The World Begins with Quanzhen Swordsmanship

There are too many typos, many characters are wrong, and some plots are also wrong. For example, Yang Lianting and Dongfang Bubai are in true love. In the original novel, Ren Yingying stabbed him and he refused to scream in order to prevent Dongfang Bubai from being distracted. They chopped off his fingers and they didn't make a sound. He is not a person who is afraid of death at all. There are too many problems in this novel. The author has a problem with his attitude. Reading's writer's assistant obviously has the function of automatically identifying typos and sentences, but he still makes so many mistakes in every chapter. Who wants to pay to see it? I probably haven't read Jin Yong either, and it's so messy that it doesn't look like he's writing it alone For example, the protagonist looks down on Duan Zhengchun, but isn't he also a stallion? Is it such a double standard?

1. Since there is a panel, it's impossible to just add some and not add your own liver, right? The internal strength has not increased for several months! 2. Quanzhen Neigong can be used in standing, walking, sitting and lying down (your qualifications are embarrassing to death) 3. Boxing and swordsmanship are both external and internal. You are simply torn apart by force. 4. The whole body is abstaining from meat! You can't get married! Even if a heroine was arranged from the beginning, the name would still be wrong. In ancient times, there was such a polite environment, patting the butt? Kill by touching the head! (The author doesn't think it's poisonous?) 5. If you write fan fiction, then read the original work carefully. Hey, there are still a lot of details, so forget about being angry.

The protagonist has such a cowardly character. He is being plotted by Zhao every day, but he doesn't fight back at all. Even if he does it once or twice, it adds up to almost 10 times. He is still like a coward. He is beaten and scolded at will, and he admires and admires him.

Transform Ye Erniang? What do you think? The children that Ye Erniang harmed would not be exaggerated. The protagonist is purely a puppet tool of the system.

I found a problem. Every time the protagonist practices a new martial art, he has zero basics, which feels unreasonable For example, in swordsmanship, after one of the swordsmanship is very proficient, it is naturally impossible to become proficient in another swordsmanship, but he should also get started quickly. By analogy, many places for beginners can be covered. If I write a good urban novel, and the next one is a martial arts novel, it will definitely not be as sophisticated as the urban one, and it won't be so confusing that the sentences don't make sense, right?

The divine eagle was able to understand Tianlong, and even reversed his car back to Xiaoao, not knowing how powerful he was.

Even though he had the ability to intervene, Xu Zhu was asked to be the leader of the Xiaoyao Sect. Wouldn't it be more reasonable for you to ask Wang Yuyan to go?

Most of the content is about women, women, I want women, with some martial arts plots interspersed in between. Those who want to watch the harem are in luck, and those who want to watch martial arts fandoms are in luck.

I practiced a lot of magical skills, but the result is still useless

The Condor Heroes themselves have bad views, let's talk about Yinggu. She is the wife of the Southern Emperor, but she fell in love with a fool for some reason. He committed adultery with Zhou Bo and gave birth to a bastard. After the birth, the child was injured by the enemy. It needs a peerless master to spend his whole life to treat it. Zhou Botong heard this This thing just ran away This guy thought of her husband at this time, and wanted her husband to become a cripple for her child, and waste his life's energy to treat this bastard for her. This is something no one is willing to do. In the end, the child died. This is not the most important thing. The key is that her brain circuit is abnormally magical. It was her husband who killed her child after saving her son Attributing all the mistakes to her husband, and trying every means to kill her husband to avenge her child It's like your wife cheated on her and gave birth to a child with another wild man outside. As a result, the child was found to have a heart problem and needed to be replaced with your heart. You don't want her to do that She just thinks that you are the murderer who killed his son, so she tried every means to kill you The most ridiculous thing is that she never had the courage to go to trouble her enemy from the beginning to the end. Instead, she kept staring at her husband, an honest man who had always spoiled her, to kill him The most puzzling thing for me is that Nan Di has no temper at all, and is quite guilty about this matter. He even became a monk for this.

The biggest flaw of this book is that it strays too far from the original plot.

Doesn't look like a time traveler at all

I was really convinced when I stepped on the horse. The Condor was still fighting Ouyang Feng with Xiao Longnu, and the protagonist suddenly wore it.

The protagonist has no martial arts talent at all. It stands to reason that if a person has several highly proficient martial arts at the same time, his combat effectiveness must be stronger than someone who only has one or two highly proficient martial arts. However, the protagonist seems to have locked up his ability and can only show a proficient level of martial arts. Then, after living for so many years, founding a country, and dealing with all kinds of people from all three religions and nine streams, he was still as mentally retarded as a young boy when he arrived at the Tian Long Ba Bu.

The first volume looked okay, so I subscribed. . . As a result, I regretted it. . . .

Not much to see. There is nothing new, and the author has no ideas of his own, so he forcibly corrects them when encountering key plot points. It seems that it won't happen without returning to the main line of the original work. If you don't know how to write an independent plot, why should you write about it? Fanren just praise old wine in new bottles. It is convenient for doujin to make use of the existing framework. But it will only be within this framework, so why don't I read the original work?

The beginning of the article is a little dissuasive. In modern society, a fourteen-year-old is no longer a child, and there is no legal responsibility if it is voluntary. You are still a child in ancient times.

In the newly revised version, Yin Zhiping and Zhen Zhiping are two people. Yin is not changed to Zhen Zhiping. In The Condor, Yin Zhiping is obsessed with practicing alchemy and ignores worldly affairs. He went down the mountain to develop early. In The Condor, he and Guo Jing did not know each other and fought against Huang Yaoshi. It is also Yin Zhiping, not Zhen Zhiping, and Yin Zhiping is older than Guo Jing. In The Divine Condor, Yin Zhiping should be a middle-aged uncle, not a handsome young man, and their personalities are also very different. So Yin Zhiping and Zhen Zhiping are undoubtedly two people.

I agree with your level, but if you replace the master with Dacheng, the subsequent grandmasters and grandmasters will be very embarrassing. Grandmaster is an achievement, similar to a professor, not a realm of kung fu.

Swordsmanship is an extension of the arm, and practicing boxing can also promote the practice of swordsmanship. Boxing is generally the basis of martial arts, which can strengthen the body and stretch the muscles. It is best to practice martial arts step by step. Quanzhen Taoism, Quanzhen Daoquan and Quanzhen Daoge are a set of exercises. When practicing boxing, you can use internal strength. Quanzhen internal strength is an internal skill that can be practiced while walking, sitting or lying down. Ma Yu taught Guo Jing how to practice while sleeping.

There were so many typos that it made me uncomfortable and I stopped reading.

When I saw Tianlong, I couldn't stand it anymore and abandoned it.

Skip the unrepentant parts, this book is not bad. At least, the writing skills are very good. I hope the author will be more rigorous in writing in the future. Before writing, he will check the information on the uncertain things.

I just read Chapter 60. I thought it was okay before. In Chapter 60, the little junior sister's brain seems to be gone. In one sentence, she feels like she was fucked by someone.

The Jiuyin Sutra in the ancient tomb is only part of it. There is no general outline. There are methods such as the I Ching to cleanse the marrow and change the body, and hold one's breath.

I would like to give you a suggestion: the experience value directly goes from 1 to 10,000 or higher. If it reaches 10, 100, 1,000, etc., It will become 0, which will affect reading.

One of the rare Shendiao fandoms in recent years that is quite comfortable to watch.

I would like to use the author's great treasure to recommend the book: I wish the author to attain enlightenment as soon as possible, thank you🙏🏻

Why do real storytellers disappear at the critical moment? If I hadn't read the novel, I still wouldn't know