God-Level Civilization Retrospective

The beginning was very discouraging. I talked about theories for a long time and speculated that people who like detective novels might be interested. People who are used to the rhythm of Internet novels are more difficult to deal with. After writing for a long time, I couldn't write a protagonist. Then a thinking body popped up that kept stealing other people's time. And the heroine who is a psychiatrist? I actually want to like this thinking body, and I understand that a thinking body that wantonly takes away others and destroys other people's lives is simply a demon, a murderer who destroys other people's lives in the name of continuing civilization. I am looking forward to how it will be revealed in the future, so that I can get rid of the impression that the author is going to make the murderer the protagonist. Reading online articles and writing like this will put readers into a dislocation, as if they have been taken over by others, and may die at any time because of strangers. I hope the author is not deliberately messing with people.

Hello everyone, I am Lao Yu, the author of this book. I started to like science fiction after watching the movie "The Wandering Earth 1" in 2019. After that, I read a lot of hard science fiction novels, and then I conceived a novel "The Immortality Project". However, because it was my first time to write a book, I wrote 660,000 words, and I cut off the first idea after writing it. This book has about four volumes, "The Immortal", "Cosmic Virus", "Hell on Earth", "The Coming of the Gods", "From the Earth to the Universe", at least more than one million words, mainly my own thoughts about the universe. Because I wrote this book after reading "The Three-Body Problem", the protagonist is relatively weak, and the protagonist will probably be different in each movie. I hope friends who like this book will support it. Because this achievement is purely driven by love, every comment you make is motivation for me to move forward. 🙏

Although the hard science fiction is good-looking, it is too short. Oh, author, please make it longer and hold on, okay? Men can't be so short!

There are too many descriptions of explanations and memories, and the narrative is a bit messy, which is not suitable for the rhythm of online articles.

What would you think if human genes were found on Mars? Humans are the guinea pigs and the solar system is the laboratory.

The writing is good, the pace is not rushed, the sci-fi setting is a bit interesting, and some of the suspense is quite gripping. Maybe it's because everyone's pace is too fast now, and they all like to show off, slap in the face, and escalate the battle, so there is a lack of readers. Come on, author!

Watching it late at night, it's really infiltrating people

What the hell is this profile of yours? You talked about a god-level civilization, but you also said that humans will eventually become a thing of the past. Is there no possibility for humans to become a god-level civilization?

A gentleman's writing is as light as water. Good writing does not need to be cool.

When will it be released 😭

Online articles are all about the protagonist. If you want to learn about the Three-Body Problem, don't write online articles. Readers will have to spend real money to read these hundreds of chapters.

The imagination of the future world is vivid, and the logic is reasonable at present, but the protagonist is not very likable, maybe because there is no pretentious slap in the face.

What I have the biggest problem with this book is the clues. The clues are very unclear. Whether it is traditional science fiction or online novel science fiction, you need to explain the clues as soon as possible, and then unfold the content step by step around the clues. Basically, the more famous novels are like this. Those that do not do this still explain the core content that is attractive enough. In addition, mention some improvement plans. Don't talk empty talk. What you want to mention must be supported by specific examples. If you talk too much, there will be no content. Give me some suggestions for Chapter 1. ① On the other hand, it highlights that there are many people suffering from mental illness in this era, which can be written from the large number of psychological clinics. For example, there are 3333 psychological clinics in your unit area. Among them, the one with the highest comprehensive score is 133KM away from you, the nearest one is about 133M away, and the shortest queue distance is 39.4KM. If you choose one of the options, your queue will be in 22 days. . . ② Combined with the era, if this is an era of artificial intelligence, human value is ignored, human labor attributes are 'stolen' by artificial intelligence, and most psychological problems are caused by the lack of value. You can refer to the following paragraph. Although artificial intelligence is developing rapidly and has more psychological knowledge than any psychologist, and can use scientific methods to detect subtle changes in the human body, people still instinctively hate artificial intelligence psychologists, so most psychological clinics are run by humans. I just made it up now. I want to emphasize that all the phenomena you describe must revolve around the theme of the times. Otherwise, it will go off topic. Don't write if it is too biased.

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There is no need to write every sentence in full format after the introduction.

I feel like it's well written, but why did it become so cold?