I Opened a Pokemon Nursery

There is no problem with the qualifications of the breeding house. The biggest problem is the problem of creation. Whether it is the character image, the character of the elf, or the bond between them, the creation is very bad, and the author is always inexplicably poisonous. The one named Chen Ying does not make any sense, and she looks very exxious. After looking at the comment area, many people are dissatisfied with her, but the author just does not change it. , The two younger brothers of the protagonist are useless together, and are inexplicably disgusting. Zhu and Su, two tool men, feel nothing at all, which looks quite embarrassing. Chi's treatment seems to be focused on training, but the relationship between him and the elf is too awkward, and there is no bond at all. As for the protagonist, he is just a tool man of the system. He claims that the elf is a family member and a companion, but in fact it is just like that.

I always feel that breeding is not about opening a shop and giving away elves, but about raising elves if you have money and like elves. Only those who are right will be qualified to sell or give investments, and then only those who are qualified can get in. It depends on whether the elves like it or not. It is a two-way street in itself. It is a bond article, but after reading a few pictures, I feel that the protagonist is not good. I feel that this system is really good, and then the qualification problem is too rigid. There are no seven colors in my own qualifications. If you really talk about the foundation of understanding and so on, there are many things. Writing about the qualifications for breeding and playing feels a bit like a failure. Maybe it feels like it's easier to write if you have the qualifications, but elves mainly focus on fetters, and if they have enough fetters, they can super-evolve, so it's too rigid. Finally, I have a headache. I feel that the protagonist has no elf. You say that others raise elves and you raise trainers. See if others admit it. Who cares about this? What you look at is the bond of the protagonist, not the qualifications. Do you like the qualifications or the elf itself?

This is the first time I have seen such a boring elf text. Either don't give gold fingers, farm, develop, train and cultivate. Good guy, the elves lay eggs and level up by themselves. The protagonist really doesn't care about anything but feeding. Apart from the name, what else does this look like in elf literature? Or don't use the golden finger to swish, the level 75 Menas is useless, and the level 5 mythical beast is of no use? The snowy mountains are useless, the elf riots are even more poisonous, the death of a little carbon boy in such a big war is uncomfortable and unreasonable, the golden finger is directly given to two obedient level 100 beasts, and the cool article about being invincible at the beginning is better than yours!

I think the first point is the security measures of the ecological park, and the second point is that the protagonist does not have a powerful elf. Safety cannot be guaranteed The third point is the existence of elf hunters. The fourth point is the customer base. This does not need to be counted. At present, only 3-4 elves have been sold. It can be ignored. The fifth point is that there are many elves in the breeding house. You can find some nanny elves to help. The system also has a lottery. You can arrange to draw these.

The front part looks fresh, but the later part becomes more and more boring. It has no purpose and no main line. Since it is this kind of business, it must have some kind of main income, right? ? Money is made inexplicably, and there is no clear goal that can make me look at it. Talking about daily writing, you have to create a setting like elves rioting and killing people. The protagonist gives people the feeling of taking one step at a time, and he does not have his own elf. There are too many supporting characters. If you write a group portrait, you have to raise the standard of the protagonist. He is a color pen, and there are a lot of supporting characters.

This plot starts from Changbai Mountain and gets serious. Author, this is not a romance novel. When he meets a woman, the hero changes completely. It was obviously very good at the beginning, but I had no desire to follow it at the end. I hope the author can revise it and come back to it in a month.

Really, I unilaterally suggest that there should be no female protagonist. I really don't see what talent you have in handling emotional lines 😅 And I really don't understand why you went to Changbai Mountain. This kind of farming-oriented story is quite good at home and living in ordinary life, but when it comes to things, it goes a little sideways.

Is the qualification division a system recognized by the alliance? There should be very sound detection methods, so it's not easy to detect leaks! Moreover, the protagonist directly revealed his ability to see the elf's qualifications.

Can you please stop letting this guy from Chu become the spokesman for the ground system? When others come, they have no basis for friendship, they have not even compensated for the damage they caused, and they have a bad attitude towards the protagonist and others after the damage, so the protagonist is ready to give him mythical beasts and resources. The protagonist is at least a trainer with the strength of a king. If others cause damage and mess up the situation, let them forget it and not teach them a lesson, but still reward them like this. The character design is too disgusting. The spokesperson is at least a future partner, so you have to screen it. Isn't it okay? Don't just give it to someone randomly. Even if you see a Sakaki who is not more qualified than this person? I just read this book and I really think this book is fairy grass. Now the plot is getting more and more poisonous. I really can't stand it. People's personalities can be changed when they are young, but now they are adults and their personalities are so naughty and bad. Most of them can't be changed.

It feels like the alliance is like a sieve, anyone can check the protagonist, but the protagonist's strength information is well hidden. The result is that the protagonist is like a soft persimmon. Everyone thinks they can control the protagonist. There is no follow-up on the origin of the person who robbed the elf when he went to Russia. The policeman he met was also inexplicable, and he couldn't stay at home. People didn't realize this when they met Chu Jiaming who came to cause havoc and made the commercial street a mess. It made people's blood pressure high. I mean, why do you write these stupid things in daily writing? Either don't write about those who cause trouble, or solve the troublemakers thoroughly and show your strength. Don't make it so that everyone thinks they can control the protagonist.