The Dawn Trail of the American Comic World

At present, the protagonist gives me the impression that he is a hypocritical capitalist.

Based on this book, I read the author's previous books. Except for the American comic Shadow Trails, which I could barely read, the others all had major flaws. Compared with this new book, his old books were much less interesting and story-telling. For example, the American comic Shadow Trails was honestly very well written. But the stitching was too much. It basically stitched together well-known European and American works. It's not that the stitching is not good, but the plot in the middle is very unstable. It is very exciting at one time and boring at the other time. But from his old books to this one, the growth is very obvious, and he retains his biggest characteristics. , The volume is large, and while the volume is large, the quality of the work is also guaranteed. It is written with the pen power honed in the previous explosive novels, and the settings of other works are not deliberately stitched together, but the element of infinite flow is used to make the world view more reasonable. Although this book has a large number of dialogue texts and numbers, the characters are not The dialogue lines do not make people feel that they are forced to fill in the water, but make each character appear more full. This book should be my first fairy grass in 2023 in the Gregorian calendar. I am looking forward to the type of the author's next book after the completion of this book. I am also very curious about when the next update will be.

It's okay in the front, but the handling of taking Zha Kang to the pirate world in the back is amazing! Isn't this back to the protagonist's situation at the beginning? In the beginning, there was a lot of dislike for K, but later it turned into a hatred for the protagonist... I thought at the time, "I wouldn't use such advanced techniques to foreshadow it. In fact, the real protagonist is Zha Kang? That would be too good-looking." It turns out that I thought too much... Author, please sort it out yourself Many plots cannot be taken for granted. You must have logic in the novel to have foreshadowing so that the plot behind it will look smooth. It is also strange that K suddenly turned into a good person before his death. Please think about the character logic carefully.

The heroine of this book is my least favorite heroine in all the years I have read novels. She is really disgusting.

He keeps playing with jokes about the Riddler getting fat, but the author himself makes a big deal out of the Riddler, and the Riddler gets out of the starting point! ! ! (The book is not difficult to read but the plot of the Star Organization is very annoying)

Is this the author's creative idea? 😏

Read, no last hit straw man, can't understand, don't like it

This amount of updates is worth voting for. All the votes for this month are given to you.

It's getting better and better. I hope Mason can beat the stinky pirates in the end. That guy is so mean, like Wade.

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Come on!

Let me make a little immature suggestion: it will be released tomorrow and 100 chapters will be updated.

How can this little be enough?

Some of the plot treatments are a bit unpleasant, such as some sensational content in Zombie Potter's diary, which has no impact on the advancement of the plot, and the subsequent attitude towards Kite Man. I can understand that the author likes this character better, but for such an unfamiliar character (I am probably only familiar with Two-Face, Penguin, Riddler, and Joker), in the absence of a lot of shaping, I gave him the pocket of space objects. I think it is biased. The most important thing is that the protagonist fell asleep at the end, and a small color joke after that was even less favorable. So that by this point, the novelty brought by the zombie Harry Potter has completely disappeared. In addition, at this time, the aftertaste of DC has disappeared in the mission copy, and characters such as Zha Kang were forcibly squeezed in to complicate the plot instead of deepening the settlement and receipt process. In summary, this should be the reason why I didn't plan to see it after watching it for a while.

It was okay in the early stage, but the character design was hard to establish in the later stage. Protagonist: What you are doing is wrong Master: There is no living person up there Protagonist: You are making excuses, you know what you are doing is wrong Master: Then tell me how to solve it Protagonist: I don't know, but it is wrong for you to do that. I really don't understand why we insisted on giving the protagonist such a character in the later stage. It's equivalent to the problem of a train crashing into people. Batman is the driver, someone must die, and then Batman chooses to save his own people, and then the protagonist stands aside and madly outputs: You are not doing this right

It's so annoying. Captain Jack's new plot completely killed Dr. Harley. Dr. Harley, who was treated before, was hoping to get rid of the clown's control, but now she is completely finished. The reason you gave seems very ridiculous to me. You wrote that Harley hopes to change the past, so have you forgotten the influence of the Joker? You know very well that the originally kind-hearted Dr. Harley wanted to help those mentally ill patients and make them normal. The Joker just wants Harley to abandon the past and become his Harley Quinn, and now she is just the protagonist's Harley Quinn. If you want Harley Quinn to be yours, to be your Harley Quinn, then I have nothing to say.

