Naruto: This Uchiha Is Too Serious

It's so poisonous, I bought this at lv2. First of all, let's just get the pig and butterfly in Pig, Deer and Butterfly wrong. Secondly, the protagonist is always described as being awesome and powerful, but in actual combat, he is just a shit, a talkative player who is not worthy of the name. Then in about forty chapters, he said that he wanted to kill Xiangling and his daughter to absorb nutrients. They were completely perverted. Although they were not good people, they would not be the same scum as the white cloth with red dots in the country (just like you, a 10-billionaire, killed two people who you don't know and can't harm you without any grudges). Finally, since when did anyone writing a Naruto fanfic have to show off their political struggles that are full of funnels? Can you write well if you have the writing skills? Besides, if you really want to read a political struggle article, do you need to read anime fanfic?

I think this book can be read as a mindless novel. It is very relaxing and happy to read without thinking, and can make people feel funny. However, there are also obvious deficiencies in some details, such as: some timelines do not match up (the ages of some characters and the time of events, etc.), Some settings are wrong (Zig, Deer, Butterfly, etc.), And the protagonist's three views are incorrect (when However, it may just be inconsistent with my three views. If you feel like me that the main character's three views are not very upright, post 1) and it is too awkward (appropriate humor can indeed make people easily attract readers, but too much will be counterproductive). I suggest the author revise and revise, and finally strengthen the character creation a little bit. Good luck, author! The above only represents my personal understanding and I don't like to make mistakes, thank you

Fine or not?

It's poisonous, run! To suppress combat power, various methods such as Eternal Eye and Immortal Mode were introduced a few years ago. A few years later, I don't know how Goldfinger strengthened the protagonist. Just like that, driving Susan, he was almost seriously injured by an old Hiruzen. Diaphragm should kill people.

I endured it before, what is the latest chapter? I wrote that my own jounin was only over 30, and 12 of them were killed at one time. How could you use it to get a new sword? Is it a dragon-slaying knife or some other magical weapon? No! ! It's just a conductive knife, isn't it? Asuma in the original novel has it, and so does White Fang. Is it very precious? You said you acted, can you act more like it? 12 High-end combat powers just for one knife? It's like if you broke your leg after trying porcelain, and people don't know you are porcelain. You don't want 100,000 or 30,000 or 50,000. You want 3,000?

My first feeling after watching it was that it was very embarrassing.

Akimichi is a pig to Ino Shikacho and I actually laughed. Yunfen is trying to gain popularity?

The labels on these works must be funny or unethical. Obviously it is a serious matter but he is always so naughty, which makes me laugh out loud.

Pure History Lightning Protection, I read it while holding back my nausea. After reading more than 250 chapters, I felt so sick today 😭

Awesome, the plot in just a dozen chapters is neat and concise. It's rare to see such an enjoyable fanfic.

Xiao Wu deceived Tang San and forced Tang San to commit suicide, Ning Rongrong killed Oscar, and Zhu Zhuqing stabbed Dai Mubai to death. A Yin kills Tang Hao, Liu Erlong kills the master, come and take a look, just click in to watch. Start hunting the protagonist from Douluo

Uchiha Itachi traveled through Douluo, opened the Sharingan, awakened the three great artifacts, killed all the Shrek Seven Monsters, established the Uchiha clan and the Konoha Ninja Village, and became the Hokage in the Douluo world. Come and take a look. Book title: Douluo: Uchiha Itachi God, click in to read it. Naruto's mother and Konan are also in Douluo, and all members of the Akatsuki organization are resurrected in Douluo.

