Marvel: I'm Really Just an Ordinary Person

In the Thanos movie, losing his arm involved destroying six Infinity Stones, not like Banner, who lost his arm after losing his finger.

By the time I reached Chapter 40, I roughly understood something: the author was trying his best to weaken the protagonist's presence. First, without understanding the concept of parallel universe travel, he rashly traveled back and forth between two universes. It wasn't until his second return to the X-Men universe that he realized he couldn't control the timing of each travel. In other words, it's very likely that when Arthur's original body returns to the Marvel Universe next time, the Age of Ultron will have already begun, and the Civil War might even have already taken place. Don't say the plot will fall apart if you don't write it this way; if it will, it's because you lack the ability. And do you really think the protagonist is already that strong? He only gained Celestial-level power after the Marvel Cinematic Universe events began. How are you going to fight Dormammu later? How are you going to deal with Scarlet Witch? How are you going to quell the multiverse created by Spider-Man?

The disciple can copy any ability, regardless of its type, as long as the attacker sees it. Even a transcendent being using half their power can only fight the disciple to a draw. It's not that they don't use their abilities, but rather they fear having all their powers copied. The disciple's power lies in copying and amplifying the opponent's abilities the instant they see their attack.

Charles is a man to be killed; he's a hypocrite. Evidence: He did not stop human experimentation with mutants. Using that amplifier Hank made, Charles can find mutants all over the world. Human experimentation inevitably involves keeping a large number of mutants together, so experimental sites are not difficult to find. Then he could stop them from experimenting, or modify their memories, but he doesn't care. The Sentinel robots were able to wreak havoc, even to the point of extinction for mutants. The ringleader was Charles, who didn't stop the dwarf doctor, even though it would have been easy to alter the dwarf's memories.

It's always been strange that it was said that collecting all the Infinity Stones would make destroying the universe as easy as snapping your fingers. But it turns out that you can't destroy the universe without snapping your fingers.

There are too many clones, and the combat power is too chaotic. Captain America, Hawkeye, and Black Widow are at best at the street level, not even on the surface, let alone at the planetary level. Captain America is a leader-like figure, but his combat power isn't high. Storm Thor and Captain Marvel can both suppress Thanos in his normal state. In Avengers: Infinity War, Thor severely injured Thanos with one axe. In Avengers: Endgame, even without the Infinity Stones, he couldn't stop Captain Marvel at all. Moreover, when Captain Marvel first appeared, she was very strong and went to fight Thanos alone. And you're still worrying about this and that in your writing?

If you're writing something so frustrating, what the hell are you writing?!

It feels like the author is just writing whatever comes to mind, and this kind of plot device is so clichéd. To write something engaging, you need to focus on the story to attract readers. I've only gotten to Hela's part so far, and I can't continue. It feels disjointed and incoherent. The outline should have already determined whether the author wants to create a behind-the-scenes figure, a participant, or just someone having fun, and then act accordingly based on the protagonist's personality (●—●). Of course, being able to bring your own fantasies to life is already a huge success. Keep it up!

It looks rather frustrating, and feels a bit like a rip-off.

I don't know why, but I can't stand any Marvel fanfiction that features mutants. Can someone explain?