Lu Mingfei and Seventeen Years Old

I have only read the first forty chapters, and I will comment on my thoughts.) The setting is that Lu Mingfei travels from Long Wu to Lu Mingfei, who is in his third year of high school, and becomes a little devil-like existence. This setting is very interesting, and I feel it is the best setting among so many dragon time travel stories. But there are a lot of plots in the plot that I find very fascinating, such as the part where Lu Mingfei, masked, follows the nanny group who attacks Kassel at night and fights Constantine with Caesar Chu Zihang. After the mission is completed, why does she not run away? Will she not leave because of a bounty hunter who has nothing to do with her? There is also the part where Lu Mingfei hides his identity and follows the wet nurse team. The author previously wrote about the cooperation between the two parties in the Three Gorges. The wet nurse team is Lu Mingfei's assistant. You must know that the wet nurse team has always been Lu Mingfei's assistant. What is the point of the author letting Lu Mingfei sneak in without telling the wet nurse team? Killing Constantine later was too simple, and Constantine was sent in just a few strokes. There are some contradictions in the previous and later chapters of the book. It may be that the author confused Future Lu Mingfei and Lu Mingfei. For example, future Lu Mingfei mentioned that he likes Coke when talking to the principal, but the principal didn't know that the person he was talking to was Lu Mingfei, so why did the author say in the comment area that he had made a mistake and should serve Coke? There are a lot of typos in the book. "Zai" and "Zai" are basically wrong eight times out of ten. However, the book has already written two hundred chapters, and I have only read chapter 40. The rest of the book is unclear. I wish the author a great success and a happy life. It's getting harder and harder to write about dragon fandom, and fewer and fewer people write seriously.

Please update the author more, it looks pretty good now

The writing is very good. It's a pity that there are no good works. The title of the book is not good. I can't find it directly by searching for Dragon Clan 😥. I have to search for Lu Mingfei to find this book. Seeing that the popularity is so low, I didn't have high expectations. But it turned out that the writing is quite good. Let me talk about the characteristics first. I haven't finished reading yet. The known ones should be all the original characters. The protagonist is currently only a little monster. And I haven't finished reading it, I don't know, and I don't have much literary talent, so I will briefly talk about my opinions The attitude towards Eri Yi is also the most comfortable one among all the rebirth Lu Mingfei fans I have read. Most of the fans just directly like the little monsters who have a crush on him, so they directly confess their love for him. To be honest, even if it is the case in the original work, I don't think it is the main point. The character should play straight, at least let the little monster grow up, let her understand what the world is like, and let her have the right to choose. After all, the same thing would be the same for anyone else. This novel is very well written. The protagonist wants to let the little monster understand what true love is first, let her take a good look at the world, instead of just jumping into it when her brain gets hot. But love is like this, you don't need to be sober, but as a reborn Lu Mingfei, even if I am an aloe party, I still feel that Lu Mingfei is not qualified to have Hui Liyi's love, at least not before helping her stabilize her bloodline and killing Herzog. It's very simple, Lu Mingfei, when you drank wine for half an hour in the wine cellar in your last life, do you really think that you are so clear-cut? What qualifications do you have to be with her without any scruples? Even if she doesn't remember it, don't you remember it? I didn't do what I promised. Even if you like it, you should do something practical for me first. For me, only by spreading Herzog's ashes can Lu Mingfei be truly qualified to be with Eri Yi, so that I can pay my contribution with peace of mind 😏

Man, I have to say that the writing is really good. It's not Southern-style, but it's very good. I read the whole article without skipping it. I love Lu Mingfei, who is both cheap and a bit wilted, but also very classy.

The writing is quite good, but unfortunately it seems that the heroine is Eri Yi again. Now we are waiting to see how the author makes Eri Yi grow up to be a normal person and fall in love with Lu Mingfei. I hope she won't fall in love with her just by playing games casually and taking her out for fun. That is too poisonous.

To be honest, why do some authors take it for granted that after rebirth, Lu Mingfei doesn't like Nuonuo and turns to Eliyi? What's more, in fact, among the dragon clan, Nono is better than Eliyi.

Is this Lu Mingfei and Ricardo? I like this. After growing up, Ricardo turned sadness into strength and Lu Mingfei hid his sadness in his heart and told everyone happy words. What they have in common is that they both feel that sacrificing themselves can save everyone.

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It's really outrageous that such a good book is not popular. Isn't this better than having no money? The more popular the author is, the more likely he will update soon. Really.

