I Just Want to Be a Good Villain

I like the character Su Yu, so let's talk about why. The character Su Yu initially attracted me due to the setting, but it didn't take long for me to become a fan of her character. With this double blessing, she has become the most satisfying heroine in this book so far. (Su's cuteness is interspersed in the subtle gaps in the plot, and the shaping is deeply rooted in my heart) In the plot, you can see that the author's shaping of Su is like spring breeze and rain, moistening things silently, and hearing thunder every time in the silent place. It can almost be called a seasoned character, making readers fall in love with this character without even realizing it. Even in the recent chapters, almost every chapter has several scenes that highlight Su's lovable character. On the other hand, Qian Qian's portrayal (I also like Qian Qian very much, but subjectively not as good as Su) is a bit immature and seems too hasty. A complete emotional line requires countless interactions between the male and female protagonists, and Su's mentality change now becomes natural through the interaction. Qianqian fell in love too quickly due to lack of interaction and became weak. In terms of setting, Su Yu's love is destined to be heavy and complicated, and it is an extremely bumpy road. She needs to first overcome her own perception of her original gender, and then overcome Chen's discrimination against her. During the relationship, she will gradually understand her inner feelings and understand that her feelings for Chen are not the so-called brotherly love, and she is willing to give up half her life's self-understanding for this love, crushing her three views to pieces just to love one person. Then, despite the confusion, alienation, and even disgust and contempt of your loved one, you launch a charge for love that may be destined to be fruitless. Just like a hero who goes against the will of heaven, he does it even though he knows that he cannot do it, even though there are thousands of people going there. Gaixia knew that Xiang Yu would be defeated but still charged at the Han army. Achilles still appeared on the battlefield of Troy after knowing the prophecy of his own death. This is an almost hopeless love, but she has no hesitation, because love - it doesn't matter whether it is worth it or not.

The author is not afraid of tigers when he was born. He wrote two highly controversial characters, Xia and Su (although I support calling it the heroine, but the author has not yet stoned it). Xia appeared first, and the character setting was criticized. The author was scolded, and his mentality collapsed. Now Su is being criticized again. His character is impeccable, but his character is a man dressed as a woman. Although Su's mentality is gradually becoming more feminine, many readers will definitely not be able to accept it. (I personally accept it, but I mainly hope that the author will follow his own ideas. Many people have already said that this book is useless. If the author changes Su again, I would not dare to think about it.) And this is harder to change than Xia. You said that after being beaten by life, Chen, who hoped to bring him a sense of security, softened Xia's temper and became like an ordinary 'normal' heroine. This is also true. But even if Su's mentality is completely feminine, she still has mental mysophobia and can't accept it (whether the virtual world accepts it or not is a normal personal idea. I don't support it but I understand it. This kind of problem is almost impossible to have in reality). Unless you say that Su's past life memories are false, and that God instilled false memories in order to control Su, then Su's character design is completely ruined. Co-authors Chen and Su were treated as fools for a long time because of their pretentiousness. Now there are three ways, The first one is to marginalize Su and become brothers completely. Then all the ambiguous plots between the male and female protagonists will become estranged. The second article continues to be ambiguous, dragging it until it doesn't cross the line, dragging it to the finale to have an open ending. This is also the approach I hate the most. The Riddler should get out of Gotham. The third entry is that she is officially the heroine. You will know the result by seeing how many people criticize Su Yu. No matter which path you take, you will disgust a group of people. I admire the author for this character. He is better than many authors for daring to write such a character. I personally support the acceptance, so my words are inevitably extreme and I welcome corrections.

After reading Chapter 57, I thought the protagonist would change, but it turned out that I was overthinking it. If you live alone, you will die, but if you are fucked, you will die. What's the point? Playing ten protagonists together and thinking about the ending of each story. I came to see the villain, not the one who sucks the protagonist's dog.

Updated every three days😡 I hope there will be a complete ending (I hate eunuchs)

You might as well let Tiandao kill the system and work alone as the system. In the later stage, Tiandao and others will be killed, and the ashes will not be seen.

