The Director Begins by Saving the Family Business

The main character is a philanthropist, and he actually used the advertising fees from several rich kids as an investment for his movie—that's pretty impressive.

The sense of immersion is too low. This novel offers no explanation for any commercial tactics or color schemes. It assumes others will understand. Only a novel by an author would be like this. In reality, if you don't explain things, be careful with your employees. You might do more harm than good.

This protagonist doesn't seem like a time traveler at all; in some parts, they act like an idiot. Can't the protagonist understand a photo? How can they even tell the protagonist is pregnant?

The male lead earned ten million from the movie, so why did he still need to ask his father for money? And why did he keep adding his family's products to the movies, regardless of whether it was appropriate or not? It was all unnecessary and superfluous. He added his family's products to every movie he made, even when it was inappropriate, making it awkward to watch.

The writing is truly rubbish. Putting aside the plot, the author's use of similar words to replace many names is already embarrassing, and they're all in such a terrible state. Furthermore, despite the protagonist being a time traveler, the author's behavior is inconsistent, sometimes showing memories and sometimes being completely clueless and surprised.

The author should acquire more film-related knowledge before writing. Readers of wish-fulfillment novels also have brains; they read online novels to find real-life thrills within a virtual world. The plot can be unconventional, but the details need to be realistic for the reader to feel immersed. Similarly, while both are about rich kids shooting commercials for their own factories, the details and the sheer enjoyment are inferior to "The Best Tokusatsu Era."

All bad movies start with investors interfering in the production. Was it really necessary to display gold, let alone golden coconut juice? Smashing a car window is considered smearing the competition? Didn't you see that Coca-Cola sales plummeted when "Crazy Stone" was released?

The parallel world immersion is a bit low.

Author, you shouldn't write books. You're really bad at it.

Hmm, not bad. Author, stop writing. Our factory is hiring for the kind of work where you tighten screws. Contact me after the New Year. Great pay. Author, come find me!