After Passing Through the Book, She Turned Out to Be My Childhood Sweetheart in My Previous Life

It's a bit strange, why doesn't the male protagonist dare to reveal his identity? Even if it hurts Qingmei's time travel, just admit it if you are wrong. What else can she do to you? Shouldn't two people hug each other for warmth when they travel together?

It's too harsh and not suitable for men's videos, but it's perfect for women's videos

It can be seen that it is probably the first time for the author to write a book, and the details are a bit stiff. It may also be that I just read a few chapters and did not understand it in depth. But overall it's still ok. Come on, author

Author, you have to be strong 🙂

Okay, the male protagonist is a bit 🐷b, and there are a few poisonous explosive scenes in the beginning. I almost didn't stick with it, but after the negotiation was completed, it was pretty good. I feel that the author is not very suitable for writing plots before falling in love. It would be slightly better if the book started with sweet daily life after falling in love.

I have just read a few chapters and I feel that the writing is pretty good. As long as there are no other weak points, in front of ∪･ω･∪Liang, this routine is harmless (｢･ω･)｢Hey

Here is the list of thanks to Zhuchong readers. Mainly after correcting the typos, I considered that the corrected paragraphs might affect the perception of new readers, so after I revised the text, I would delete the corrected paragraphs. Also after I finished correcting the paragraphs, the paragraphs disappeared, and the replies that I specifically went to find the paragraphs to explain the situation would also be deleted. Thank you for catching insects! ! ! ! ! The list of thanks is all here (if you miss anything, please ask me to add it in time, there should be no, the order is related to the time when the comments are posted in the background, regardless of priority) 🌹Ye Ji 🌹Dhh_ 🌹Anboqinmao [f n=2]Yimu 🌹 No longer feeling overwhelmed, who will take pity on me? 🌹Frace Mufeng 🌹Looking for the body of the soul 🌹One by one, a small thousand and a thousand 🌹Xuanwu Lego

I think it's pretty good, but I don't know why there aren't many readers.

You're holding hands all of a sudden, that's awesome, it's not like this in reality.

I can't think of a copy, why don't readers make up their own minds? In addition, I will give you one of my unique paintings, which I highly recommend to collect.

I want to give it away at the beginning, but is this kind of sand cake worthy of the heroine?

Why do I think the author's words are quite interesting?

There are fewer people. After reading a few chapters, I feel that the male protagonist has some problems with his character and ideology.

I've read a little bit, but it doesn't feel right, it's very awkward, and it's also messy. The narrative and so on, the cause and effect are not clear...

So does the heroine know from the beginning that the hero has also traveled through time? In which chapter did both parties reveal their identities? Otherwise, I would feel a little uncomfortable watching it. It feels like the heroine fell in love with someone else very easily.