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Full order, first of all, it is clear that I am not a black man, but I have deleted the book. The reasons are listed below What the hell are you writing about in the playoffs? The two games between EDG and JDG were long and smelly. I wanted to write down how many yards I moved the mouse in each frame, but I just skipped a game. Then the most unbearable thing is Yasuo fighting JDG. I know it's a chore, but I can't eq flash Sword Demon + Tsar and then q flash kill Tsar, right? We can't let the group of figures speak mindlessly as Yasuo's wind wall blocks Wei's ultimate move, right? It can't be written on the same page that TES won 3-1 and then JD. Com posted a 2-3 loss on Weibo, right? Brother, I read the book line by line. I couldn't help but read these two paragraphs of yours. After reading them, I deleted them. Actually, the writing at the beginning is really good, and I like to read it, but the role of the conductor is diluted as it is written, and the whole article is full of water. The same sentence appears twenty-four or five times in seven or eight chapters. It is exaggerated, but the perception is really bad. There is also a problem of typos. Are there still typos when it is put on the shelves? Am I paying to see it? Once it's on the shelves, don't you care about the quality? I quickly broke my guard and used negative emotion points to upgrade your writing skills and ideas. I can only give you a score of 30 for this article. Deleted, deleted
During the TT fight, Huanfeng was proven right. Even the King of Lights can't do anything once he starts driving on the road. However, it is already common for him to start driving. Logically speaking, he shouldn't complain about TheShy, after all, he is the first champion. But his nc fans blame his teammates every time he starts driving, causing public outrage. Look at the competitions on Weibo now, do you really think it's all the sunspots who are trolling?
I feel that the protagonist can absorb the negative emotions of the audience and directly start a group of zombies
The author directly hid Luna in his crotch for a summer game and described a summer game. Until the summer finals, he still hasn't been able to take it out. The next plot is probably a bo5 life and death battle. JDG is forced to release Luna, and then TES chooses to torture her.
The pace is too slow and the water level is very high. I have to play a game after more than 60 palms. The water level is too high.
Okay, Luna will hide it in the next book, bye👋👋
I put up with the procrastination, and I put up with hiding Luna for a season, but what do you mean by spending one or two thousand words on trolling every few chapters? If you can really squirt out flowers, just make them different every time. If you copy and paste the same thing every time, how dare you send it to the V chapter and collect money? This is no longer a question of water or not, it is simply a matter of randomly changing and posting the same content dozens of times! I really want to shout: RXX, refund your money!
It's so popular before it's even released, and the pace is so slow. Brother, are you not considering subscribing at all? ?
If you continue to write like this, even if you win the s game, the audience will still question the main character. You can't write a routine until death.
1. There are too many repetitive contents 2. Shui Luna has lost dozens of chapters 3. Initially, Xia An was good, but by the end, I was almost sick to death. Goodbye!
I have subscribed all the way to today's chapter, and I really can't catch up. I agree with another comment that asked the author if he has a negative emotion collection system. Instead of calling it a revitalizing support, this book should be renamed a dragon-losing jungler. The protagonist has no positive feedback when he plays well, and his teammates keep falling off. For several days in a row, all the chapters read are disgusting to his teammates.
The author is awesome, Luna is so good at writing
You are really slow. One Luna hasn't appeared until more than 130 chapters. Really, it's a good thing that guns are banned now, otherwise people would be shot in the face.
. . . . I'm fully subscribed and can speak, commentate, and even retire from the profession all because of the male protagonist's failure. It's too forceful to suppress the intelligence, and there are very few bright spots in the game. .
This Luna probably won't be used even if the version is changed. I don't know what the author is hiding. Even when playing EDG, when is it going to be used? World Championship? Was it still the Luna version at that time?
Forcibly giving Guan the shape of God, every time Guan speaks, it will be poisonous milk, without exception
I originally wanted to read about e-sports, but after reading dozens of chapters, I realized that it was a novice harem story disguised as e-sports.
It is recommended to change the name to "Starting Point: A Revitalizing Author, Book Friends Have Broken Their Guards"
It's already been 20 chapters since the last official competition, and it's been 30 chapters since this training was written. Why doesn't the author take some control?
Luna wrote more than a hundred chapters without appearing, was mentioned repeatedly, and then was banned by Lucian at the last moment. Something wrong? Is this an amazing and innovative combination? Use this to set off?
It's really rubbish. You haven't even finished a book before you start a new one. You're trying to kill yourself!
A little bit of achievement, but have you forgotten your roots? I ask for leave every now and then, but I don't know how much I owe? Waste of all orders abandoned
Updates are slow, watery, and ink-stained, but I'm embarrassed to open it in two ways
Forced 2 to 2 assist with zero effect
Weishui, look at the back full of Taobao awesomeness, is this Taobao? Even Tao Bo and Chong A can repeat 2 stages. In the second stage, level A with him, or go straight up and up. Personally, I think it is better than repeating. Or I don't believe that you can't figure out the skill connection sequence by yourself while watching the game. In addition, flashing q and flashing q are in different orders. I hope the small details can be better
Is the left hand a fox or a Silas? The hero doesn't see it?
This book is very light-hearted and enjoyable. I laughed so much that my stomach ached. I couldn't understand why so many people criticized it.
Let me ask first. Is there such a novel? . Just be a coach and each player has their own skills. Almost like a manager.
Awesome, Yasuo's eq flash followed by q flash
There's nothing interesting to watch, it's too clumsy. Every time, the whole world always looks down on the protagonist, and then I write a lot of comments about looking down on the protagonist. The main content is not much. I read a hundred pictures and couldn't stand it anymore, so I ran away.