Starting as a Demon-Exorcising Police Officer

This one isn't as good as your previous work, "Invincible Hero System." It's too verbose; you could make it more concise.

What's the quality of the top three best-selling books on Qidian these days? This book, which I've been reading quite well, isn't even on the list. Most of the books on the list aren't as good as this one. Is it really true that you have to pay to get on the top three best-selling lists these days?

I don't know what's going on? This writing style gives me an unusually familiar feeling. It could have been a masterpiece, but unfortunately, the battle scenes are overly explained. I'm not here to read martial arts manuals; why constantly tell us about the scheming and plotting? It's supposed to be enjoyable, but it always feels like it's abandoned halfway through.

You've gone too far with this! It's just a challenge, yet you've padded it with tens of thousands of words, and you're only updating 4,000 words a day. What am I supposed to read at this rate?

I don't require a harem, but I definitely need one!

The plot is okay, but it's too verbose; each explanation takes up an entire chapter.

Well written, just please avoid any plot holes like those in "The Contract of Life". If you do, it'll definitely be a flop, and the world-building and cultivation system will collapse.

This is way too long-winded! Too much nonsense! No satisfying moments, dude! Keep it up!!

Chapter 54 Harem Tendencies Goodbye

Instead of evolving towards successful themes, he resorted to self-destructive tactics by writing about obscure topics; this flop is a case of reaping what he sowed.