I Created a Spiritual Revival

The writing is okay, I hope the protagonist won't be so sentimental in the middle and later stages

The writing is pretty good, but it's not the kind of behind-the-scenes story I want to see.

Writing novels of this type is basically a eunuch, especially for newcomers, who are basically unable to grasp it.

I thought it was a leak behind the scenes, but it turned out not to be the case. It was withdrawn.

This kind of subject matter is more comfortable behind the scenes. It's not my taste for the protagonist to end directly.

To be honest, I am just a new author, so I admit that my understanding of the market is not enough. I originally thought that people would like to see stories in which the protagonist does things himself. After all, such stories are simple and direct. However, since the publication of the book, many people have said to me "Why not behind the scenes", which makes me gradually doubt life. Do people really like to see the genre in which the protagonist hides behind the scenes and controls other people? I really want to hear your real voices. If everyone really likes behind-the-scenes streaming, then I can make changes and learn.

Damn it, even the money is worth it. Shouldn't the brother be left alone and arrange an organization for him to fight against lawful justice? The protagonist spreads the skills and becomes a fisherman?

I want to watch them all together, and I guarantee that they will all watch them, no matter how unpleasant the spraying is. After all, there is no progress without criticism.

It was okay at first, but when I got to Qian Liang, I couldn't stand it anymore. I don't know what the author was thinking.

What is spiritual energy recovery! ? Personally speaking, spiritual energy is like water, and all things are like fish. The growth of every living thing is like breathing, absorbing spiritual energy unconsciously. If the spiritual energy is extinguished, all things will perish. Every so-called revival of spiritual energy is like a tide, bringing more spiritual energy to places where spiritual energy is thin, so that all things can "cultivate". The end of the law is when the tide of spiritual energy recedes. However, the end of Dharma is not spiritual perfection. Practice is evolution. Evolution can make all things immortal, or immortal. There is no precise realm on this road, just like the current food chain, because every living being cannot develop in an all-round way. If there are shortcomings, the creature that restrains you will be killed. Of course, the strength of the two cannot be too big. Otherwise, no matter how restrained you are, the weak will die. (Asking the boss to write a book)

The world is only so big. The stronger the character you want to write first, the more the world needs to accommodate its nutrients and rules. Otherwise, you will fall into system bugs, which comes first, the chicken or the egg. If the character is too strong, the world will burst like a two-dimensional world with a slight movement.

Hey, let me make a suggestion. No matter how the book is, it must be ideologically upright and principled. The author's writing style is very good among newcomers, but scum like Qian Liang is like some high-end intellectuals who endanger society. The more they know, the greater the harm to the country and the people. So there must be punishment, otherwise how will the two injured policemen be counted? This is a matter of ideological principles and is very serious.

It's a bit broken. As the source of recovery, essentially the foundation of extraordinary is yourself. Your upper limit determines the upper limit of extraordinary. It started well, but fell apart a bit when it died, let alone the Holy Mother. The future is determined by the present. It is better to introduce people from the future than to introduce parallel worlds, trace the cause of recovery, and reach the node of this world. It happens to be at the uncertain beginning of recovery, and the ability of the organization is greater than that of the individual. Only then can there be a so-called research institute.

Is it true that in the real timeline, Pig's Feet is dead? In the world of future people, there are no Pig's Feet at all. People from the future traveled back and saved Pig's Feet, which is equivalent to creating a parallel world. Looking at it this way, Pig's Feet is really a waste, a tool man. When it hangs up, the system integrates into the world and brings real spiritual recovery. The future development has nothing to do with Pig's Feet. Will there be a big boss who can travel through time like Pig's Feet in the future? I thought this was a novel about pig's feet creating various construction methods and leading the world to change, but it turned out that it was Allah or a time traveler. This kind of creativity is simply embarrassing for time travellers.

I just updated after reading the last chapter. Here, there are still people ahead of me. Outrageous.

Twenty-four was issued before twenty-three?

All I can say is that when it comes to the mountain god, the main character's handling of it is a piece of shit. The mountain god was beaten to death, but you still have an indifferent attitude. What a piece of shit.

It can be seen that the author is a newcomer, the scene changes are relatively green, and the number of words in each chapter is very few, but the writing style is enough for a novel. I would like to make a suggestion: Generally speaking, if the number of words is too small, there is no need to update it twice. Write the number of words in the same chapter and publish them. If you are able to write more clearly and clearly, the viewing experience will be smoother. In fact, it is better if the protagonist is an adult, but the author should be a student, and it is okay to write about students you are familiar with.