Iron Mechanical Dragon Has Few Friends

Just write it seriously, what's the point of funny jokes?

Because these two sisters can't stand it😔😔😔

It's quite boring. There are so many jokes in the book that it really affects the viewing experience. Besides, I thought the main character, the mechanical dragon, had a behavior similar to that of Transformers and was more like a Decepticon. But the result was just like that. I really had no feelings for the protagonist's sisters and female characters. I was even a little annoyed.

I really feel that the giant beast is much more handsome than the author's impression

I got scolded a lot because of the female character, so the stupid author doesn't want to show off, so just open a thread and talk about it Please note that the following information contains spoilers ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Nero is a planeswalker, he can go to other worlds after igniting sparks Celes can use Bubble's divine power for free, and working with Nero can open portals to other worlds Julia is the big guy, if you encounter an enemy you can't beat, just let Julia scan the map Nessario, Nessario has no ability, and he can barely beat four vendors and Xel'naga. After all, she is just a Deathwing girl brought in to make up the numbers. The steel mechanical dragon can't just have steel and machinery, right? The only way she could be strengthened to this point was by playing plug-ins for her with my eyes closed (manual funny)

? ? Your introduction is useless. What kind of dragon is a robot dragon? This thing is classified as a robot or an AI. If it has the shape of a dragon, it is?

Why do you think the protagonist is so piggy? Oh, it doesn't matter if she's not my younger sister, Cat Girl Loli. Although it's useless, she is still a younger sister. But the baroness next door, the protagonist found out that the other party had bad intentions and was in great trouble when he first came into contact. He brought an extraterrestrial creature with him, and then he originally decided to run away after completing the deal, but then he softened when he was touched This kind of extraterrestrial creature should not be as far away as possible, but the protagonist was pushed and pushed deeper and deeper It's not that you can't have a heroine, but you can't just look stupid.

Battle Princess Alpha From now on, this building will be used as a character gallery The author added a few details

I wish I could say a few words about the car wheel repeatedly in every chapter. Have you ever seen Jiang Wen and an underground traffic station in your life? Entering the palace when you are not alive, okay, this is very father-in-law ヾ(✿ﾟ▽ﾟ)ノ

😅😅 It's super boring to read in the fantasy world. What kind of modern weapons are you using to put magic power, which is a universal energy that is many times more efficient than fossil fuels? If you don't use it, you are thinking about real-life weapons. I originally thought that Pig's Foot is a magic technology type that combines mechanical technology and magic. As a result, Pig's Foot has a bunch of backward real-life weapons, just like those industrial revolutions in those Western fantasy backgrounds. People's magic power can be converted into kinetic energy with a rune or formation. Thermal energy, electric energy, various energy sources, interfering with the structure of matter and reorganizing matter are not much more advanced than your industrial revolution that requires a variety of huge equipment to achieve results.

It really felt like it was very long-winded and irritating to read. Chapter after chapter was about my stupid sister who is a bitch, a badass and loves to play tricks, and every time I get a skill, I would chatter about it for a long time, and curse the system. I have absolutely no desire to read on. If it's really about water numbers, congratulations on your success.

It's about bringing up a younger brother and bringing up a younger sister again at the beginning. Are all dragon novels like this at the beginning? No innovation? Copy east and west. One day I will write a book like this, it will save trouble

I came to see the mechanical dragon, not to see the protagonist's pig brother, but also the protagonist's two sisters and that woman. Has the protagonist never seen a woman in his life? He gave up.

It's written in a high-spirited way, almost to the point of being offensive. There are too many memes, too many inappropriate moments, too many dialogues, and the woman's writing is the same as ten years ago. It's so bloody and disgusting.

Feeling inexplicable, I started to go crazy. Wow, now the dragon novel has no brothers and sisters, can't go out, including mechanical creatures, capitalized fuck, why do you feel that the current novel has been fixed? In wizard novels, there must be a family, and that family must be very useless. The same is true in dragon novels. There must be brothers and sisters. Even if there are not in the early stage, there must be sworn brothers and sisters in the later stage. What a good guy. After reading it at one glance, you will know the second one.

Do you feel like this book is classified in the wrong place? Should it be a fantasy or light novel? It looked okay at first, but then I realized something was wrong. It didn't have any Western flavor at all, and it looked weird.

The mechanical dragon should not only have fusion strikes, but also particle rays and gamma ray cannons, and of course the ultimate neutron kill. If a mechanical dragon cannot be killed with efficient neutrons, can it still be a qualified dragon titan?

I think if the author writes seriously, it will be a good book, but in my personal opinion, there are too many jokes, just like adding sugar to a dessert. Appropriate seasoning can make the cake delicious, but too much sugar is a pity.

The protagonist doesn't even have the fighting power to destroy the village, so he starts to recruit omniscient and omnipotent supporting characters, which can only be said to be unbelievable.

At first I thought it was a DND worldview, but it turned out to be a hodgepodge. Even if you write a hodgepodge, it's okay, but you have to control the power setting! I didn't expect it to be a mess, one word... Chaos!

Light novel + dnd, I personally can't stand such two-dimensional dialogue and settings. Different opinions

Let's fool around with the AI ​​pictures from station B, and then go back and make up the pictures downstairs.