Grinding My Way to the Strongest Player

I think the internet cafe story is the author's masterpiece. I couldn't even finish the first chapter of the later stories.

What have you been doing since the game was released? You just keep practicing every piece of trash you come across, is that your specialty? You stop practicing swordsmanship because your progress is slow? You were so powerful in the beginning, but now you have to deal with every player you encounter. Why is the protagonist's brainpower so weak after the game was released? And you're supposed to be all about grinding, why are you giving him so much trashy plot?

It feels like there are more and more cheat codes being used. People can cultivate freely in the painted world, and rare elixirs appear out of thin air. A perfectly good isekai (otherworld) story has been turned into a mindless game novel or an invincible novel. It's starting to fall apart.

Dude, why don't you finish this book sooner and then write a sequel about internet cafes, or write another one with an internet cafe theme? There are a lot of new games out now, both domestic and international, including many Soulslike horror titles, like The Ring and Paper Dolls. Next year there's also Black Myth – enough to keep you entertained for ages.

The Qi Refining Realm is written in a disjointed and fragmented manner. It's only at some step, yet it's made so complicated that the plot feels off track.

I feel like no matter how hard the protagonist works, it can't keep up with the author's speed in increasing the world's combat power. At the beginning, it was written that the game had only been open for a month, then the protagonist's strength increased, so it was changed to three months, then the protagonist's strength increased again, and the game's open time was extended to a year.

The martial arts manuals are flawed; anyone can easily memorize them and teach them to others. Wouldn't that cause the trading market to collapse? If just one person writes a manual and posts it on a forum, everyone will have internal energy cultivation techniques, swordplay, and lightness skills—why would anyone need to buy them?

The biggest flaw of Puppet Manor is that the spoils of war weren't distributed so generously; instead, everyone got a copy of a martial arts manual.

After the game was released, the protagonist became like a saint, constantly leveling up and saving people.

In a world haunted by ghosts, someone suddenly changes and starts speaking strangely. Won't they be mistaken for being possessed?