Hui Liyi

It's not a criticism. How should I put it? You wrote that Old Tang was parasitic. Xia Mi is also a dragon. Aren't these two contradictory? Moreover, the dragon clan's own dilemma is the choice between dragons and humans. It's not very understandable to write it like this. What is the difference between Jormungandr and Norton? Why do you write this? Oh, I'm confused.

Work hard, Odin! You must endure it. Now Mingfei has solved three dragon kings in one semester and completed the workload of the previous four semesters. As long as you can survive until the time of wishing the world before taking action, it means that Aloe Vera and Chu Xia have three full semesters to build branch lines and spread dog food. So come on, big brother who rides a horse.

As long as the heroine is not Eri Yi, everything else is fine. I have read a lot of Dragon Clan fanfiction, but it is impossible for Ming Fei to fall in love with Eri Yi. Many authors forcefully bring the two people together, and the whole book seems very outlandish.

Love can be shown in the original book of Dragon Clan, but it's not between a man and a woman. It's okay to save her after rebirth, and it's okay to care about her if she feels guilty. It's okay to be either a younger sister or a younger sister if she develops normally. As long as she doesn't end up being a brainless and foreshadowing thing, it's ok. The purity of dragon blood is so high, do you really think Eri is a fool? It's just that there is less exposure to information. Can't you tell the previous level of Street Fighter? As for liking Nono, in the original novel, I feel like he is the sun. I doubt Nono can even dare him, just like Jiangnan 🙂

First of all, you said that Lu Mingfei didn't like Eli Yi in the original work, and that Long Si Lu Mingfei confessed to Nono. The first thing you need to understand is that Jiang Nan also said in Dragon and Boy Game that when the girl died in front of him, he faced his own heart, and he had begun to like the girl he considered to be Nono's replacement. Before Long Si, Lu Mingfei had only obsession with Dononuo, but by Long Si, he truly felt that he had fallen in love with Nono. With memories in mind, Lu Mingfei's feelings for Eli Yi would be a complex emotion that mixes guilt, responsibility, pity, empathy, and the love that gradually emerges or is recognized. He probably couldn't clearly separate this emotion from his obsession with Nono immediately. Lu Mingfei's feelings for Nono stem largely from her "rescue" and intrusion in his most humble moment. This is a profound kindness and longing. Even after rebirth, the imprint of this emotion remains profound. He may need time to distinguish between "gratitude" and Eri's love is pure, dependent and devoted. What she loved was Lu Mingfei himself, not any halo. This kind of love is unfamiliar and extremely impactful to Lu Mingfei. With his memory, he can better understand the preciousness of this purity. If "love" is a strong obsession that is willing to do everything to protect and not want to lose again, then Lu Mingfei is likely to have "loved" Eriyi from the beginning - in a way to make up for regrets and protect eternity So, Lu Mingfei comes again with memories, and is very likely to fall in love with Eriyi, or at least embark on a path that will eventually lead to this love. Because at that time, he truly understood the feeling of "loss" - it was an unforgettable pain and irreparable regret. Facing the girl who labeled her entire world as "Sakura & Eri" again, it was difficult for him not to be moved, not to pity, not to try his best to avoid making the same mistake again. The biggest difference may be that this time, his love will be more of a clear decision and a firm responsibility. However, the road to happiness is still full of thorns, which require tremendous effort and growth on his part to overcome.

Apart from Reboot and Return to Seventeen, You is the third dragon fanfic I have read that has excellent logic and writing.

