Settled in Qixia Town and Started with Qingwen

It was fine in the front. Although he was weak, he was not stupid. From the moment he met his younger sister, he felt that something was wrong. It was going to be over, and he was going to be ruined by the girl. After I met Di Yun, I started to write about Snow Mountain Tour. I didn't know what I was writing. You can be weak but you can't be smart! There are no decent martial arts in the first few dozen pictures that can be understood, but Hua Tiegan was not killed even though his acupoints were tapped, and he was still left. You said there will be an explanation later, but you don't know what happened after that, but you can't stand it at all when you become kind. The subject matter is considered good among mixed martial arts. I really think the first part is good, but the later parts get worse and worse. Maybe it's because I was too good at writing. Why am I so angry? When I saw Chasing Di Yun, I didn't expect what would happen next. I ordered about 70 pictures in a row. I really wanted to vomit blood. Although it didn't cost much, I felt very angry.

After finishing the game so far, I feel that I am involved in everything but not involved in anything. Every day is just what the protagonist does when he opens his eyes, a hammer here and a stick here and there, and there is no focus on what he does. In addition, there are too many forces appearing at the same time, the plot is too scattered, and there is no focus. It has everything or nothing. There is also Qingwen. At the beginning of the chapter, she accepted her despite the pressure of readers and devoted herself to cultivating her. So far, she is still locked in a small dark room with no sense of existence. As for Xiao Longnu, I'm not saying that it's not good to be a heroine, but as the author, you haven't written out the feeling at all. How can you impress Bing Xin by just meeting once in a few days for an awkward chat and giving small gifts? Moreover, the content of the chat cannot be written, and it is completely meaningless to read. Xiao Longnu and Yang Guo lived together for several years and lived and died more than ten years apart before they reached perfection. You can't convince me at all. Some suggestions after reading, I hope the author will read them.

In terms of comprehensive martial arts, the gold-type martial arts is really not ranked high. For ordinary people, it is too much. There may be a few people in the gold-type martial arts who are similar to Zhang Sanfeng. In another world, they would be equally awesome. However, without plug-ins, ordinary people do not need to rely on gold-type martial arts. Zhou Liu's Liuxu Gong, the Emperor's Series of Martial Arts, Li Chenzhou's Thirty-six World-shaking Miracles, Xiao Qiushui's Heavenly Book of Forgetting Love, Guan Qi's innate body-shattering invisible sword energy, Ba Siba's spiritual power of transforming the sky and striking the earth, Yan Nantian's Wedding Clothes Divine Art, Yihua Palace's Mingyu Kung Fu, the Demon Sect's Ruyi-linked Eight Moves of Heavenly Demons and the Great Compassion of Heaven and Earth Yin and Yang. Which of Yan Shisan's fifteen deadly swords is not more powerful than the gold martial arts?

It's almost fifty chapters, and the protagonist still hasn't learned any martial arts, but he hasn't ridden a donkey to look for it. I remember looking for the Huahua old man in Wulin Gaiden, but I haven't found him yet. During this period, I have been thinking of ways to learn martial arts. It's pretty good so far, but the current plot of martial arts is a bit boring. Also, I have a suggestion, can I arrange a martial arts genius for the protagonist? I have seen too many useless protagonists who can only rely on golden fingers to become stronger. Anyway, the protagonist is a little older and has missed the best period of learning martial arts. The golden finger will not collapse. I don't know what golden fingers the author has arranged for the protagonist in terms of learning martial arts. It is not about system flow and adventure, but also about the realm of internal strength. The talent of martial arts genius can be used to learn moves. You cannot make rapid progress just because of chance encounters.

The beginning of the story is quite good, the subject matter is interesting, the character descriptions have flaws but they are reasonable, the plot is cliche, but it should be very promising if it is well written, but it is weird that poisonous points pop up from time to time, I don't know if it is intentional. Especially the plot of the female characters, including Qingwen in the title of the book, if all were removed, it would not even change the whole story. I'm also baffled by the female characters to be included. It really feels like it would be more streamlined if I didn't write them. If I don't know how to write, it would be better if there is no female protagonist or a single female protagonist. Now I feel that it starts to talk about how to respect women and highlight the differences between modern people and ancient people, but then the female characters are treated like objects, especially Qingwen. If she is deleted and changed to the protagonist, he can control things in the space at will, and it will have no impact on the plot at all. Compared with the one next door, the first friend is written as Tom Cat, and yours is Qingwen, and you can easily see the difference. They can write partners and pets as family members, while you write a character who should be a family member as a farm care robot. I think your writing direction is wrong. You settled in Qixia Town. Qixia Town has almost no role. Qingwen is required at the beginning, and Qingwen is even more dispensable. The protagonist's personality is also changeable. He is very fascinated and fascinated.

What can I say? In this book, Xing Putou feels like he has almost become a minor villain and is uncomfortable. Although he is greedy for petty gains in the movie and TV show, he is really a serious and responsible good person. Don't keep targeting him. Change someone or add a villain. If it doesn't work, move him away.

Does the New Year have to be disgusting? You started releasing disgusting characters when you were about fifty chapters into Two Detectives, and now it's over a hundred and they're still like toads. I've ordered them all since they were released, and now I really can't stand them anymore. I really don't understand why they are so disgusting during the Chinese New Year.

If you want to see the Red Mansion, you can leave. It has nothing to do with the Red Mansion. It is just the name of the Jia family. According to the plot, it can be replaced by the Sun family and the Li family. It's like when I go to the Red Mansion Supermarket downstairs to buy a pack of cigarettes

The author writes about the protagonist. Run around and participate in the plots of various novels. But he offends a lot of people, but rarely kills others. Deliberately leave enemies behind and create new plots. It's a bit too poisonous.

