Leveling Up Through the Pure Yang Art

After reading Chapter 120, I came to the second map. Every time a few enemies jumped out on the roadside, I started to write a lot of nonsense that has no nutrition and is completely unnecessary to write two pages of nonsense. Just keep creating conflicts like this, right? Every enemy is arrogant and looks like he wants to provoke the whole world. The protagonist has been resigned to everything, without any counterattack or power. I thought I was reading a novel written by Tudou.

Your initial identity is set to be a police officer learning martial arts, but you are looking for a boxing gym outside. What a shameful operation.

The first part is okay, but the second part is a mess. I feel like the protagonist is mindless and reckless, killing almost everyone he sees. The supporting characters are also mindless and offend the protagonist. They shout and kill at every turn. I really think that the rich and nobles are all idiots.

I just said that Kone is one of the best experts, and then dozens of them came out😓

I've seen many new authors get worse and worse as they write. My dear, you're getting better and better as you write, and you're getting better and better! I enjoyed watching it, but the free period may be a bit limiting for readers. Anyway, I support it.

A landowner's family has so much money without any force. This is a world of extraordinary fantasy. Shouldn't it be true that the more powerful the force, the more money it will have? ? The landlord's family has no force at all. He also emphasized that the government did not have such great jurisdiction over local areas.

It's well written for a newcomer. But there are still those common problems, pretending too much, pretending too much, pretending too embarrassingly. Also, the introductions are a bit slow and repetitive. For more than a hundred chapters, it's basically like an enemy pops out and fights, and an enemy pops out and fights. Of course, it can be seen that it is gradually improving, and there will be almost no major bugs in the future.

The IQ of passers-by is too low. The big forces will definitely investigate how long the protagonist has been practicing, and either make friends with him, or use absolute power to eradicate the roots. Then the protagonist will die and the whole book will be over.

Will the world be full of people in the future, and the real energy is not as good as a dog?🙂

It feels like a reckless man went all the way. If it weren't for the system, I don't know how many times he would have died.