The Fourth Calamity Streamer Still Won’t Act Human Today

This novel seems to have many flaws. First, it's set in an isekai (another world) game, but the protagonist's ability is similar to altering the written history of that world. Even a butterfly wouldn't dare to flap its wings so casually, yet the author does. He wants to arrange the past, present, future, and the altered past, present, and future—this is a paradox.

The writing from the moment the nobles announced their siege began was utterly baffling. Dozens of chapters were spent catching "rats" in the city, repeatedly emphasizing the importance of the wishing NPC, and including a lot of repetitive content.

The plot is very interesting. However, in terms of writing style In particular, the fight scenes, emotional moments, and scene transitions feel very disjointed. I've read up to chapter 84 so far, but it just feels like the protagonist's overpowered abilities have been briefly mentioned, and the world-building has suddenly introduced "divine messengers" who theoretically possess high combat power.

I have a question: Ian killed someone in White Rock City. The mages of White Rock City, who were supposed to be in charge of the city, didn't have any informants (like security cameras) to observe the situation. Why didn't they know anything about it?

There are so many typos! Some comments have corrected them, but shouldn't the author fix them?

I don't know if it's true or not, but please don't mess with the female lead! You can't write really bad romance scenes.

The issue of rewriting history can be referenced from FGO's Lostbelts, where the rewritten history is separated into its own distinct sections.

Have you been here all this time, getting stronger, protagonist? This lord is like a burden, but we have to keep him around for the sake of his all-around abilities. But the protagonist's cheat codes and future advantages aren't showing up. What about the protagonist's backstory? Looks like just 20 chapters isn't enough. I'll have to wait for the next backstory chapter to see what happens... So frustrating.

It's alright, but there's not much content. Also, the page skill shouldn't be so cheap; even a goblin takes up a whole page.

This is Orange, a girl from her student days.