The Courtyard House Started with Lao Jia's Accident

I don't know what the author was thinking, but he chose to go to a technical secondary school when he could go to college. After studying Chinese medicine from a great Chinese medicine master, I decided not to engage in the Chinese medicine industry. When I wanted to be an official and climb up the ranks, I chose a partner with a complicated family. I don't know what the author wants to express through the protagonist, but it's a bit poisonous when I read it.

The protagonist is the only man at home. He is bullied by the Jia family time and time again. He only beats people once, and then there is nothing more. His sister-in-law is teased by Jia Dongxu and she dare not let out a fart. She has no IQ and no sense of responsibility as a man. What kind of thing is she writing? The author should find a job in a factory as soon as possible.

When I was in high school, I was pushing my bicycle 🚲 home after school, and a man kicked my bicycle. The people around me tried to persuade me, saying he was drunk, and told me to leave quickly. I took two steps, turned around, hit him twice in the face with a brick, and then pushed the bicycle away. I was bullied for no reason. If I endured it, I would be angry for three days, which is absolutely impossible.

Read the first chapter. Aunt told Jia Zhang that her husband was dead. Jia Zhang didn't believe it and cursed her a few times. Jia Dongxu came out and slapped Aunt Liu to the ground. I was immediately persuaded to quit. It's so beautiful to think of people in the hospital reporting to you with this style of work.

I would like to give some advice to the author. Don't lick anyone in the Siheyuan. Moreover, the purpose of watching Siheyuan is to see the life of that era. Don't talk about trivial matters all day long.

In those days, looking for the daughter of a criminal was looking for death.

The protagonist is a white lotus, and he gives away things he has.

First, hunting and fishing are too easy. Every time you go there, you always get a lot of harvest. How could this be true in reality? Look at those survival programs, even these experts can't guarantee that they will get something every time. The author's description is really amazing Second point, there are too many fish products for the neighbors. In those days, giving a small bowl of fish soup was considered too generous. Giving a whole fish was really a slap in the face.

The protagonist has two lives, the writing is too childish

Widow Qin Shixiang, it's up to the eldest brother to decide who he marries when he's not around. Wouldn't a good young man look for the descendants of his grandfather's father's comrades? If he insists on marrying a widowed woman, she will teach three white-eyed wolves. The Qin family is a good family with no tutor. Who would marry a woman from such a family, including Qin Jingru as the mistress in the future? There is no need for the protagonist to harm his brother and the whole family, right?

Aboriginal? I didn't see much of the time traveler's shrewdness

It's stupid. I still ordered it. You said you are a local and have no experience. It's a good thing. You are still a time traveler. You don't know how popular college students are at this time. You went to a technical secondary school, but you went through a lonely time. It will be difficult for you to get into school later. Your hair is not long and your experience is too short. Goodbye.

Conflicts are forced for the sake of the plot! Have you watched the TV series? ? ? The Jia Zhang family inside is not that cool at all! And very smart! How could Biaozi control Qin Huairu and let the silly pig take care of him in his old age?

When I saw him kissing the Jia family's daughter-in-law, I didn't want to watch it anymore. The protagonist's family, the second brother is still at war, and he can do it. I can't watch it anymore.

The first time I watched it, I felt it was a bit awkward. Today I watched it again, and I found a question: Who would think about retirement issues at the age of thirty? ? Will you not adopt a child if you realize the problem? ? After searching on Baidu, Yi Zhonghai was born on January 10, 2017 in the lunar calendar, making him 33 years old in 1950! !

Take a modern time traveler. Written entirely as Aboriginal. And he is still a native who is young at heart.

After reading the author's single chapter description, if you write according to your original idea, more people will abandon the book. If nothing else, if the two brothers sacrifice, it will be a forced tragedy, and a large number of people here will abandon it. If you follow your original thinking, then under this background, no one should dare to mess with your house. Then you can walk sideways in the yard, and the street office will have to come to your house to express condolences during New Years and holidays. So how do you write about the people in the yard dealing with the protagonist's house? As long as there is such a sign, you can directly call the police and say that the other party may be an enemy agent retaliating for the martyrs of the army. If the situation is serious, these people may eat peanuts. Therefore, writing according to the author's ideas is forcibly reducing intelligence.

Say it. Well written. But the author may not know much about the military. The troops who entered the DPRK did not know that they were going to the DPRK. Even if you know it, keep it a secret. And based on the current time. Your second brother should be the second batch to enter the DPRK. You should find a way to get him a cotton coat. Your eldest brother moved from the southwest to fight in Korea. Then the time to enter the DPRK is still coming. The second is if the uncle's butt is tilted. Just think of a way to do it. Then there is the political aspect of the protagonist's mother's words. Economic strength. Ability. The position of the three uncles should not be without her. Then there's the question of why the great master chose Jia Dongxu. Didn't the protagonist's father also sacrifice his life?

It looks frustrating, you are not suitable for writing novels, you might as well cut it off! It's a matter of pounce early and pounce late

No wonder this book has average results. The protagonist is like Xu Damao. He has no space and is still jumping around.

The writing is relatively poor, so I don't want to comment.

The front is fine, but the back is empty.

It's pretty good. It's much better than other systems that have been launched since the beginning. Those people are so unconfident. It's enough to be reborn and time travel and know the historical process. It also needs system assistance. The system gives you a chicken every day. It's so beautiful that you can't find it. To be honest, is it enough for the system's electricity cost? Come on, author.

If the Jia family is gone, will this still be a courtyard house? Without the Zhang family to cause trouble in the courtyard, the excitement was reduced by half

What nonsense is written on the back?

It starts well, and it captures the feeling of that era. But it is strongly recommended that the author thinks about the later content. Especially Qin Huairu's part. To be honest, Qin's content is too blunt. A bit of writing for the sake of writing. The protagonist's mother has seen the big world. Although she came from a poor background, there was a pattern for women's work in that era. The part about marrying his son was too hasty. Qin's father went to the city to buy groceries, and they met on a blind date. The eldest daughter-in-law was decided. This is a bit bluntly written. Just marry her if you want, but the later description of Qin Huairu's selfish nature is not a slap in the face of the protagonist's mother. It is recommended that the author make new breakthroughs when portraying Qin Huairu in the later stage! Come on!

It has been added to the collection. It has great ideas and the author's writing is very good. This book title makes people want to click on it. I visited with my work "The Witcher Begins in America". Thank you!