The Wild West: Lord of the Greatest Ranch Beneath the Stars

How could a rancher with only more than 2,000 acres of land influence the Montana gubernatorial election, and not have much cash? I don't know how the author plans to write it. If it doesn't come back, the protagonist should use less cheats in the future.

The first few chapters gave me a feeling of being ready to develop into fantasy, and then it became lyrical, always mentioning "Don't go gentle into that good night." Are you planning to write about literary youth? Then immediately after the plug-in comes on, the protagonist's grandfather immediately goes through a flashback and expresses his emotions. How many people have to be persuaded to retreat in this start? Can't you be more straightforward?

Talking too much about other things, the theme is not clearly stated, and the online articles should not be too literary. There is no need for the first six chapters, it will only make you lose most of your readers

I thought it was about ranching, but after reading it, I didn't know what it was about. It was all illogical and disorderly. You should write about Africa and not the United States. A country with the most sound laws was written as more chaotic than Africa.

My personal suggestion is that if the author wants to write about ranching, the ranch is in trouble in the early stage. It has already been set up. The state government and capital cooperate to build an airport and develop tourism. It is okay to write some plots about Yellowstone. It just allows the protagonist to gain a foothold by solving this problem, but don't make the social background too messy. I really don't know how messy Montana is, but you are going to post it. To develop a ranch, you are not going to fight in the western United States, and it is clearly stated that it has the support of the governor. (No one has asked about this, and I personally feel it is a poisonous point.) As long as your ranch can generate a lot of tax revenue and radiate to surrounding industries, creating more job opportunities, (don't write it into a business war novel 😅), the state government should have no reason to Maybe I am thinking too little, but the purpose of the cooperation between the state government and capital is to create tax revenue and employment, and then let voters continue to vote for relevant officials so that they can continue to be re-elected to make money and accumulate political capital. The main reason is that the background of the story is 16 years ago, and it is written that the protagonist wants to take his sister to the ranch. If he works all day long, her sister It's so tiring, so after I got my footing and initially stabilized the ranch, I felt it was better to put the theme on the ranch itself. If you could cultivate a breed of cattle yourself, and take down American beef, Wagyu beef, Australian beef, etc., And formulate a unified beef grading system, that would be the most awesome. It doesn't mean that no one dares to mess with you. How big your land is, your ranch will be the greatest.

2016, Did I read the wrong time?

When I read this book, I felt that something was very familiar. It turned out that it was borrowed from Yellowstone Ranch.

I've read a few chapters but I still don't understand. Ranch story? Business war writing? Replacement of American TV series?