Is there something wrong with just releasing zombies? You haven't determined yet how this zombie virus can be infected! First of all, all the dragons, giants and other magical creatures in Potter's world have turned into zombies, which shows that the infection ability is very strong. There is no serum antidote, and magic cannot cure the zombie transformation. There must be sewers in the prison, right? Will blood flowing into the sewers infect rats? Will the contaminated blood in the sewers pollute the city's sewers when it rains? This is just one example. If you haven't determined the spreading ability of this zombie, you just use it. Isn't it too careless? After all, this is a zombie virus that destroyed a magical world! Are you underestimating this virus a little too much? So I found it hard to read the last few chapters. I don't know if the author did it on purpose or if he didn't think so much about it.

Has anyone read the author's new book? Comment, I think the writing is really average, but I don't dare to post it for fear of being scolded 😅😅

It has a strong flavor of the previous book, and the main character's style is similar to that of Blake. At first I thought it was passed through by Blake in the middle and later period. If someone in the comment section hadn't said that it had nothing to do with this book, I would have almost thought that this book was a sequel to the previous one. I don't understand a bit about Zha Kang's operation. The protagonist himself was threatened by K, so he designed to kill K. As a result, he forced Zha Kang to cross the border. He also told people that I can threaten you, but I didn't, so are you very touched? Zha Kang is already being watched by a bunch of devils, including Satan. Wouldn't he just drag Zha Kang across the border to anger them? Not to mention that Zha Kang showed a retreat after discovering the situation of the mark. Although he was a bit greedy, he still helped the protagonist find a way to deal with the mark. Although the method failed due to the protagonist's operation, at least Zha Kang was still quite dedicated to the protagonist. For Zha Kang, the protagonist is just a customer and wants the knowledge in the protagonist's hands. He is forcibly dragged to the pirate world by the protagonist, and the protagonist promises some benefits. How is this different from the original protagonist who was dragged there by K and then promised benefits? In the dialogue before it was put on the shelves, the protagonist's words were more threatening than threatening. What is the difference between the bomb planted by K and the protagonist? They all hope that the person being pulled will join their team, they all promise benefits, they all threaten the opponent, and they completely replicate the protagonist's experience. But there are differences between the protagonist and Old K. Old K just wants a few thugs, while the protagonist really wants this teammate. Unfortunately, the protagonist always treats Zha Kang with an arrogant and condescending attitude. Follow me and I can give you more. Don't hate me. I know everything about you. I haven't even had time to threaten you. This operation was only done after recruiting people, and Zha Kang's treatment was not even as good as the original protagonist. Because Zha Kang still has to deal with matters related to hell after returning. After all, he doesn't know whether he will be completely disconnected from hell after crossing over. This is probably a big trouble. Even if you are threatened, you should still use your relatives and friends as bargaining chips. Through the decisiveness of the protagonist in killing Old K, I would look down on Zha Kang if he didn't kill the protagonist. Because the protagonist himself always wants to kill the threat whenever he is threatened, Zha Kang's character is much colder than the protagonist, and being warned about the safety of his relatives and friends is more irritating than the protagonist being bombed. If it doesn't bring harm to my family, I vote for Zha Kang to do it.

For the next book, you can consider the DND worldview and put on a fantasy skin.

