading. Although the actual follow-up reading is only in single digits, there are more than 20 brothers who are still watching. Thank you! ! Because I got yang just after I started the book, my head feels groggy, and I can't update less than 4,000 words every day. There are too many random plots, and now I can't get it back, so I can only see if I can make up for it. There are too few people watching now, so I will start to let myself go! As the saying goes, the end of the novel is the end of the novel, and I am going to start to let my wisdom fly! ! !

Is there a female protagonist in the Dragon Clan arc? Who is the heroine?

It's a bit uncomfortable to watch. It's not a problem with the plot. The writing is not very good and it looks a bit messy.

The setting is okay, but it's not written as I want to see it. The plot world is indescribably strange, and the setting of my sister is very disgusting now. Then there is a problem with Goldfinger. Each level consumes life for an unknown number of times. F is 10 days, and d is 1 year. Then A level starts directly with a thousand years, and the life span of the protagonist is not that long at the beginning. Go to Resident Evil and click on Big Ivan, and the score will increase and it will feel cold and slip away.

I feel like this sister's character is quite disgusting and unnecessary.

The book is very interesting and well written, but it is limited by the title of the book. Rather than looking at the quality of these reviews, it is better to read it yourself. At least I personally feel that this person is okay.

Author, please be more restrained. You can have infinity within infinity, but you have traveled through two worlds in the first 30 chapters, and then in chapter 100, you have traveled through four or five books in this horror world. If you press fast time to write, the tempo of Goldfinger is too slow. Can you relax a little? The performance of the horror world is that you want to suppress the combat power and slow down the pacing. It makes people feel disgusting. If you relax a little, what if the protagonist's combat power soars in this world? The simplest solution is to give a world with a higher energy level next time. It is not easy for Zhu Tianwen to find a high-energy map. If you are not going to press fast forward to write, and prepare to write in detail in each world, you can refer to Infinite Prophet. The omniscient hook is not small, but it will not force the pace just because the protagonist is invincible. Instead, use other methods to fill in the plot. For example, you can add leisure worlds, punishment worlds, and funny worlds, and use rule-based abilities to let the protagonist play omniscient and resurrected battles of wits as an adjustment between long plots. You can also supplement and upgrade the world view and merge the world world. Also, don't fill it with bad jokes anymore. It won't be funny if you use too many bad jokes like the psychotic operation. Finally, if you have an outline, sort it out and read it yourself to get a feel for it. If you don't have an outline, I hope you can have an outline first. That's it. PS updates are fairly stable, which is beyond reproach.

This combat power must have collapsed. Your longevity secret is useless. It's like a piece of story pieced together like a unit drama.

This plot is getting more and more exciting.

How did you come up with the character of the doctor? The beginning is martial arts training, right? Is the world obsessed with death games? Don't you want to deal with the system death reward? The Holy Spirit Sword Technique is not very useful, and the death game enhancement is not very useful, so add some points. Isn't this guy just trying to find a way to increase his lifespan, and then trying to find a way to die? What are you doing?

Does the author still remember that the protagonist is from the Ancestral Star and was trapped by Death Paradise?

BIG courage! How dare you mock my own mother, Tang Shenwang! You have a way to die! (Funny)

It's so well written. I haven't felt so happy reading it in one sitting for a long time. The author will update it soon.

Did the author write wherever he thought? I saw Chapter 133. Everything in the front is gone at the end, so the plug-ins are of no use at all.