Brothers, I see that there have been very few comments recently, and I just can't help but comment. I call it a review, but it's actually more like a reluctance to comment on all the good memories and tragedies in Dragon Clan. I first came across the Dragon Clan novel when I went to a city bookstore in junior high school. It seemed to have been 14 or 13 years ago. It seems to be recent, but it was actually ten years ago. I am now a second-year graduate student. I really liked this book at the time. Because the bookstore was out of stock, I only bought the first and third volumes for my first purchase. Later, when I got home, I became more and more addicted to reading. I stayed up late and finished reading the first book. Do you know the shocking feeling I had at that time? ! ! Looking back, when I was in the second grade of middle school, how many times did I dream that the ordinary me was discovered from the crowd. They were solemnly dressed, representing authority, and then said to me seriously: It's so-and-so, we need you! They told me that the world was about to be destroyed, and now everyone was expecting me, needed me, and needed me to save this world that was about to end. At that moment, I would not care about how dangerous it might be. I would just stand up obligingly, with the shock, admiration and expectant eyes behind me, thinking that the girl in school uniform must also be looking at me. She should walk handsomely and freely, and then leave in a showy and cool manner. Because I was so depressed. At that time, I had begun to slowly come into contact with my own mediocrity. Which boy didn't have a dream when he was a child, but slowly he discovered his mediocrity. Maybe most people are like this. When I was a child, my grades were pretty good in the county, but when I came to the city in junior high school, I became obsessed with novels and games. My grades dropped little by little day by day. Looking at it, I knew that I was not working hard. , And I also know that my talent is just an appearance among others, and I am nothing without hard work. But the less I work hard, the more I am addicted to the world of the novel, because in the novel I am the protagonist, I am destiny, and I can save the world, so I really hope that I can become the center of the world for once, even if I sacrifice myself to save the world, but that shining moment made me feel that this is what a hero should be like, it's worth it! So the Dragon Clan met all my expectations at that time. The only thing I was a little unhappy about was that the poor boy Lu Mingfei became a hero and slayed the dragon but was not known to everyone. So in my opinion, this is more of a biography of Lu Mingfei. The Dragon Clan revealed the true hero of dragon slaying to the world. This is not difficult to accept! I finished the first part and couldn't wait to read the next one, but I only had the third part in my hands. I really wanted to read more, but I held back at that time. After waiting for several days, my grandfather went to the bookstore to buy the second part and brought it back to me. I was so happy when I saw it when I came back from school that I opened the plastic package and stayed up all night to read it! I like the cute Xia Mi, and I also like and sympathize with the silly Fenrir. At that moment, no one hoped more than me that there would be no opposition between dragons and humans in this world, and there would be no hybrids. Just letting them live happily or eat potato chips and watch TV would be the greatest happiness and satisfaction. I still remember the description of Lu Mingfei Xia Mi and Chu Zi in the book. The afternoon when Hang was discussing Cuiyulu in the hotel was so warm. I feel that there is such a friend in life, a reliable senior brother and a lovely junior sister. They are by your side, chattering but not noisy, accompanying you to enjoy this carefree afternoon full of sunshine and breeze. The beauty and comfort in the world can't be better than this! But it ended up being a bubble! Do you know how uncomfortable I felt when I saw Fenrir spitting out Xia Mi and calling my sister to play with me? Seeing that, I really hope that I can be omnipotent and travel through the book to rewrite the tragedy, but this is tragedy. What destroys beauty and cannot be changed is tragedy. Watch the third part later? I don't want to say how many tears I shed here. In the next ten years, until today, I have never opened this book for the second time, but I have never forgotten Aso who said she felt okay, Eri who said that Sakura was the best but withered, and the unknown Sakura, the turtle who couldn't find the bay, the confused child who wanted an older brother, and the child as used in the Bible The black sun split the thorns and blocked Deadpool's twilight heroes. There were too many. I didn't dare to open them. I didn't want the tragedy to replay in my mind, but the tragedy was there. He tore the first beautiful things naked and bit by bit, and then said that this was a tragedy. I just hope you remember it more clearly. Haha, I am very grateful to Jiangnan. The name Eri is the best and I still use it to this day. After talking for a long time, I just couldn't help but want to recommend this book. I really like the characters in the book. It has fulfilled so many of my dreams. I have commented before and said that the longer you write, the better. Until now, I firmly feel this way! I have been nagging for a long time, hoping that everyone will understand, and finally hope that every child can be treated gently by the world!

I just want to see sweet dog food. Just get more dog food from Lu Mingfei Ling's little monster and Brother Chu Xia Mi.

Is there a book about Lu Mingfei who returns from a mental hospital and kills the gods, has a split personality (the second personality is Lu Mingze), awakens power and strength, is elegant and crazy, and slays dragons and is awesome? 😃😃

To be honest, why do readers insist on imposing their own will on the protagonist? It's the reader's will that is difficult to deal with, not Lu Mingfei's. The twenty-year-old Lu Mingfei will definitely tell the seventeen-year-old Lu Mingfei not to let his senior sister go into the water in the Three Gorges Reservoir, and not to let his senior sister go to the Abyss of Odin with him, because Lu Mingfei is Lu Mingfei, and he has always liked his senior sister.

Oh my god, come to life! My lover😍

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