Do you look like Su Yu in his past life and now, haha

The author has never written a heroine. It's the first heroine, and that's it? Don't follow up on the emotional line. First, the heroine No. 2 Betrayed and stabbed her in the back. The heroine Xia also joined directly for revenge and gave it to her for free. It was really 666. I have seen too many plots like this in books about villains. The heroine No. 1 Used intelligence in the beginning and took advantage of each other. Later, the male protagonist felt that the plot collapsed. It's a mess. The heroine risked herself for information (to cheer up the hero), and then gave it away for nothing. This book is only interesting for the plot of the male protagonist, and the heroine's plot has almost no impact. If there is no heroine in this book, it is better to write less about the heroine's plot, which is a bit jarring.

It turns out that the protagonist was asked in the early stage that life must be more important than love. As a result, many "realistic" and "mature" readers have broken their guard Maybe it is the love view of King Shatian and others written by the golf enthusiast next door that I agree with So I think it is a pity that the author changed the plot just because the "mature" readers group complained about the characters in the early stage.

This article is the best anti-routine article I have read recently It is also the funniest one. The author is familiar with all kinds of traditional routines It is really interesting to play a big brawl between the protagonist and the heroine group I hope the author will continue to high-level plots, the more chaotic the more interesting it is But be careful, most anti-routine articles will collapse if you write too much Just keep writing with the original intention. What I feel is a pity about the character is Xia Xiaozhu The setting is the role of a world-class corporate strong woman, and she has the drive of a protagonist But she is still too reckless when things happen, which is a bit different from the setting, on the contrary The Empress This kind of scheming touch is what makes the IQ online After all, the selling point of this film is that the heroines need to have an IQ online for it to be fun But the plot is not finished yet, maybe it will be better in the summer I hope the author will continue to perform wonderfully in the future, come on!

If the author can let the protagonist break through his own limitations, he can refer to Li Changshou's thinking and he will definitely be able to become a god.

One of the few books that was fully ordered at the starting point It's a bit regretful that it didn't finish In any case, the first and middle stages of this book brought a lot of joy I hope the author's next book will be better

I just want to say, it's so fucking beautiful! ! ! Please give the author a big update!

This book should be for female videos, male videos can't have good results. The author is 90% female and doesn't understand the poisonous points of male videos 1. Most people will take male videos as the protagonist, so abusing the protagonist and comparing the protagonist to anything are taboos. I can't say how many "fun people" can completely stand from God's perspective 2. Danmei is about homosexuality. Many women like to read it, but most men find it difficult to accept it. The author writes like this, which is very risky. To be honest, I don't want to write a white novel. So I am looking for weirdness 3. Male harem has a wider audience than single girls, or the writing style must be strong enough to be mysterious. Ji Cha opened a trumpet and wanted to try single girls, but the results were far inferior to those of harem. There are still a large number of loyal fans.

I have been reading a book for so long, and this is the first time I have abandoned a book because of the female characters it depicts. You, the author, are amazing enough👍. Are you using this female character, Xia, to disgust people? I wanted to create a strong, self-reliant woman, but ended up creating a self-centered, self-reliant woman. As a reader, I assume the role of the protagonist. From the reader's perspective, are the things Xia said and done reasonable? The protagonist accepts the mission of this novel world just for money and immortality. There is no emotional drama or mutual support with Xia, so she was scolded to wake up? ? ? You might as well write that you were moved by Qian Qian's gentleness and kindness. Oh, it's really disgusting🤢

Why was Xia kicked off the assembly line? Because novice readers generally cannot accept a character with a soul of his own, or a person who is not a tool. It's a pity that none of the books taken away by readers can achieve results, which makes sense. Now in this book, which character is considered established? Which character has a soul? Which character is not an accessory to the protagonist? I dare say that if Chu Weiyang dares to have any persistence or ideas of her own, she will be sprayed to death by these noobs.

Inexplicably, I can't stand it anymore. Can Emperor Ye Tian endure what Jiang Fan and Lu Huakui did? Quick, I want to see the river of blood

There are good and bad. First of all, let me say that the plots of the various interactions between the children of destiny are quite funny, especially the plot of the dragon licking the dragon and stealing the god of war. The second is the self-strategy of each heroine, which can be considered successful in writing. To be honest, the voice of the heart was not well written in the early stage. At first glance, it doesn't look like the voice of the heart. Instead, it looks like the protagonist is acting as a commentator, which is quite dramatic. The poisonous point in the later period was the transgender. The author himself also wrote in the book that Lu threatened to expose the fact that Su was a boy in his previous life. From this, it can be seen that the author knew that most people could not accept a transgender person as the female protagonist, but the author still wrote it. If they were not together, Su would be a buffoon like the other Destiny's children, which would indeed be a funny plot. But the author wrote him as always helping the protagonist, and also in the process of being tempted, and it became a bit poisonous from here on. The protagonist does not accept Su, and the process of constantly writing about Su's heart and dedication to the protagonist shows that the protagonist does not know what is good and what is good. The protagonist accepts Su's words, and the transition is like mouse poop mixed in the porridge. The key is to wait for the reader to drink it before telling him that there is poop in the porridge. At present, the plot has developed to the point where Su confesses his love, and this setting cannot be changed. To be honest, I'm a little hesitant to continue pursuing it.