The protagonist's positioning of himself makes people unable to complain. He is obviously a systematic man, and he can obviously be a hexagonal superman. He just said that he was very timid and just wanted to do it remotely. Then he was abused in various ways, but he still didn't change his original intention. Really convinced.

It felt a bit bland. I watched 1/3 of it and couldn't stand it anymore. It's almost halfway, and the novice mission hasn't started yet. The author always understates when the protagonist improves himself, and it doesn't feel refreshing at all. A bunch of things I wrote before suddenly stopped mentioning after a few posts. Because the protagonist comes into contact with more advanced ones right away. But for advanced ones, let's just say that the skills haven't been unlocked yet. So what I feel is that the protagonist is constantly exposed to various advanced drawings, and then keeps saying that the level is not enough. Once the level is high enough, occasionally take out one or two items. And the joy that the protagonist felt when he came into contact with advanced drawings before. When he reaches a high level, he won't be able to use it at all. Moreover, the protagonist wants to improve in every aspect. It feels messy. Maybe what I said cannot express my true thoughts. Anyway, it just feels like there is less and less to see. With this kind of cheat, I can't figure out the use of a lot of low-level abilities. I'm almost halfway through writing the book. What's the protagonist's strongest combat ability? A suit stolen from Batman. ? It was fine when there were few teammates at the beginning, but after there were more teammates, the distinctive characteristics of the character were gone.

It turns out to be the theme of Secret War, wrapped in the shell of the Lord God Space. Ever since this so-called big crisis was revealed, it started to get boring.

After having sex with Harley Quinn, I felt worse and worse. Speaking of who to write about, I have to choose Harley Quinn, an eighteen-year-old boy and a girl who is nearly ten years older, a little crazy and has a dual personality...

I don't understand that the author likes to write about love so much, but why he only writes about other people's love and romantic history. When I saw it on the shelves, I didn't find any female characters who might have romantic scenes with the male protagonist. The whole world is messing around and only the male protagonist is a virgin.

After thinking about the world of Kamen Rider that the author has briefly mentioned, I still feel that it is very unreasonable. How can the strength of the Star Council reach the level where even the Heisei Knights are called the rebels? Don't look at the performance of the TV show. The settings of the knights are more buggy than the others. There are several gods in it, not to mention that there must be demons in Zio. Judging from the current performance, the Star Council can be destroyed by the demon alone.

The main character of this book has a virginal and awkward personality. Someone told me that this is because the book is called Dawn Trail. But I noticed that all the book readers in the comment section of this book complained about the main character, the Virgin, and blamed themselves for every mistake. That book was called Shadow Tracks. I want to know if all the protagonists in this author's works have this character?

The scene where Jack takes the initiative to influence Harley in front of the protagonist is really like shit. Has Harley completely slipped into Harley Quinn? It was over so easily. I thought I had to blow Jack's head off on the spot. It was like shit. I stopped watching.

I can't stand it anymore. Why is the protagonist so nice to the Kite Man? Even if you are a good friend, you should have some foreshadowing. Just a few plots in the world of Harry Potter are so inexplicable. Did I skip some serious plot? It feels like the speed at which the relationship is progressing is extremely unreasonable.

When I saw that the so-called world impacts were just the coincidence of the earth coordinates of two parallel universes, causing the destruction of the earth, I knew that this was a series of multi-parallel universes composed of many micro-universes that only existed in the solar system. Each universe is geocentric, and all human beings are so smart that they will only take refuge in parallel universes without looking up at the many stars in the sky. No matter how advanced the technology is, even like the technological gods, as long as they live on the earth, they will not focus on aerospace, hey! It's just such trust and play. The organization of the stars is both demiplane technology and doomsday caller. You can save most people by transforming the Martian environment. More than a dozen Starks have been lowered by the author and will only play happily in the atmosphere. It doesn't matter if you don't wander around the earth. There is not even a spaceship faction. This is a story about Gotham under a cosmic crisis, where everyone's IQ is not online.