Honghuang: the Days When I Was the Chief of Jiejiao

Is the best innate spiritual root transformed into a mysterious immortal? This cannot be justified without a Daluo Jinxian.

First of all, it's nonsense that you have the best innate spiritual root to transform and only have the cultivation level of Xuanxian.

I'm a little speechless, she's just another human nanny. Chaos spiritual roots also want to suppress luck for the human race.

This group of people with strong legs and strong body shape are still in the early prehistoric times.

It's good that the main character's name is Xuanji. Duo Chen looks awkward

Are you trying to make friends with the human race? If you have spiritual roots, you should not first think about giving them to your master to suppress your luck, but to give them to the humans. It doesn't matter if you are from a human race, but you are not yet. 😅

Do you think that if the Witch Clan stopped fighting with the Monster Clan and all went to the underworld to earn merit and let the Monster Clan rule the world, Tiandao and Hongjun would be furious!

What the hell are you doing? If you ask for leave, just ask for leave. When you're done, delete the leave note! Who did you learn it from? Did I pay to see you do this shit? After deleting it, I have to pull it all over again. What the hell!

It's a bit taken for granted, and the author's writing style is still a bit immature.

The author used a general system to write this book. At least you wrote the Xuanmen Kung Fu Nine Transformations Xuan Gong correctly instead of the Eighty-nine Xuan Gong; your explanations of Tiangang Thirty-Six and Disha Seventy-Two are even more nonsense.

? ? ? Seraph Where did Seraph come from? ? ? Then do you still want to bring out God? It looked good from the front, but something suddenly happened here

I have a question, author, what exactly are you going to write about in this book? Are you going to change the interception or what are you going to do? After reading more than 130 chapters, to be honest, I really don't understand what the author wants to describe? Although we know what will happen to Jie Jiao in the future, we don't see the protagonist making any changes. He just pays Jingshi Bailian to suppress his destiny and does nothing else. Can this little change change the general trend? If the main line does not change, the general trend will not change. In the end, I still ended up being listed on the list of gods.

The title of this book is actually: "Capitalism in the Prehistoric Times".

The writing is very good, but can you not give everything away for free?

The Fengshen section is written like fighting on earth, which is completely incompatible with the prehistoric mythical world.

It's good-looking, but the author lacks the most basic common sense and even misses the most beautiful woman in the world. The most beautiful woman in the prehistoric times was not Nuwa or Houtu, but Pilan Po. Posterity wrote a hymn specifically for her: "One more look at her and she will explode. Get any closer and she will melt."

After the human race, how about pretending to be a ghost and treating readers like fools? Abandon the book decisively

Tongtian means Tongtian. Why do you keep calling Lingbao Tianzun and Shangqing? You already call me Laozi and Yuanyuan, so Tongtian can only be called by titles? Not worthy of being called by name?

I'm going to give up on this kind of rhythm.

The human race has its own blessings, heaven is healthy, and gentlemen strive to constantly strive for self-improvement! Only through suffering and tempering can we cherish the efforts made by countless ancestors for the human race. The human race was created by Nuwa. No private message is false. If the human race in the prehistoric era can succeed, Nuwa must have made efforts behind the scenes. Come on, author

There are too many bugs in the plot of Journey to the West. After Ying Zheng became emperor, no second generation died. How did the Tang Dynasty appear? Moreover, the three golden hoops were separated from the Seven Immortals and Horses that served as Jie Jiao's attendants. That person was living well with the Seven Immortals. Where did these three hoops come from?

The prehistoric flow is a kind of sentiment, and readers in their thirties and forties today are deeply touched by this. Therefore, this type of novel can still attract some readers. At the same time, because the readers are in their thirties and forties, they have rich reading experience and are picky. If they are poorly written, they will not be able to retain them. One sentence: It is easy to attract readers' attention, but it is not easy to retain them.

I originally wanted to fatten up before reading it, but I didn't expect The Eunuch 😓. In fact, it can be written to end after defeating Luo Hu. For example, the protagonist breaks through in battle and kills Luo Hu, and then the finale is over. It would be meaningless to write about the half-step avenue after that. It falls into the cliché and feels like a saint is inferior to a dog.

The author takes many things for granted, and there are so many inexplicable things that people cannot understand. (Referring to the plot) Irregular logic and weak plot are taboos in novels. Coupled with the clichéd story, the result is predictable.

With so many subscriptions, you gave me a eunuch? That's too much

The writing was broken and completely fell into the cliche! Finish it quickly! It doesn't make much sense to continue talking about it.

I couldn't stand it when I saw the middle period. I looked through the catalog and found that it was unfinished. Fortunately, I didn't order all of it. This author. . .

After reading only the second chapter, I felt that the protagonist was aloof and looked down on the past, and I couldn't help but give up. Since this is so awesome, is it possible to choose the innate spiritual treasures and innate spiritual roots at will, and kill the enemies at will? If not, how can we be worthy of the protagonist's mentality?

It seems that the author has only read a small amount of prehistoric knowledge, and relies on his brain to make up the rest. His cognition is not on the same line as the readers, and sometimes he writes things that make people scratch their heads.

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