The Battle Begins with the Soul Clan

I originally thought that this book was no different from the usual Dou Po fan fiction, but after seeing the plot of Gu Xun'er's darkening, the author came to think of it, maybe one day the book will be gone.

As long as you don't 404, you will definitely become a god among Dou Po fans Even if you haven't read Dou Po, this book is amazing. Although there are some problems at the beginning, since the 30th box, the author has let himself go and the writing has gotten better and better. Come on

I rely on this author to write something, really 🐮! The writing style of the author "That Star Cat" is similar to the writing style of the author "Eating Dumplings on the Ninth Day of the Ninth Day"! The writing is really good👍! 👍! 👍! If it's not too late, you can keep following up

If you feel bad at the beginning, you can just start reading from chapter 30. The author gets better and better as he goes on, and the more he writes, the more perverted he gets 🤓

This novel is too ahead of its time for me

Oh haha

The group is full, are there any new groups?

I'm really speechless. Why is it that you can't take elixirs because of the water attribute? The reason is that elixirs are made from fire. Hahaha, it's not easy for you to die without being exposed to the sun.

The protagonist, a high-level fighting emperor, can still be seen taking action against Xiao Yan, who is almost an ordinary person. He forcibly laid down the plot foreshadowing and prepared for the subsequent plot conflicts. This kind of clumsy method is really uncomfortable to watch! When Shen Nong came, he had to kneel down.

I have a bold idea: Fen Jue, who is extremely yang and strong, was cultivated by Gu Xun'er to another path and became a male; Soul Changqing, who was extremely yin and soft, was also cultivated wrongly and took another path and became a female! That picture is so beautiful!

I think this book can be uploaded to the moderator and surpass a certain sect's raging, the secret history of the Hua Zong, Han Feng's revenge and Feng Qing'er's dark revenge, plus a millennium change and darkness nl auction The real pinnacle 🙂🙂🙂

I didn't expect Xiao Xun'er to become a yandere. When the content you wrote exceeded the scope of what I thought, your book has been very successful, and I still want to see whether the protagonist has overturned. This is very attractive.

Author, you almost poisoned me, a descendant of Shen Nong, to death🙂 Can you change the way you wrote Yaochen Zhang? A 40-year-old adult is already full of evil thoughts. Yaochen, a person who has suffered so many sins for hundreds of years, shouldn't be so simple Besides, Yaochen has been studying for so long to accept Xiao Yan as his disciple.

The whole point of this book is the yandere incarnation of the female character. The so-called scumbag male protagonist. Regarding his IQ and EQ, I can only say that the people he encountered in his previous life were probably mentally retarded.

When did the protagonist become Xun'er's forbidden descendant?

This book is so awesome, I'm looking forward to it very much: The yandere Gu Xuner crazily kills those who are close to the protagonist for the exclusive protagonist! The yandere Gu Xun'er imprisoned and squeezed the protagonist Cheng Yandi, and his strength soared! So if the protagonist was Gu Xun'er, it would be an evil book, right? ! Looking forward to the year when Gu Xuner squeezes the protagonist! 😳One year! 😍One year is not enough! ? 😭🙂

It doesn't matter if you write a novel, but I can't stand the torture of Qing Lin. Doesn't the author have a sister? Doesn't his conscience hurt?

Not tight

You are really good at it. When you write about what you are not good at, you can't hide your naivety from others. Of course, when you write about what you are best at, and when you write about the plot arrangements where your words and sentences come naturally, it's hard not to make people wonder what your main business is.

This book is so awesome that I can't go into details about it, I can only taste it for myself.

Evergreen Soul

This book is only written well about Xun'er 🤓

I am a novice writer. I hope you can give me some support and give me a free recommendation ticket. Thank you all.

Minesweeper

Only the description of Gu Xun'er in this book stood out to me. I thought the rest of it was pretty bad, so I searched Doupo's fandoms and found that, seemingly, there was nothing that was refreshing to me at all? I can guess the general plot after reading the title and introduction. I have no desire to read it. I can only say that this is a worse section. . . Personal opinion, if you don't agree, leave the title of the book and what you think are the highlights, thank you

Forget about the poison in the past, Gu Xun'er was embarrassed to death after being locked up in a small dark room. After only a month or two of being locked up, she started to like the people who locked her up. Don't talk about any syndrome. The ancient prisoner never found out how crazy he was once he was locked up. Even if he was crazy, he couldn't change the grateful people who liked to lock him in. .

What I hate the most is the protagonist who steals the heroine. Those who have some ability write their own heroine, instead of occupying Xiao Yan's wife or partner. Anyone who is prettier than them can be shaped casually, it's just a personality difference. Helpless and disgusting.

Xun'er's blackness is so crazy. I think it would be better to behave normally and gently, but secretly be a yandere and crazy.

A bunch of hooks have completely changed the characters of the heroines. Just send it to me, luckily I didn't spend any money.

The villain is not a pervert, the author's protagonist is a pervert. I can only admire you for being able to see through it.