Longevity in a Deceitful Way: Starting from Being an Undercover Agent in the Zhenxie Department

As a refreshing article It seems that the viewing is okay so far I just hope that the protagonist is more extreme, and those who are bad and have many evil deeds should not be let go

As long as you don't write about having a relationship with a woman in the early, middle, middle, or late stages, it will affect the perception. Just my personal thoughts!

To be honest, this book is indeed readable, but there is a lot of nonsense. Although some fights are key, there is no need to write three chapters. It is recommended to shorten it, there is no need to highlight how powerful the protagonist is, hey

The book is good, don't stop updating it. If you think it won't make any money, open another book. Double opening

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That's right, the killing is decisive, come on

The first three chapters are well written, but later Xiaobai writes about brothers. He is not like this in killing decisively. He just kills, kills, chops, chops. . . .

It's very well written, it's really killer.

Don't expect any depth in your writing, just keep the positive feedback for improvement and the plot without any malicious intent.

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This book has a good beginning, but why are so few people reading it?

It looks great, come on!

Did your level rise too quickly?

Frog fun, it's really cool to see the protagonist torture evil cultivators who are harmful to people

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Three chapters, a dark worldview, template text, and flaws.

Seeing that there has been no update for three months, I don't dare to watch it for fear of eunuchs.

The most unreasonable thing about this novel is that you kill demons and give away skills to improve your realm, and then you say in Chapter 6, "Return to Qingfeng Temple and later to the Suppression of Evil Division." Why are you going back? Both sides treat you like a dog, killing and sacrificing them at will. You have everything in your system, but you still come to your door and treat yourself like this? ?

The section about entering Beijing is very similar to the book Papermaker.

I have been reading novels at Qidian for many years. This book is the most perverted one I have ever encountered. I couldn't stand it at the beginning. You have to have such a strong taste to read this kind of book. It eats people alive at every turn. It's so disgusting. It's strange that this kind of book can appear in Qidian without being banned.