Shrouding the Heavens: The Pursuit of the Dao

I really can't stand this writing style, it's all just anecdotes.

Don't you think about the plot when you write it? The complete Taiyin Ancient Sutra says to change it, the Wheel and Sea Scroll is enough.

The ancient scriptures of the Great Emperor are too worthless, right? You can send it at will

Is the Emperor's Scripture so worthless? The author looked at the original work. How many years did it take for Ye Fan to obtain a complete Emperor's Scripture? Many fan fictions are written according to Ye Fan's instructions. They all practice what is called the strongest in the same realm. However, Ye Fan practices like this because Ye Fan has never had a complete Emperor's Scripture. Well, who wants to be incomplete if he has a complete Emperor's Scripture!

The utensil is a lamp. How should I put it? It has a strong sense of being a small family. The author has not yet understood the relationship between the utensil and the Tao. There is a paragraph in the book that says that the Bell and Cauldron Tower is someone else's Tao. It's funny. Your Tao has nothing to do with the shape of the utensil. You can make your utensil into a sanitary napkin and it can still carry your dao. Do you want to get a lantern to take the path of the fire system? If not, how do you attack? And why do most people use the Bell Cauldron Tower? Because it is not only ideal for carrying its own path, but also has many functions and is convenient for fighting. It can be said that even a stick is better than a lamp. Of course, if you take the path of the fire system, a lamp is very suitable.

The author is writing completely randomly, and no matter who he is fighting, it is very laborious to fight, just like he cannot kill the enemy without seriously injuring himself. When you were practicing on location, you said that you were not weaker than the average person in Xiandai. However, even a monk with level 2 or 3 of the Four Extremes was seriously injured. How do you compare your cultivation of the First Life Method and the Heaven-Shading Method! Not to mention others

If you want to write a fanfic, you should at least read the original text carefully. Didn't look at the back. There are two problems with the previous one. One is where did Ye Fan get the Emperor's Heart when he was in the Tomb of the Qing Emperor? It was stuffed in after being captured by Yan Ruyu. The second is to make the Buddhist vessels of Mars into your own vessels. Without the fire from the Fire Realm, how can we melt it to make a lamp? Don't understand

There are not many methods, majoring in one and absorbing others, and when you reach the quasi-emperor, who will not merge into one and create something of your own?

After reading more than a dozen chapters, the author is obviously not familiar with the plot of "Zhe Tian", and the plot develops too fast and the plot is too blunt.

One-life law? He was struck to death by lightning as soon as he started practicing. Do you think that my great world that covers the sky has no tribulation of creation?