Developing the Northwest: I Built a City in the Gobi

I am from Baoding, Hebei Province, and we have nine types of terrain from around the world. Including rivers, swamps, deserts, plains, forests and other places. It is a rare tourist attraction. As early as decades after the founding of New China, our small county responded to the national call. Soil was dug from various mounds. Then fill in the dry riverbed, the ones everyone knows. The river bed is dry and full of silt and sand. It is saline and alkaline land and cannot be planted at all. After filling in 3 meters of loess. The natural environment of our county has been improved through concerted efforts. Now it has been restored to the scenery that an ordinary county town should have. [So don't say anything? Desert greening is a bottomless pit. That's because you haven't invested enough. The hundreds of thousands of people in the county work hard day after day and year after year for decades. This was done directly. Man-made change of heaven and earth, wasteland, dead land. Become fertile land.

Everything in the book is 99% the same as every situation in real life. So it's too urban, and the protagonist doesn't have a golden finger. Ten years ago, if you had the platinum capital of a great master, now you can only get started. The more Internet users watch, the more senior they become. I'm not saying that this book is not good to read, but it is too plain and suitable for middle-aged and elderly people. The types tend to be farming, wilderness survival, business, daily life, urban life, etc. The protagonist is a soul traveler without a golden finger who does not know that his family has gone bankrupt. In his previous life, he was an ancient building restorer in Yanjing and was proficient in carpentry traps and ancient mortise and tenon structures. After time travel, after receiving the memory of his predecessor, he felt regretful about signing up to survive in the wilderness for a hundred days. In the middle period, the protagonist thought this was the family's way of allowing him to escape, but it was not. }. At the beginning, various forces want to prevent the protagonist from winning and taking the first prize of 5 million. The villains include: organizers, live broadcast platforms, foreign capital forces, etc. Friends include: own unit, of course the unit in this world hires the protagonist. It is the same Yanjing Ancient Architecture Institute as the protagonist's original unit. Several architects were hired to restore the mortise and tenon structures of the ancient building complex. The approximate capital is about 100,000 yuan to 1 million yuan per year. The protagonist almost always has a way out to survive. Even if there is no family to support. [Ps summary: This is a novel with an average level of writing. I don't know if what I said is right, author. You can reply to me as a peer. Although I am a bit of a talkative writer. He is also a ghostwriter.

What's going on? Missing? Still employed?

Kuang Mo: juice

I owed a chapter last night. Should I have another chapter today?

Update! No one in the production team would dare to come out with just a few chapters in one day!

No update. Was it cut?

What's going on? They want to kill us!

Qixia Town is probably laid out like this

The ancient building B&B is similar to this

Mingsha specialties, braised mutton, camel meat, salad with green onions

I feel like my taste has changed. When I first started reading this book, I simply liked the feeling that the protagonist built a city bit by bit, and then built some historical buildings or film and television buildings, but recently I wrote about this magic or something like the Corey Conference. It doesn't taste like that anymore. And it's also fantasy! The villain in the middle has a disgusting tone! The person who later came to help H still hasn't dealt with it yet! Why…

After reading Chapter 15, the author seems to be very confident. He has been writing about this bankruptcy issue without any financial knowledge. It is very embarrassing to read. It is still the same sentence. My boss has nothing to do with the money the company owes. If Xu Jiayin really pays back the money, he can pay it back for 100 lifetimes.

The author is not even willing to look up the information, relying entirely on imagination. If only the Gobi Desert were really that easy to solve.

I can't continue writing or editing this! They have already become like this, leading practitioners and they still forcefully pretend to explain! It seems annoying to explain too much (눈_눈)! I don't know if I'm going to continue waiting for the update or not. . . .

When you, the author, write about a field, you should at least understand some basic knowledge in this field. In the first chapter, I saw that you said that the protagonist's brother became the legal person of a company. Tell me, which consortium's son will become a legal person himself? It's weird that such a consortium can exist. When I saw that you wrote about a young man from a consortium becoming a legal person, I knew there was no need to read your book.

Author, when you write about conflict points, can you not write about politics? Can the Directors Guild be bigger than the national television station? Moreover, there are people behind the villain who are constantly helping, so the protagonist has to keep busy. There is no plan, and the protagonist's company has no management team. He has to take care of everything. It feels like the protagonist never stops, and things come one after another, and it is very uncomfortable to rush!

The protagonist still lacks such a heroine

Let's chat with the author. The author's writing style and ideas are really good, but realism requires accumulation. Just relying on imagination is not good. After all, you and I have encountered it in our lives! For example, the last time I was short of money and my company went into debt... I was attacked by my opponent using unconventional means. I was able to collapse the prison and get a loan from a bank with the guarantee of another company. It is safe and can expand interpersonal relationships. How great This time the protagonist is trading with his brother's clothes. Yi, just say "One million ancient costume orders" and don't write those rules and regulations. The more you follow, the more mistakes you make... The author's writing is very good. He recommends designing your own universe. In your own universe, you can write whatever you want. Every little idea can become a highlight! Realistic writers are closely related to their own living environment. Forensic author Qin Ming's own experience, the authors of "Tomb Robbery Notes" and "Ghost Blows Out the Lamp" all live in a metaphysical environment... Hu Ge and Huang Lei in "County Party Committee Courtyard" can't stand it because the disconnect is too serious... As a little black guy, I actually paid to subscribe, and I won't be black anymore! I'm leaving...

The four major conglomerates in a country with a population of 2 billion were attacked by foreign consortiums and ran out of money. They went to other countries to make money 😰!

The author should be from the south, right? The pictures posted have the regional characteristics of a water town. The ancient buildings in the north are not like that at all. They are made of large blocks of blue bricks and bluestones. The northwest Gobi is different. The houses are a little shorter than other places in the north, mainly for wind protection. However, I don't really pursue the author's knowledge of everything when reading. Building a Jiangnan water town in the desert is science fiction.

Our country has not yet developed a method to prevent desertification. Why is it that if it is a different world and we can build on it, wouldn't it be gone if a sandstorm comes?

Your protagonist is missing a plug-in. It is impossible to repair an all-solid wood building in such a short time. When I renovated, I hired carpenters to use modern tools, ready-made boards, nails, wood glue, ribs and floors. Only the wood needed to be modified using machines. We set the total labor price first, and food and accommodation were not included. As a result, one master worked with two apprentices for more than a month. The amount of carpentry work I did during the renovation was certainly not as large as the one you described in Da Mo Pavilion.

I have seen a similar one before, it seems to be called Wilderness Survival and built a super first line.

It's getting worse and worse. I've written so many chapters to set up a forum and haven't even started yet. Yesterday, the three chapters were completely empty, with some unnecessary online messages interspersed repeatedly. If you don't write on the forum today, go to something else to vent your anger.

Da Mo Pavilion is similar to this

Shen Nong tastes a hundred herbs The theme content of this book is not bad, it is about social experience, companies, operations, etc. All the things that require experience must not be brainstorming. Block these and the rest is still okay You can pass the time and read it.

The upcoming Tengwang Pavilion

I thought I was a eunuch, but suddenly I remembered it again today, and I came over to read the book. Wow.

The early part of this book was really good, but it's a pity