The Supreme Devouring Starry Sky

After reading a few chapters, I have a few doubts. What is the significance of the existence of ancient martial arts on the earth? Why do the world beasts who start as true gods need to learn from the ancient martial arts of the earth at the apprentice level? Does the heroine promote the plot, or is it just to prove that the protagonist is not a eunuch? Why does the protagonist dare not practice when he comes into contact with the Five Hearts to Heaven Cultivation Method for the first time? He feels that he is practicing too fast for fear of being noticed by the original universe. What are his thoughts?

The author said that the protagonist's world beast clone has the will of a true god, while the main body has the will of a cosmic lord. He also said that the protagonist's state of mind is very powerful! But I feel that the protagonist has no mood and will at all. The protagonist's mood and will are not as good as an ordinary person. And if the author wants to express it, he just writes it bluntly and directly! And I write it very frequently. Just one setting like this is enough to fill up a lot of words!

When I first saw that the protagonist was going to the giant ax fighting arena to learn the moves of the giant axe, my first thought was that the author had lost his mind for the sake of the plot. Why do you think so? Because I remember that there was a giant ax and chaos monument in the original universe. Isn't it the same for that force? In addition, the limitations of the giant ax are really too many, but then I think about it. The powerful ax is the secret method, not the magic test. What the protagonist needs to learn is the secret method. There doesn't seem to be anything wrong with this. Although I convinced myself, I remember that those who learn from me will live, and those who resemble me will die. No matter how well you learn the secret techniques created by others, no one else can use them well. The Lord of Chaos City is much better than the giant ax in teaching students this. See how long it took Luo Feng to create the ultimate secret technique? You must always combine what you have learned to create your own secret method and find your own way. So I still don't think it's necessary to go to the Great Ax Arena. Much of what Giant Ax learned was taught by the original ancestor, and the Lord of Chaos City was also taught by the original ancestor. I don't think Great Ax learned much more than Chaos City Lord. It's just that the giant ax talent is higher than Chaos, so he became the strongest!

Realm beasts directly eat the origin of the universe. They can swallow the origin of the universe from outside the universe sea. The first-order realm beasts have ninth-level combat power. The sixth-order king has at least 14-level combat power. It is the peak strength of the True God of the Void. It requires the strength of the Eternal True God to kill. The world beast devours the origin of the original universe. The will of the origin cannot be resisted. The supreme rules stipulate

Whatever you are afraid of, the original will of the original universe must be targeted comprehensively as early as when you enter the original universe, not while you are practicing cultivation. Practice boldly. You must know that you are a human soul, not a native beast. You just took away the beast.

The creative writing is not bad, but the attitude and mentality of the protagonist do not match. It is very tiring to read, and the author's wording is not suitable. I feel it is quite embarrassing. I hope this book can be changed later, otherwise the subject matter will be wasted. The score of this book will not be too great. Even if I really like it, I will be affected by the wording and the main theme. The attitude of the character is neither good nor bad, and there is no need for the author to deliberately suppress the protagonist in the early stage, otherwise there is no point in this trick. Most readers will only read the early stage. If you are not attractive in the early stage, no matter how good your writing is in the later stage, no one will read it. If you make good changes in the early stage and suck in the later stage, the results will not be bad.

Create a clone to accompany your wife and children. It's so cuckold. I can't bear it. It's better to have no heroine. There's no role anyway. You have to be a cuckold.

Speed ​​of update, I am not afraid of your grandeur, but I am afraid that you are petty, splitting the cosmic sea, and evolving the primitive continent.

If you're afraid of this or that, just stop practicing.

This book of yours is very strange. It made me, a bookworm of 10 years, feel unusual. It was a novice when I first read it, and it was still a novice when I continued to read it, but! Your book has a special charm, which makes people feel itchy and wants to read it. It becomes more and more enjoyable and becomes less and less satisfying. Ah, I suddenly understood, this is not a novice article, this is an awesome article, please accept my worship and give me a monthly ticket. Can you add a supporting cast to me? I've already thought of a name. It's called Cheng Zipi. This book is the weirdest one I've read among all the Devouring fandoms. You're such a geek.

A lot of intelligence-reducing content is so annoying. The questions are not funny. The self-talk is very serious. It feels like a bunch of lunatics are chatting together. It's so annoying. It's the third time I've given up. I want to keep it but I want to give it up.

Um... Let me tell you the introduction first. I wonder if you will add settings to the clones later, but the original setting is that there can only be one realm beast in the end, and he becomes the king of realm beasts. What's more, it's still your clone, not your true body. So... I'm afraid that all of your clone brothers will become food rations in the end 🙂

Work harder, write faster, but not too fast, the kind that guarantees quality. Don't be pressured, just do what you want, and put it on the shelves as soon as possible.

Why do I need to put poison in the beginning? In the second chapter, I whisper on earth that my clone is the true god... Why do I need to write such a paragraph? What's the point? Screen readers?

I came here through reviews, and after reading it, the writing is pretty good, and the character setting is also very good. It is my favorite type. I decided to add it to the bookshelf. I am worthy of signing a contract! Come on!

NB, I really haven't seen such a good one in a long time. There are some who enjoy the writing, some who have good writing skills, and some who love the subject matter. The only one who combines the three is you, author. One word, nb will give it to you.

A real beast from the divine realm who learns rubbish secrets is so slow to hit the wall and die.

Is this gone?

I have only one request, and I hope it can be written down.

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The limit of the universe, genes 100,000 times, realm 100,000, yes, really awesome! !

The settings in many places are made up randomly. When did the original ancestor have level 12 combat power? Comparing the soul secret method created by the original ancestor with the Lianyuan Technique? How can it be compared? The conditions for the use of Lianyuan Technique are to transform one's will into a saint. The original soul secret method is not worthy of carrying shoes. He's so unreasonable anyway. It is contradictory. In the first part, it is said that the original ancestor may take action against the original universe again after he escapes from trouble, but in the second part, he says that the original ancestor should have figured it out and will not violate ethics and attack the original universe again? ? ? When did he figure it out? The world lord enters the cosmic sea? Haven't you woken up? What if there is true God's will? Can the body withstand stress? What is this thing written about? It also says that even the strongest will cannot be killed by the Lord of the Universe in the original universe. You don't know the secret art of will, so what can you do if you have a high will?

It's rubbish among rubbish. The setting is all wrong, the logic is all messed up, the reasoning is all rubbish, and the plot is all a shark's arm.

What's there to be stubborn about? The world beasts can't find human souls. Human beings are still timid and always talk about mountain climbers. The mountain guest doesn't pay much attention to the earth at all. He only pays attention to Luo Feng because he cultivates the Nine Tribulations Secret Code. Otherwise, even if you are an Earthling who has cultivated to the point of becoming a venerable master, he will not even look at you. If you don't practice the Nine Tribulations Secret Code, people won't even bother to glance at you.

I have read this author's book, but I have forgotten what it is about. I guess it is a little better than the average street fighter. It is the strongest person under the half-step peak Dzogchen Platinum Three-Star God above level 5. I read it a long time ago.

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After reading twenty chapters, I felt inexplicable. I always used the mountain guest as an example. I couldn't bear it anymore and ran away.

Don't be surprised if you use your valuable land to propagate your own seedlings. "Swallowing: Beginning with the Great Nirvana"

What a shame, I dare not use teleportation and clones at the beginning, and turn around to reveal that I am a reincarnation.

What are you writing about? I got a headache from reading In the Earth for no apparent reason. Swallowing the Starry Sky is obviously a book about passionate struggle. Why did you change this to something like this? The whole article is full of childish obscenities and yet I think I wrote it very well, so let's go.