Wudang Female Disciple: My Father Yu Lianzhou

In fact, the heroine and Zhang Wuji are not as good as the reborn Song Qingshu ~ Zhang Wuji is basically the same as Jia Baoyu. He has an older sister and forgets about the younger sister. He only has Zhao Min in his heart, but he is not clear with Zhou Zhiruo, Yin Zhuer, and Xiao Zhao. He is the most annoying among Yitian.

The plot is designed to make people feel uncomfortable. . . What can I say, the writing style is very comfortable, but the plot is a bit unpleasant. . The setting inside includes Yang Ruji's background of the Guo Yang family, and Song Qingshu's identity as a reborn person. So, the author, what do you want to write about? Is it the love and hatred of family and country, martial arts, or love and hatred in the great changes in the world? . It always feels like you want to write about everything, but everything is just mentioned, which makes it very unpleasant to read. . This is my personal understanding.

The author would like to ask whether it is a hundred, married, or single. The best thing is to be single. In this case, both parties will not be offended. If you are married, then leave first.

When I read Chapter 33, I felt that your writing was so messy. The introduction was very easy, but it turned out that the heroine's dead mother Yu Erxia has no fucking wife again, and Yang Buhui was in the hands of Yang Xiao again. It's so messy that it's hard to read.

However, Song Qingshu's rebirth has no purpose

I hope to be single and become a great master, like Zhang Sanfeng.

I stopped reading after reading Chapter 3. Why are you criticizing Huang Rong for no reason?

Of course, if you are a male channel, you should write about Lily. Author, believe me, I can definitely write about Lily🔥

It's too confusing and convoluted. Doesn't the author have an outline? I don't even know what you want to write.

The heroine's mother's life experience is a bit confusing. If she is the granddaughter of the Condor Heroes, then what about the girl in yellow shirt in "The Heaven Slaying the Dragon"? Character Analysis of the Girl in Yellow Shirt The Girl in Yellow Shirt should be the fourth generation grandson of the Condor Heroes. The heroine's mother is a girl in a yellow shirt. The heroine is a girl in a yellow shirt. I don't know if the girl in the yellow shirt is affected by butterflies in this article or will it appear? It's a bit confusing.

No, I just clicked on the author's homepage and saw that they were all being serialized. I felt so cold in my heart. It's over. Author, how about opening a few less books and reading them one by one?

Are all the books ranked 243 on the female channel recommended to me? Is this the starting point to seduce cadres?

If you send it, will you have to die? I feel sorry for my second brother

Nuping novel recommendation: What does my man want?

I just want to ask, who is this protagonist? What's the use of letting Song Qingshu be reborn?

It's really well written, the writing and plot are great, I look forward to the follow-up

By the way, Song Qingshu's rebirth is of no use. Didn't he learn the Nine Yin Manual and Dragon Subduing in his previous life? Why is his martial arts still so bad? It's not practical.

Please don't update for seven days, the investment is over😱!

Why do you want to sword Yang Ruji? It took so many words to establish the character, so he just gave it to the sword in an understatement.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Have you cut it? It's rare to find a good book

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

You can fall in love, but you don't have to be a love-minded person, and you can't be career-oriented. The female channel novels, whether they are fairy tales or martial arts, are all romantic. The male channel is ambiguous about the harem, and the women in it are all very in love. It feels like they are women in nature, but the pattern of the male channel should be bigger, and the writing of the female channel should be more delicate, so that the heroine can break the void and soar. We should also make the plot bigger and make a queen.

Don't stop, it's not easy to have a Lily novel