Su Yu's popularity is completely higher than Zhang Qianqian 😁 All the old guys understand

It's so disgusting, I couldn't stand it after just a few chapters It's obviously so fun and there are so many resources for the villain template, why should it be turned into a bitter protagonist template? You still have to fight against the protagonist, for what purpose? Why do readers now like to read articles about villains like this? Isn't it just that you want to feel refreshed after watching too many aggrieved protagonists? In the end, you still had to turn the protagonist, the villain, into a dervish? If all the money is gone, then I can watch other normal protagonists or even the protagonists of Godly novels? You have missed the biggest difference between the protagonist of your book and the protagonists of other books, so why should I still read your book? Only counter-routines are left, but there are also anti-routine books! I just want to see a villain with a big advantage fight the protagonist! If the villain is also suppressed, what's the difference between him and the protagonist? Author, please read this chapter and tell me if it's good or not. How many people can't stand this setting!

A brief comment on the description of Xia in today's chapter. This is not independent and confident at all, this is stupidity. He was seriously injured, but he didn't ask for help when the protagonist came to him. He thought he could survive the fight. How did Ye Chen get so full of health that he was beaten to such a level that he forgot about his virtue? Why should I just die? After listening to Chen Xuan's inner voice and watching what the so-called protagonists do for so long, I still don't know the temperament of this group of protagonists? Will it make you commit suicide if you can't beat him? So the author doesn't want to write about independent characters, so let Xia go offline. After several operations in a row, I can't tell that she is independent, I can only say that she is stupid.

I really don't understand what the point is. Is the male protagonist so secretive? When writing a harem novel, make the first and second heroines look like something. You can make the first heroine look like a strong woman, fighting with Ye Chen, but what kind of novel are you, a harem novel? I have also written before that the first female protagonist is a love brain. Although she does not like or even hate the male protagonist, you wrote about spying on intelligence, stalking, and even causing trouble, and you still think you are good. I even think it is better for the heroine to be reborn and listen to her heart than to simply listen to her heart. Is it necessary for you, the second heroine, to travel? Following the first heroine every day, she is the epitome of the first heroine. The first few chapters are about her own psychological activities and thinking that others feel that she is a trading commodity. Then what? Not doing anything at all, right? And after your mental activity, you will become a strong woman and take the path of the first heroine, right? Does it make sense to force the male protagonist to become moneyless? The male protagonist's family has a big business and he has to use money in his own name to buy things? So what if the male protagonist has no money? After you write the setting that the male protagonist has no money, you just say that you can't afford Western food without money. There are many ways for the male protagonist to become stronger. A large amount of money disappears in the country in an instant, and the economy is not turbulent, right? Well, I will just treat it as mosquito money in this country. Hundreds of billions are mosquito money. What about the male protagonist's family? They didn't know how to check the flow of money, and even sold the male protagonist's house, car, and all his belongings. The family just turns a blind eye, right? The female protagonist approaches the male protagonist, but the male protagonist accuses her of being a villain. The male protagonist thinks that his acting skills as a villain are very good, but he doesn't know that he is kept in the dark. I don't know what to watch after hundreds of chapters of this happening over and over again. The fights between the fake male protagonists in a few novels are a bit interesting. The first and second heroines in harem novels are so written that they are not popular. Although the third heroine has a facial makeup, isn't she the heroine of this kind of harem novel? How can the heroine know that she is a character in a novel and have a bad character? Which of the top ten novels has a heroine who is not silly and sweet? And the Miss Xiong family, after writing it, there was no interaction at all, why did she write it? Are you paving the way for the future? Don't take such big steps before you've even written many chapters. Write the first few heroines. You wrote so many characters at once. How do you cope with it? The male protagonist plays games in the office every day and doesn't learn anything, right? Throw it all to the people below, and even to the female ghost heroine. You know that you are going back to Blue Star, so why don't you regard your life as a villain as extra time to learn skills and manage the company by yourself. You said that Blue Star Tiandao would give you eternal life. Your own hero knows that the plot has collapsed like this, and you may not be able to get those rewards. Now I'm writing about Su Su..., What do you want to write? You also want to accept a pseudo-male protagonist who has a different gender? Even the gods you wrote can't guarantee that the plot of their own novel will not collapse. Can you still guarantee that the rewards they give to the male protagonist can be honored?

