Naruto: Starting from Being Stabbed

The recent new books written by Naruto are very good, but unfortunately they are all too short, either thirty or fifty chapters.

The writing is too rigid. For example, joining the Akatsuki organization, the protagonist joins Akatsuki or wants to save Yahiko. This is normal. However, as a person who has just time-traveled, only relying on the impression brought by the anime or manga memory, without any understanding, and having no interaction with Yahiko, directly joins. This seems too deliberate. You might as well directly set the protagonist to travel to the land of rain. If a plot or an encounter can be designed, the plot can be coherent and natural.

After going around in a big circle, Akatsuki was inexplicably joined in Chapter 5. Goodbye.

😰So when you join Xiao, you are preparing to die? Shouldn't we be thinking about improving our strength? For example, the Third Ninja War is about to begin. Go to the battlefield to collect corpses?

The protagonist's thoughts and actions are a bit naive.

There are a lot of typos. I suggest the author go back and read it again and make corrections.

As soon as I see the name of the protagonist, I think of Kyotaro in Hi-Hei.

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I lost the desire to continue reading from the beginning. Killing people is as easy as eating and drinking. There is no normal human reaction at all. When killing people for the first time, it seems that the author did not carefully consider the rationality of the plot when writing. The author is reliving the mission of Naruto's seventh team to officially start killing people. You are reliving it, otherwise I'm afraid you won't be able to write it.