The pace is a little slow. It's already thirty-eight chapters and the protagonist doesn't even see the shadow of this martial arts secret book. How long will it take to develop his skills? And the protagonist is still a black householder now, why don't you open a household registration as soon as possible?

When it comes to learning martial arts, it's impossible to hand it over if you don't have a connection with Lao Bai. Although the original book teaches Shopkeeper Qian, it should only teach the acupuncture skills. The real essence of Sunflower Acupoint Master is probably not taught. It's okay to deal with ordinary people, but it will definitely not be able to do it when you meet a master. Compared with the black market, I still think the old man is reliable, and the black market is only second-rate martial arts at best.

This book feels like a sitcom review. It's already thirty chapters, but the pig's feet still don't have any martial arts, and they rely on space to trick people. I feel extremely panicked.

The title of the book is Qingwen, but why does it have to be Qingwen? It has 100 chapters and only has a few lines, so it's just like Dream of Red Mansions.

I don't know how many people can be persuaded to retreat in Chapter 7. Someone you pity, but not yet very close to. You take the initiative to expose the space.

Chapter 177: Death from Poison, someone just stabbed you hard in the back, and when you look back, you look like a pitiful person, explaining your origins and helping to send your senior brother off. How many people in the world are pitiful? Guo Furong's adoptive father will kill him whenever he says. Did he offend you? Even the poisonous old man pooped on his head and you didn't even fart. If you can't stand it anymore, delete the book and see you again.

Shuiba has written almost 50 chapters and 100,000 words, and each chapter can be read. However, Shuiba has almost 100,000 words and there is no plot development.

Յ(¯¯Յ) Complains 1 Most people should see the title Qingwen and think it is related to the Jia family. But in fact, there is only Qingwen in 35 and the one who was killed. It has nothing to do with it 2 Qixia Town should be a martial arts side story. Because I am ignorant and have not read it, the logic of many characters is very awkward. He doesn't listen to others' advice. He has a high self-esteem and can't do his job well. I saw in the review that he is a filial son and very loyal. If you haven't seen the original version, you really don't think he has any advantages. Anyway, when you see it now, he is a little person who is greedy for petty gains and has little ability. A very annoying character Protagonist I would call him the least influential protagonist. His presence is less than that of Dihua and the behind-the-scenes streamer. You can say that he is not strict. He never joins the plot and is like a behind-the-scenes streamer watching a movie. He was said to be a goubar selling marbles in front of outsiders and let people know how much he sold them. He almost got betrayed when he went to hunt for Orion. Knowing that Zeng Jing was here, the group of killers would definitely come, but he never thought about how to deal with it And now I feel that as long as the people in the inn do anything, they are worthy of forgiveness. If I haven't seen the original filter, I feel like I want to beat him up. For example, Guo Furong disguised herself as a man and went to compete in martial arts to attract a bride. When she got into trouble and was held accountable, she just said lightly, "I slashed her and I apologized." ? Although it is impossible for you to hack him to death, shouldn't your attitude be better? He is still an inn guest. I can only say that you are blind if you don't go bankrupt╮(╯＿╰)╭ Well, no one should have seen such a long comment, haha Finally, I would like to talk about my personal feeling. The author should not use too many original plots. Most of the funny plots are not realistic. Reprinting depends on the writing and the original filter. At least now it feels awkward without having read the original work. |ω) Just complain and be active in the water area. Don't spray me.

My suggestion is not to set any traps for the protagonist. To learn martial arts, just learn Beiming Shen Kung to a certain level. Then hang out in Tongfu Inn and develop slowly. There will still be many monster bosses appearing in Tongfu Inn. Lao Bai clicks on it, and the protagonist sucks it directly. Once the internal strength is in place, it will be easy to learn any martial arts.

I've read Chapter 20 and I don't know what you're going to do. Let's go.

Slow progress in martial arts is not a problem, because this novel focuses on the daily life of the world. The protagonist's martial arts is low in the early stage, and he will choose to make breakthroughs in other directions when faced with difficulties. This can better unfold the plot, interact with more characters, and make people look forward to the subsequent growth of the protagonist. If the force value is full in the early stage, it is easy to encounter some difficulties. The protagonist will go up and give two palms to finish the work. In the boring cycle of everyone worshiping him, he will fall behind.

It's a bit of a hammock in the east and a ham in the west. It's not fun if there's no main thread.

The author is great, plus the plot of the strange hero Yizhimei, accepting Yan Sanniang, 100,000 taels of gold.

Not bad. Although it is a mixed martial arts book, the main line is clear and the plot is progressive. It does not follow the original plot like other books. I just refined the characters, combined the main lines of several dramas, and performed them with different characters. Not rushed, not slow, very suitable for the appetite.

In such a mixed martial arts show, who is the heroine? Is there any sister Lin? You can have more female protagonists, but I suggest you don't have too many. If this kind of novel with too many female protagonists is not written well, it will offend many fans of the original work. If there are fewer female protagonists, it may offend some people who like it all, but that is only a small part.

Yes, the starting capital of ten thousand taels is enough for the protagonist to live comfortably for a lifetime. After that, he will learn martial arts and paint the elderly. You also need to have a good relationship with Bai Zhantang. Bai Zhantang has a good character. If something happens, he can still help. Otherwise, there is really no sense of security in this world.

Okay, the plot is okay, but after so many chapters and you still don't know any martial arts, it's too overwhelming. Even if it's a third-rate boxing technique, just practice it first. It's too dangerous. Although it looks exciting, it's too exciting.

When I saw Qixia Town, I thought of Xialan

One chapter a day is too little.

Very nice, please update soon.

Yes, it's interesting. The author will update quickly.