I knew that as long as I stocked up, there would always be a day of limited-edition 😃😃

I'm quitting the game for now. I'll come back when I feel calmer. To put it bluntly, it's because of the heroine Xia. I don't think that the male protagonist will be happy if he accepts all the women without thinking. In this case, it will be no different from the ten books. But when I saw the part where she scolded the male protagonist for waking him up, I felt that it was a bit painful to stand and talk. Whether the protagonist chooses immortality or not, it all depends on whether you think highly of the protagonist or not. It's normal to have different opinions and not to agree with each other. If she wants to fight, if she wants to change her life against the will of God, that's all her own business. There's no need for the protagonist to suffer this scolding just because "she can respect him." Of course, if I just read this plot in the original text, it didn't give me much excitement. But when I saw a few people in the comment area actually describing Xia's words as bitter medicine, as a wake-up call, as long as the protagonist is guided to the right path, it doesn't matter if the words are harsh... From the perspective of the male protagonist, I will also make the choice that Xia hopes for, the choice that she said she can respect. But this does not mean that the insult is correct, it does not mean that it can also be counted as part of the charm of the heroine, and it even said that Xia is much better than the protagonist... I said such a paragraph in a moment of anger, maybe I will come back to read it when my mood calms down.

After reading the latest chapter, I suddenly felt that it was so boring. Every time, the male protagonist wanted to be a villain and cause trouble to give experience to the male protagonist in the original novel. By some accident, the male protagonist in the original novel was defeated, and the male protagonist benefited. I wrote this repeatedly, saying that the male protagonist in the original novel gave others a halo of wisdom, and you will become the male protagonist in this book. The Lord gave the male protagonist of the original novel a halo of wisdom. The collective IQ of the male protagonist of the original novel has turned into a diminutive. The male protagonist of the original novel is no longer a normal person. The male protagonist is afraid of wolves and tigers. He neither dares to go against the law of heaven, but also suspects that there is something wrong with the system and cannot defeat the law of heaven. Then you accept the woman who is the son of heaven? Then you grab the resources that Tiandao gives to the son of Tiandao. Then the system adds souls to you and you want them all to help you break through the realm. You don't refuse. You suspect that both sides want the benefits. In the early stage, the male protagonist was worried that the system and Tiandao were not well-intentioned. In this case, he does not worry about being controlled, used or killed. The portrayal of the female protagonist is also more and more vivid. The more mediocre the novel, the less well-characterized the novel, and the more distinctive it is. He does not dare to recruit more female protagonists and have ambiguities with other female protagonists. The author wants to eat both the food of the single female protagonist and the food of multiple female protagonists. The male protagonist has the nerve to scold the male protagonist of the novel. If he continues to write like this, the male protagonist will be a replica of the male protagonist of the novel, and the most awesome double-standard Tang San type male protagonist.

Hehe! This is modernity! Put it in ancient times! What Yu the Great ruled was the author!

I can't stand it anymore after reading more than 20 chapters. The protagonist is a slave tool man. Turtle Man.

It was a bit interesting at first, but after a few chapters it became uninteresting, especially the plot-based routine that made everything look disgusting.

Well, what do you say? It's true that the heroine is not easy to write. Don't write it. You just write a short paragraph and it will be gone. This is not good. Since there is an emotional line, then write it well.

The first and middle stages of the book were good, but not so good later on. I always felt like I was on top of my game, and then I had no strength but kept doubting things. I felt that the protagonist had no brains and could only rely on the people around him and the system to perform exceptionally well. The overall narrative was very similar to a harem but it was a single female protagonist (I mean, I mean there was one), but congratulations... It has a complete and good ending. It is still good for a villain novel. I hope there will be another one.

The rice is mixed with excrement, and everything looks distorted. The author really made a dung beetle's dinner with great care.