After reading the second picture, Uchiha was a suspect during the Nine-Tails Rebellion, and Danzo led someone to stop him. Is this wrong? If you really don't stop it. Wouldn't that mean asking the suspect to save the fire set by the criminal? Wouldn't that add fuel to the fire? In reality, when the police are arresting relatives, they have to avoid participating in the operation, let alone let the suspects catch the criminals. It is said that the higher-ups will not help you. If you don't provide evidence to prove your innocence, who will dare to speak for you? Who dares to take such a big blame for the death of a fourth-generation couple? What do the people think? In the real world, suspects of this level have to stay in jail even if they have not been convicted. Either they have evidence to prove their innocence, or they wait for others to find the evidence. Until then, prison is your destination,

This and that, the best in the ninja world, I haven't seen anyone killed, I don't kill anyone with a reputation, I let him go in various ways, and then I beat up the protagonist, and then let him go, I read two or three hundred chapters, I haven't seen you kill anyone, how many times did Orochimaru let him go, there are various reasons why he can't use all his strength here and there, disgusting, rely on the answer. Leave the Kazekage to plot this and that, but you can use it several times but don't use it. Hey, Orochimaru found out and fixed it. I'm really convinced. It's so stupid. He also said that he can't use all his strength for fear of being beaten. He's already been beaten. You don't use it. How can you win after fighting for a long time? No one with a name on the opposite side is dead. Time and time again. It's disgusting.

You can't tell the difference between a pig, a deer and a butterfly, but you still write a novel about you🐴 Go ahead, have you read the original novel? You just write blindly, but if you read a little bit, you won't be able to tell the difference between a pig, a deer and a butterfly.

The most common method used by authors to highlight the protagonist's character is that when others are communicating with the protagonist, the protagonist is laughing and talking about him. When the other person feels that he cannot communicate, the protagonist points to the other person and says, "I'm in a hurry, the protagonist is like a 🐵"

He couldn't even figure out the most basic common sense of Hokage. It's embarrassing to come here and write about Naruto.

Can't tell the difference between pig, deer and butterfly? Are you writing about Naruto?

I don't know when it started, but Naruto fan fiction is full of conspiracy theories.

Everything else is fine, but the Akimichi clan is a butterfly among pigs, deer, and butterflies. Just because others are fat, you can't take it for granted that they are pigs. It doesn't matter if the fanfic is a little different, but this is a flaw.

Brothers, retreat quickly! There are so many poison points that I can't count them. The protagonist's daily routine is the psychological activities of the protagonist. It's not difficult to kill Sarutobi, but I can't! It's not difficult to kill Obito, but not me! It's not difficult to kill Madara, but not me! Reason? The reason is that I'm afraid of Hagoromo.

Has the author offended someone? I've read a few chapters, and I can't say the writing is particularly good, but it's above average. Why are there so many comments?

The protagonist showed kindness every time he saw Orochimaru, and then Orochimaru didn't hesitate to bite the protagonist. I was really convinced.

A yuppie with a piece of shit and water, this kind of yuppie is recommended by the author to be shot

Shit among shit, a batch of water, get a Danzo and die after hundreds of chapters

From the beginning to the end, it's so disgusting

It's purely disgusting, f4 wants to exterminate the Uchiha and has been taking action. The protagonist's biggest achievement against F4 is to kill a bunch of cannon fodder. The combat power of the ninja is the first, and the senjutsu is comparable to Hashirama. Alas, but I just don't use it. I just have to keep letting the enemy run away, and then let the opponent recover and recuperate before coming back to deal with the protagonist and Konoha. The protagonist has abilities, but just doesn't kill. For various reasons, he wins, talks, runs away, and comes back to trouble the protagonist. In the middle and later stages, it's almost a cycle like this. Almost no one named in the original book will die.

The dialogue between the characters is really awkward. Please write a Japanese comic, not a Chinese comic.

The early setting is very good and the characterization is great. But after reading more than 300 chapters, I just couldn't bear it anymore. After more than 300 chapters, I didn't even kill a named ninja? The protagonist only fights passers-by? Others assassinate you and stab you in the back. You have never killed anyone. It is pure daily writing without any passion and blood. What you write is nothing more than nonsense.

Do you think it is humorous? What you write, the actions of the characters, and what the protagonist says, do you think it is a combination of this world? You have written hundreds of thousands of words of speeches, and you are holding orchids and singing with your fingers. It is really a drama.